Essay 3 Final Draft 2nd
Essay 3 Final Draft 2nd
Essay 3 Final Draft 2nd
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Andruw Garcia
ENGL 1302-
Trisha Briones
20 March 2024
Writing itself has been proven to display an undeniable amount of significance in our
world. Communication is a vital factor of life that allows a person to live with ease and pleasure.
It is through methods of communication that writing has been able to help alleviate the mental
instability of troubled individuals. Various studies have emphasized a formidable claim that
proves writing as a reliable form of preventing mental illnesses from developing further. It
expands through a vast range of psychological issues and can be used as a primary source of
gathering information that can assist in research to help those trying to overcome these
misfortunes. A variety of studies have displayed the benefits of positive writing interventions
(PWIs) and continue to provide claims validated by the results gathered from the interventions.
The interventions are not limited to just mental illnesses, but also personal or internal conflicts as
well. Those struggling with less extreme issues in their day-to-day lives or individuals who
struggle to motivate themselves into progressing with their lives. Regardless, PWIs can be
substituted as a universal method to dwindle or cure the mental roadblocks for those who are
troubled with internal issues and provides a therapeutic practice of guiding those with more
extreme psychological illnesses. Nonetheless, the results present a valid case proving the
hypothesis that many researchers share, being whether PWIs are effective enough to alter the
experiment. All with similar goals aimed at separate target audiences. Some appealed to those
individuals who live with internal struggles and those with more serious mental sicknesses such
as schizophrenia. As well as ranging between two groups; one being adolescents, the other being
adults. Based on the results that were presented throughout each article, it is clear that the
interventions held, managed to create a significant impact on those who participated. Every
experiment was conducted with the same manner, that being participants separating between two
groups. Those who were required to complete the interventions and those who were not. The
groups are present so that the accuracy of the results is more certain.
Schizophrenia
To start off, the first article that will be reviewed will be that of patients who suffer from
a more extreme mental obstacle. Schizophrenia has been considered to be one of the most
dangerous illnesses not only pertaining to the victim, but the individuals who come into contact
with the victim. Its history is no doubt full of many of the darker aspects of life. That being said,
attempting to overcome such a mishap will be almost impossible to do so. However, there have
been methods of alleviating those suffer from it. “These findings suggest that a resource-oriented
positive writing intervention has potential for stabilizing mental health after psychiatric discharge
programs” (Suhl 1568). Although the results might not have specified the significance in change
between each patient, it reviews the potential for the experiment to succeed properly. In other
words, within time throughout each intervention with patients who are in psychiatric care or have
been released from it, there is a potential to possibly overcome and cure them. Even though the
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results were not as vibrant as other studies held, the chance is still there to prove that PWIs do
Grief
The next topic that will be reviewed is that of grief or bereavement. The term
bereavement can be applied to those individuals who have suffered from the loss of a close
friend, which coincides with those people who suffer from grief. This study was based on
whether PWIs provide an effective method to help guide those bereaved individuals throughout
their grieving phase. “The current pilot study compared the effects of brief positive expressive
writing intervention for enhancing positive affect among bereaved adults” (Rublin 552). As
mentioned above, research prior to the experiment was able to provide a reasonable hypothesis
that questions whether a method as simple as writing will be able to help those struggling with
grief.
The procedure that was carried out through this experiment was no different than that of
the other studies. This particular study can be compared to that of the patients that were
previously overseen. Grief is something that can take a massive toll on a person’s life, it can act
as a potential gateway into several other mental illnesses. It mainly depends on the level of
trauma that occurs to those who happen to stumble across it. All in all, bereavement is not to be
taken lightly due to the potential of the difficult circumstances it can place on an individual. The
grieving participants were required to write about positive memories that they shared with their
lost acquittances.
Based on the results that were gathered, PWIs have managed to maintain a positive
impact on the participants that completed the interventions. “Greater positive emotion word use
mediated positive affect among those in the positive writing condition” (Rublin 560). Despite the
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results seeming rather vague, it is essential to not overlook the fact that bereavement is a tough
dilemma to overcome; nonetheless, even the slightest positive impact may pave a route towards a
Proceeding to the next articles, arises the topic of lower levels of self confidence among
adolescents. It is no surprise that adolescents within society have the tendency to be far more
vulnerable than more mature adults in our society. Not only do many adolescents undergo shifts
in attitude and several mood swings, but they must live up to the expectations that may be placed
upon them. To elaborate, many youthful individuals must maintain a stable grade point average
(GPA) in terms of their education. It is apparent that not every teenager has the same abilities as
others do in terms of exceeding in classes. Many of them are required to live up to these
expectations due to their parents, and on top of managing their grades, some struggle to fit in or
to maintain their own social status. Therefore, it is very easy for them to fall under more stressful
With these facts being stated, one can arrive at a potential solution that can resolve these
psychological complications. That solution being the resource diary known as positive writing
interventions. “For these reasons, a resource diary has been developed as a four-week positive
writing intervention. The aims of this intervention were to enhance well-being, to promote
adolescence” (Reiter 104). As stated above, with all the evidence being stated prior to the
conducted study, it seems as if PWIs provide an optimal opportunity to help aid youthful
individuals with their mental complications. “At the post-test, the positive writing group showed
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a lower dysphoric mood, fewer worries and less rumination in comparison with the neutral
writing group” (Reiter 108). To conclude this segment of adolescents, PWIs provide a prominent
Like those adolescents with low self-esteem, comes the topic of adults who deal with low
levels of life satisfaction. Once again, it does not come to the surprise of many people that adults
also manage to deal with mental issues in their daily lives. The reason for that being the fact that
many if not all adults deal with the stress of working and monitoring stability in their financial
endeavors. Many must make several sacrifices in their lives to meet their essential needs. This
may be devoting themselves solely to their jobs and having to lower their time spent with either
family members or friends. Which eventually leads to them resenting themselves and lowering
Nonetheless, a simple solution that can be used as therapy for them would be the positive
writing interventions. With the results being just as prominent as the adolescents, adults have
also shown a significant improvement in their self-confidence and life satisfaction. Which proves
that PWIs can create a change in peoples’ lives regardless of how serious their mental health
Conclusion
successful concept that can help save the lives of many individuals. From former psychiatric
patients to adolescents and adults struggling with internal conflicts, the interventions that were
conducted were not only capable of preventing their mental conditions from worsening but can
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also cure the mental state of many people. As a result, the art of writing as a method for therapy
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