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NGUYEN H.

HUY 1

WRITING TASK 1
You should spend around 20 minutes on this task.
The pie charts below show the percentage of students in one
adult education center taking a various course offered in 1985
and this year.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main
features, and comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

IELTS Speaking Examination


WRITING TASK 2
You should spend around 40 minutes on this task.
For many people, the [only] reason they work hard is to earn
more money.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
Write at least 250 words.
Cấu trúc một bài Task 1:
Introduction: viết lại yêu cầu của đề một cách ngắn gọn, tránh sai sót không
cần thiết.
NGUYEN H. HUY 2

Overview: 7/9 – main trends or main differences – xu hướng chung và khác


biệt chung.
Main: phân tích các điểm quan trọng – không cần cover hết toàn bộ thông
tin các bạn nhé.
Hướng dẫn viết overview:
- Không đưa thông tin chi tiết vào
- Bám sát vào việc mô tả các xu hướng chung hoặc khác biệt chung.
Overall, while modern language courses were the most popular choices in the
past, IT classes have overtaken this position. Also, two prominent courses in
1985, namely local history and music appreciation, are no longer available
for registration.
Thân bài:
NGUYEN H. HUY 3

Mô tả lớn nhất trước (ưu tiên gom lại cho gọn), sau đó tả từ lớn tới bé.
The fitness and dance courses and the modern language classes were chosen
by the largest proportions of all learners at this adult education center, with
22% and 24%, respectively. Local history, art, and cookery were selected by
a smaller proportion of learners, ranging from 14% to 17%. Nevertheless,
only a fraction of them registered for the music appreciation course,
accounting for just 8%.

Đối với khổ 2, chúng ta làm tương tự, nhưng sẽ bao gồm luôn cả các thay đổi
(trend) từ quá khứ tới nay.
Although IT classes were not available for registration in 1985 and only
emerged in this year’s chart, they are the most popular courses, with about
27% of all learners signing up for them. The proportions of people choosing
the fitness/dance and cookery courses remained stable or increased
slightly, reaching 22% and 19%, respectively. In contrast, the popularity of
art and modern language courses decreased over this period, as they were
signed up for by only around 15% to 17% of all participants.
NGUYEN H. HUY 4

WRITING TASK 2
You should spend around 40 minutes on this task.
For many people, the only reason they work hard is to earn more
money.
To what extent do you agree or disagree

Mở bài: Viết lại ngắn gọn, sử dũng kỹ thuật nominalization để đẩy verb ra
làm chủ ngữ.
For many individuals, earning a lot of money through working hard has
become their exclusive goal of them. Personally, I partly/totally
agree/disagree with this way of thinking due to some reasons that are
explained in this essay.
Thân bài, đối với bài này, chọn cách viết đồng ý một phần.
Khổ 1 – đồng ý – họ đi làm chỉ vì tiền thôi.
Nếu như mình brainstorm, sẽ dễ dàng có những quan điểm như sau:
- Vì cs khó khăn
- Đáp ứng nhu cầu cuộc sống
- Mưu sinh
- Trách nhiệm gia đình
Và điểm chung của tất cả những ideas trên đều xoay quanh một câu hỏi:
Hiện tại, vai trò của tiền bạc tăng cao hay giảm đi so với quá khứ?
Như vậy: Framework để mình tư duy ra idea sẽ như sau:
[money nó nằm giữ chìa khóa tới những cái cực kì quan trọng của con người,
chính vì vậy, họ buộc lòng phải focus vào nó thay vì lý tưởng hoặc đam mê].
On the one hand, there are several reasons why many people focus solely on
earning money through work rather than pursuing other important goals.
In this day and age, due to the loss of currency value induced by stagnant
inflation, the role of a solid financial foundation has become more
important than ever. Without it, access to education and healthcare would
be limited, trapping people in poverty and degrading their quality of life.
NGUYEN H. HUY 5

This surging importance of money has effectively explained why modern


workers intensely focus on money.
Hoặc có thể đơn giản hơn như sau:
In this day and age, inflation devalues our currency, making money
increasingly important as it is essential for accessing education and
healthcare. Without solid financial resources, people would have limited
access to these necessities, affecting their ability to sustain themselves and
their families. This is why working hard to earn money has become the most
important goal for many modern individuals.
Hoặc:
In today's world, money has become increasingly important because access
to vital services like education and healthcare has become more expensive
and financially inaccessible to many people. Consequently, to sustain
themselves and their families, individuals must focus intensely on earning
money by actively engaging in their professional careers.
Khổ 2 – vẫn có những người đi làm vì cái khác – social interaction /
recognition/ ambition/ passion /training bản thân
Bước 1: đưa ra các thông tin chi tiết về nhu cầu cơ bản về tâm lý của con
người, rồi mới kết nối các nhu cầu cơ bản đó với hành vi – tại sao người ta
muốn đi làm bất kể có vì tiền hay không?
Research has shown that humans are social creatures who actively seek
interactions with others and desire external recognition and validation.
Without these, individuals' mental health may be at increased risk of
deterioration. This is why many people choose to work: professional
environments consistently provide opportunities for interaction and
recognition, thereby fulfilling these psychological needs.
Kết bài: tóm tắt lại nội dung đã nói, trả lời lại ngắn gọn.
In conclusion, although there are mixed opinions on the real motives behind
people’s work objectives, I believe that while many focus on the financial
aspects of their careers, others pursue their work to fulfill different needs.
Ultimately, recognizing these diverse motivations can lead to more
supportive and fulfilling work environments for everyone.

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