Outline Group Essay - Group 6
Outline Group Essay - Group 6
Outline Group Essay - Group 6
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Topic: Large businesses have big budgets for marketing and promotion, and as a result customers
gravitate towards their products. Examine the problems this causes and offer solutions.
I. Introduction:
Background/General Statement: Nowadays, numerous massive companies with substantial
budgets get customers excited about their products by using these promotion activities and
advertising strategies.
Thesis statement + outline: In this paper, we will evaluate the problems caused by multinational
firms that have enormous expenditures for marketing and promotion. There are four main
reasons/problems for this: its negative effect on product diversity, which innovation is stifled; its
detrimental impact leads to loss of customer trust and its harmful to the economy due to the
inequality between big and small businesses. Additionally, this essay will provide four solutions to
the four problems mentioned above.
II. Body:
A. Problems Caused by Large Businesses' Marketing Budgets:
1. Market dominance
- Supporting idea:
+ Reduce the diversity of products and services
+ Competitiveness reduction & high price for consumers
+ Raise inflation rate
- Example and evidence:
2. Stifled Innovation:
- Supporting idea: Decrease customer choices & marketing contents
- Example and evidence: most small enterprises or young entrepreneurs do not have enough
ability to compete with long-standing and well-known companies since they have an advantage in
promoting products => As a result, young entrepreneurs will be eliminated along with their ideas
and new products. Leading to reduced choices for consumers.
3. Promote a standardized image across industries & Manipulate the customer to buy products.
- Supporting idea: Create negative impacts for consumers
- Example and evidence:
4. Economic inequality
- Supporting idea: Since big companies gain more profits, small businesses may face financial
struggle
- Example and evidence:
4. Encouraging the development of niche markets can provide opportunities for diverse products
to thrive and Consumer Choice Initiatives (The weekend market)
III. Conclusion
- Summary of the problems caused by the marketing dominance of large businesses and the
proposed solutions.