Group 1
Group 1
Group 1
Colegio De Muntinlupa
Civil Engineering Department
INTRODUCTION
This the problem with Tayfur research, it offers valuable insights into advanced
optimization methods but he do not directly researched what the countries really use
in the real world. But I really think because the research was conducted in his country
which is California which offers advanced water treatment facilities and method. What
I really wonder is how the third world country like Philippines make their facilities and
how do they adapt in the latest available technology in the world. For example,
Maynilad, it frustrates me because the water bill keeps being updated more like
become more expensive month by month. But alone the pipes of Maynilad is outdated
they never really fixed the pipes.
“In Maynilad page when I checked it, it says that their water passed the
international standards but why do we have constant water shortage here in
Manila. When reading about more topic related to this critique paper it, what
captures me is the case from 2009 when the DENR files a court case to
Maynilad liable for noncompliance of Section 8 of Clean Water Act where
Maynilad fails to provide its customer.
According to DENR On April 8 and 21, 2009, the Regional Directors of the DENR
EMB-National Capital Region (NCR) and Region VI-A (RVI-A) also instituted their
complaints before the PAB. They similarly charged MWSS, Maynilad, and Manila
Water with failure to (a) provide, install, or maintain sufficient WWTFs
compliant with the standards and objectives of the Clean Water Act; (b)
construct Sewage Treatment Plants and Sewerage Treatment Facilities (STPs &
STFs) for treatment of household wastes; and, ultimately, (c) perform its
obligations under the said law. According to the EMB-NCR and EMB-RVI-A, the
test results of water samples taken from Manila Bay showed that the quality of
water near the area has worsened without improvement in all parameters’’
Comparative Analysis: The article critically examines the strengths and weaknesses
surrounding many MOMs, explicitly explaining the advantages and disadvantages
inherent to each. It essentially gets readers to learn from the dissected distinct
characteristics of different techniques, especially GA and PSO, in which the study
helps indicate where each is most effective. Tayfur clearly evaluates the performance
of various optimization methods, noting particularly how each algorithm addresses
complex tasks related to managing water resources. For example, while discussing
Differential Evolution (DE) in multireservoir systems, Tayfur that:
Conclusion
My conclusion about this paper is good. Now I have the conclusion I will now
proceed to my agenda. Maynilad is a complete joke to me . Based on what I
researched Maynilad is not only the biggest privatization in the Philippines but also in
the world? This allowed Maynilad a two different foreign-backed companies not only
reduced the cost of water to the consumer by an amazing 50 percent and 75 percent
(roughly), it also offered a number of politically attractive promises. Yes you heard
it right politically. The Maynilad offered several appealing promised. It required private
company to invest over 7 billion it not In pesos make a guess. You heard it right sir 7
BILLION US DOLLARDS. It required the private companies to invest over 7 billion
dollars into water utility over the LIFE OF THE CONTRACTS. These companies also
took on the Metropolitan Water and Sewerage Services (MWSS) $880 million debt
easing a significant financial burden to the government. What is funny about this, is
that they gaslighted the government into thinking the arrangement is considered
better and ensured that the their company is better than the previous privatizations
in other country because it have clearer rules to protect consumers and ensured that
the private operators would work efficiently. Even the unions in the MWSS had a few
complaints but it got approved. It like a leech (linta) in the Philippine water system.
The good news is the privatization of the MWSS. It was a major achievement in Ramos
Administration. It not only relieved the government of a large financial drain caused
by Maynilad but also promised service at a lower cost, the process went smoothly
with a little opposition.
Yet, barely just three years later the deal with the 25 year deal with Maynilad and the
Government struggles. Maynilad suffered big financial straits. They just have the face
to threat the government to walk out of the 25 year contract due to massive daily
losses from the July 1997 Asian financial crisis which devalued peso. This is the
problem with the foreign country they just do not have the care because what they
really think about is money. The private company asked the regulatory office for a 70
percent increase in tariffs to help fix its situation. It wanted to change the 25 year
agreement to gain more discounts ( in the form of lower interest rates for the filipino
consumers) before the mandatory rate goes up. This meant they have to alter the
originals rules of the agreement. Maynilad financial issues and Manila water legal
challenge raised questions about the world largest privatization effort. What is funny
is we have the world largest privatization, but we are a third world country. See how
this foreign company just sweep its way to Philippine money. What once seemed like
a successful solution was now in doubt. It turned out that the process was not a win-
win solution it had been portrayed rather than a mess. I just see that these foreign
company just made unrealistic bids just to win the contract, hoping they could just
change the rules in their favor due to weak regulations in the country and
government historical willingness to cater private interest. The companies confidence
in making unrealistic bids was like supported by the fact the two wealthiest families in
the Philippines is in their back. Maynilad was owned by the Lopez family. Manila Water
was mainly owned by the Ayala family. These companies seemed to prioritize winning
the bid over addressing the issues later. As a result it failed.
Before I end this critique paper I want to highlight what are the mess Maynilad and its
foreign sectors have done in manila waters system and the Filipino budget.
They offered high quality services at low prices but later they tried to renegotiate the
contracts, lowering the quality, and they take advantage of poorly defined regulatory
rules for price adjustment. Maynilad struggles with cost control and revenue
generation were a major cause of its credit and cash flow issues. It just had to blame
the Asian Financial Crisis for its problems, but In reality, it just partially contributed to
issues. Imagine blaming the devaluation of peso, while your system is cheap and had
many rooms for error and don’t forget a high budget. The crisis served as their major
excuse for their low efficiency. Maynilad is trying to escape its original contract terms
which I have mentioned earlier, and it caused long term damage to the credibility of
their process.
I.Introduction
The work by Tayfur Is very useful for the researchers as well as professionals dealing
with water resources because it contains a rather holistic treatment of the different
optimization techniques and their applications. In the light of increasingly complex
problems involved in water resources, familiarity with these methods has the
potential to enable decision makers to formulate more sustainable and effective
management strategies for resources. As this book presents MOMs in the
contemporary context of environmental concerns, it also continues to serve as a
reference source and
II. Body
The paper initiates the argument by defining the critical role of mathematical models
in
water resources management, along with the relatively very recent rise of MOMs.
Tayfur enlightens the reader about the historical background and development of
these optimization techniques, against which understanding will be developed on the
importance of MOMs in contemporary challenges in water resource management. A
multitude of examples that can be used to demonstrate the practical effectiveness of
the methods fill the body of the paper, along with extensive illustrations of the
background, theory, and application of each MOM. Thus, the reader is able to use the
approach in which he can relate the method to its specific applicability to water
management problems, such as optimization of reservoir operations or management
of irrigation systems.
Strengths of MOMs are well articulated throughout the paper and are even put well,
especially in terms of dealing with complex, nonlinear, and dynamic systems often
met in water resources management. For example, Differential Evolution is
commended for its simplicity and effectiveness in the continuous optimization
problems, while Ant Colony Optimization did reasonably well in discrete optimization
scenarios. Such broad coverage of all seven of these highly applied MOMs helps the
reader appreciate the subtle difference between each method, thereby generally
making them able to better understand where they will be applicable in real life.
The strength of the paper, however also reveals a significant gap In the critical level
of evaluation of each method’s strengths and weaknesses. While it does point out
limitations, for the most part this discussion tends to focus on the advantages of each
MOM without attaining a balanced view of challenges they might present. For
instance, while Genetic Algorithms are robust and flexible, they are also
computational-intensive in some instances and may fail in the event of local optima.
A better version of this paper would be in offering an Important discussion on how the
problem with each MOM is that it is difficult and hence allows readers to recognize the
full range of considerations that comes into play when choosing an optimization
method for specific applications.
successful as well as challenging for each MOM would add a lot more depth to the
discussion and would make it more accessible to practice for readers.
There is also a need for further studies on the interplay of optimization method. More
specified hybrid methodologies that combine beneficial elements from more than one
MOM can be developed in further detail. For example, hybridization between Genetic
Algorithms with Particle Swarm Optimization may be useful to improve the speed as
well as better solution quality. This will thus lead to more robust solutions for complex
water resource problems. Discussions on such synergies would add value to the MOM
discourse, and innovation on approaches toward mitigating water resource challenges
will be very important.
While informative, the body of work by Tayfur inspires further investigation into MOM
capabilities. Framing the discussion in terms of specific applications and
demonstrating that these methods really are versatile, the paper provides the
foundation for further research in the subject. As water resources become
increasingly challenging, so must the strategies that go into meeting those
challenges. This has led to a need for a strong basis of optimization methods and
those potential applications.
III. Conclusion
This review is aimed at outlining the present modern optimization methods and the
horizon of their application usage in water resources management. With the coverage
of seven MOMs included, the paper offers a comprehensive overview of MOMs and, in
all its elements, is a real reservoir of knowledge for researchers and practitioners
working in the area. However, the best missed opportunity of this paper is not to
critically evaluate the strengths and weaknesses of these methods which may give a
more robust view of where each of these methods stands for particular applications.
IV. Recommendations:
-Critical evaluation of the strength and weakness of each MOM.
-Elaborate on the tradeoffs for the MOMs one would choose for an application, it may
discuss the pros and cons of a choice of GA over DE for a particular problem of water
resource.
-Include an analysis of emerging trends in MOMs, such as; methods of hybrid
techniques in which different algorithms are mixed, or the application of techniques of
machine learning for finding improvements in the performance of MOMs.
V. References:
Tayfur G. (2017). Modern Optimization Methods in Water Resources Planning.
Engineering and Management. Water Resour Manage https://doi.org/10.1007/s11269-
017-1694-6 31, 3205- 3233. Journal-article.
BALDERAMA, ERWIN
Modern Optimization Methods in Water Resources Planning, Engineering and Management
By: Gokmen Tayfur
Critique Paper
I. Introduction
The aim of the study is to present a complete review of the modern
optimization techniques (MOMs) that have been developed over the last
thirty years, with a focus on planning, engineering, and management of
water resources. Important algorithms including Harmony Search, Differential
Evolution, Ant Colony Optimization, Particle Swarm Optimization, Genetic
Programming, and Gene Expression Programming are highlighted. The
mathematical foundations of each algorithm are presented in order to help
readers comprehend how they function and what makes them special.
II. Body
III. Conclusion
In conclusion, the paper provides a thorough review of modern
optimization methods, particularly focusing on their applications in managing
water resources, engineering, and planning. It explores a variety of real-world
issues like sediment transport, groundwater management, irrigation, flood
control, and water quality evaluation that call for these optimization
strategies. Through an assessment of the advantages and disadvantages of
each algorithm, the research provides insightful information on how well they
work to address certain problems in the field of water resource management.
This thorough approach not only emphasizes how applicable these
techniques are, but also how they have the potential to significantly
contribute to solving urgent environmental issues.
The paper's ability to clearly describe complicated algorithms by
breaking their basic concepts and operational procedures into understandable
steps is one of its strongest points. The paper's main flaw, though, is the
absence of useful case studies that show how these algorithms function in
actual scenarios. This lack limits the paper's overall influence by making it
difficult to evaluate its effectiveness outside of theoretical situations. Giving
specific instances of these algorithms' effective applications would
significantly increase the study's applicability and aid in closing the
knowledge gap.
Recommendation:
● Incorporate Real-World Case Studies
● Address Limitations and Challenges
References:
journal-article. https://doi.org/10.1007/s11269-017-1694-6
CIEN-1102 CE1E
I. Introduction
This paper gives a great background on MOMs including techniques and applications. The paper
gives examples about previous studies and models. The paper could provide more detailed
explanations or examples like real world applications that could help both audiences familiar
and unfamiliar with the topic understand better, taking a deeper dive into the subject and
being able to utilize it more thoroughly.
II. Body
Aside from PSO, there is also Ant Colony (AC) which was inspired by ants that
are complexly blind manage to establish a path between their nest and food source.
Blindly following a path, trails are made by studies from previous works, mistakes
failures, lesson that were done by the past researchers, building a more defined trail
towards a desired path or answer. The strength of this paper is the that by having an
easy basis, this allows readers
to understand the study better. This paper utilizes real world scenarios like
borrowing patterns made by animals to make complex problems and solutions
appear easier.
The paper gives a great insight on the advantages on each of the MOMs, especially in dealing
with complex scenarios often met in water resources management, problems were much
simpler than they were thought out to be. The study gives readers a better idea of
how much a framework would help in making better solutions. However, this study focuses
more on advantages rather on the conflicts and weaknesses of each method. A better paper
would also suggest which optimization technique would be better to use for certain
scenarios.
III. Conclusion
The paper does a great job on breaking down concepts and procedures into
“layman’s terms”. However, it lacks the ability to properly incorporate certain
methods onto other problems. This paper primarily focuses on Tayfur’s experience
with these methods rather than others, lacking a better overview on its
disadvantages depending on the reader and the problem.
The study highlights the proper application of these techniques onto water resource
management giving a better foundation for the researches. The paper properly emphasizes
how each MOM can help with a complex problem and explains each scenario properly using a
simple scenario. Giving more specific problems, evaluation about its advantages and
disadvantages and ways around it, and more studies that have used the method could help
make this a better paper.
IV. Recommendations
Seeing that I am new to such methods, the detail Tayfur went into in this paper was
interesting and very informative for me. He breaks everything down into easy-to-follow
explanations so you can understand the more complex ideas. One way that the paper
could be made better is by providing something more tangible, say real-life examples or
case studies. He explains how the different methods work and gives an example of each in
real applications would have been great to see their effect firsthand. In general, it
sets a useful scene of the modern optimization techniques in water-started resources
management.
Modern optimization methods are necessary for solving complex water resource
management problems, according to Tayfur. He talks about how we can use Genetic
Algorithms to optimize reservoir operations using the principles of natural selection.
And he cites examples of these algorithms learning when conditions change, which
gets better decision-making. The author cites studies that say the use of these
optimization methods has resulted in savings and better irrigation system
management. While he could
supplement his points by incorporating some statistics or information from those
studies, to better support the evidence. Demonstrating a certain percentage
increase in efficiency, or the reduction of costs would be better support for his
claims.
Whether a scientist or engineer will manage to find useful Tayfur's paper is another
question, it would not hurt if there were less complicated examples. Real-life case
studies would help readers envision how these approaches could be used to
address specific
problems in managing water. It would both strengthen his case and would give us a
better understanding of if these methods actually work, by including more data or
results from
those original studies. Tayfur can also help the uninitiated to grasp what lies ahead in
optimization methods if he includes a section on possible future developments in this
very fast-developing field. Tayfur has included some good content and writes clearly
which is positive but having more examples, and practical insights would have
made this paper
even better and a bit more interesting to read.
DALISAY, JASPHER
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