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    Muet Writing Sesi 1 - 2024 - Outline

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    Task 2 – Extended Writing

    Question

    PARAGRAPH 1
    INTRODUCTION PARAGRAPH
    General Statement:
    Education on mental health is essential in the 21st century as the world
    continues to face unprecedented challenges that are impacting the
    mental well-being of individuals. With the increasing prevalence of mental
    health disorders and the stigma associated with seeking help, it has
    become paramount to educate people about mental health in order to
    promote understanding, empathy, and effective management of mental
    health issues.

    Thesis Statement:
    There are several reasons why education in mental health is necessary in
    the 21st century which are the prevalence of mental health disorders, to
    combat the stigma associated with seeking help for mental health issues
    and the impact of modern challenges on mental well-being.

    PARAGRAPH 2
    Body Paragraph 1:
    Main Point 1: One of the key reasons education on mental health is
    necessary in the 21st century is the prevalence of mental health
    disorders.
    Elaboration:
    According to the World Health Organization, mental health disorders affect
    one in four people globally. This staggering statistic illustrates the urgency
    of educating people about mental health as a means to address and
    reduce the prevalence of these disorders.
    Example:
    By providing individuals with information about mental health, they can
    learn to recognize symptoms, understand their own mental health, and
    seek help when needed.
    Linking sentence: This can ultimately lead to early intervention and better
    management of mental health issues.

    PARAGRAPH 3
    Body Paragraph 2:
    Main Point 2: Furthermore, education on mental health is necessary to
    combat the stigma associated with seeking help for mental health issues.
    Elaboration:
    In many societies, there is still a prevalent stigma surrounding mental
    health, which can prevent individuals from seeking the help and support
    they need
    Example:
    By educating people about mental health, we can help to break down
    these stigmas and create an environment that is supportive and
    understanding of individuals who are struggling with mental health issues.
    Linking sentence: This can ultimately lead to more open and honest
    conversations about mental health, and encourage individuals to seek
    help without fear of judgment or discrimination.

    PARAGRAPH 4
    Body Paragraph 3:
    Main Point 3: In addition, education on mental health is crucial in the 21st
    century due to the impact of modern challenges on mental well-being.
    Elaboration:
    The fast-paced and competitive nature of modern life, combined with the
    pressures of social media, economic uncertainty, and global crises, have
    all contributed to a rise in stress, anxiety, and depression.

    Example:
    By providing education on mental health, individuals can learn coping
    mechanisms, stress management techniques, and resilience skills when
    faced with any challenges.
    Linking sentence: Through the right education on mental health, it can
    help individuals to navigate these challenges and maintain their mental
    well-being.

    CONCLUSION PARAGRAPH
    In conclusion, there are several reasons why education in mental health is
    necessary in the 21st century which are the increasing prevalence of
    mental health disorders, the need to combat stigma and the impact of
    modern challenges on mental well-being. Thus, education on mental
    health is crucial in the 21st century. By educating people about mental
    health, we can create a more understanding and supportive society that
    values mental health and prioritizes the well-being of all individuals.

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