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Living in a modern world, instead of having a healthy life, it is strange that a
number of children follow unhealthy lifestyles. This leads to some excessive
disadvantages for them, but unfortunately the primary contributors are from schools and families. I strongly advocate that parents, schools and other group share the responsibility to solve the problem. Nowadays, children are easily influenced by bad habits that contribute to unbalanced lifestyles. Because of the rapid advancements in technology, children use smartphones hours and hours on social networks. For instances, they usually ready to do entertaining activities such as chatting with friends, watching films rather than physical activities and sleep. Moreover, children often lack essential skills, such as cooking or communication. For this reason, they tend to consume fast food which are often unhygienic, sugary and high levels of oil, contributing to health issues like diabetes, obesity. Given these issues, both parents and schools are responsible for tackle the issue. Firstly, due to parents’ busy schedule, they struggle to manage their children’s screen time and the content they exposed to, particularly violent or age- inappropriate materials. Parents should monitor the kid’s habits, ensuring that screen time is limited or setting clear rules to control their children easier. Not only that, nutrition is also a concerning problem. Parents have an important role in their children’s growth, it is ideal to ensure the kids are eating variety of fruits, vegetables. They could achieve this by learning about proper nutrition through books, expert advice, or online resources. Schools also have a crucial role in promoting healthy lifestyles. Schools should recommend heathier meal options by cooking the dishes rich in fiber, vitamins and protein. In addition, schools can encourage students to participate in physical exercises, organize outdoor activities. By creating a good environment, it is likely to enhance children’s well-being and maintain friendships among students. On the other hand, government ought to take significant action. Governments could implement regulation that curbs children’s exposure to harmful media. For instances, the Ministry of Health could control the quantity of food sold near school premises and introduce policies about food. Simultaneously, the Ministry of Information and Communication can enforce stricter guidelines to protect children from toxic social media. In conclusion, while parents and schools are the primary influences on children’s health, governments also contribute to this status. Through collaboration between three factors, children can develop heathier habits that will benefit them in the long term.
Ielts Writing Task 2: More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. What are the most serious problems associated with obesity and what solutions can you suggest?
In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should have the responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Sample mẫu