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FIRST LANGUAGE ENGLISH 0500/11

Paper 1 Reading May/June 2023
MARK SCHEME
Maximum Mark: 80
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Generic Marking Principles
These general marking principles must be applied by all examiners when marking candidate answers.
They should be applied alongside the specific content of the mark scheme or generic level descriptors
for a question. Each question paper and mark scheme will also comply with these marking principles.
GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 1:
Marks must be awarded in line with:
 the specific content of the mark scheme or the generic level descriptors for the question
 the specific skills defined in the mark scheme or in the generic level descriptors for the question
 the standard of response required by a candidate as exemplified by the standardisation scripts.
Marks awarded are always whole marks (not half marks, or other fractions).
Marks must be awarded positively:
 marks are awarded for correct/valid answers, as defined in the mark scheme. However, credit
is given for valid answers which go beyond the scope of the syllabus and mark scheme,
referring to your Team Leader as appropriate
 marks are awarded when candidates clearly demonstrate what they know and can do
 marks are not deducted for errors
 marks are not deducted for omissions
 answers should only be judged on the quality of spelling, punctuation and grammar when these
features are specifically assessed by the question as indicated by the mark scheme. The
meaning, however, should be unambiguous.
Rules must be applied consistently, e.g. in situations where candidates have not followed
instructions or in the application of generic level descriptors.
Marks should be awarded using the full range of marks defined in the mark scheme for the question
(however, the use of the full mark range may be limited according to the quality of the candidate
responses seen).
Marks awarded are based solely on the requirements as defined in the mark scheme. Marks should
not be awarded with grade thresholds or grade descriptors in mind.
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English & Media subject specific general marking principles

(To be read in conjunction with the Generic Marking Principles (and requiring further guidance
on how to place marks within levels))
Components using level descriptors:

 We use level descriptors as a guide to broad understanding of the qualities normally expected
of, or typical of, work in a level.
 Level descriptors are a means of general guidance and should not be interpreted as hurdle
statements.
 Where indicative content notes are supplied for a question, these are not a prescription of
required content, and must not be treated as such. Alternative correct points and unexpected
answers in candidates’ scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the knowledge and skills
demonstrated.
 While we may have legitimate expectations as to the ground most answers may occupy, we
must at all times be prepared to meet candidates on their chosen ground, provided it is relevant
ground (e.g. clearly related to and derived from a relevant passage/text and meeting the mark
scheme requirements for the question).
Components using point-based marking:

Point marking is often used to reward knowledge, understanding and application of skills. We give
credit where the candidate’s answer shows relevant knowledge, understanding and application of
skills in answering the question. We do not give credit where the answer shows confusion.
From this it follows that we:

a DO credit answers which are worded differently from the mark scheme if they clearly convey
the same meaning (unless the mark scheme requires a specific term).
b DO credit alternative answers/examples which are not written in the mark scheme if they are
correct.
c DO credit answers where candidates give more than one correct answer in one
prompt/numbered/scaffolded space where extended writing is required rather than list-type
answers. For example, questions that require n reasons (e.g. State two reasons…).
d DO NOT credit answers simply for using a ‘key term’ unless that is all that is required. (Check
for evidence it is understood and not used wrongly.).
e DO NOT credit answers which are obviously self-contradicting or trying to cover all possibilities.
f DO NOT give further credit for what is effectively repetition of a correct point already credited
unless the language itself is being tested. This applies equally to ‘mirror statements’ (i.e.
polluted/not polluted).
g DO NOT require spellings to be correct unless this is part of the test. However spellings of
syllabus terms must allow for clear and unambiguous separation from other syllabus terms with
which they may be confused (e.g. Corrasion/Corrosion).

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Question Answer Marks
1(a) What is an alternative name for a motivational speaker, according to 1

the text?
 (an) inspirational (speaker)
1(b)(i) Using your own words, explain what the text means by: 2
‘reputation as an expert’ (line 3):
Award 2 marks for full explanation (both strands).

Award 1 mark for partial explanation.
Credit alternatives explaining the whole phrase.

 recognised as / has a name for being / widely believed to be / judged by
others to be / well known for / seen by others to be / has an image to
uphold
 specialist knowledge / has considerable experience of the topic /
knowledgeable in their field / knows a lot about the subject
1(b)(ii) Using your own words, explain what the text means by: 2
‘different perspective’ (line 4):
Award 2 marks for full explanation (both strands).

Award 1 mark for partial explanation.
Credit alternatives explaining the whole phrase

 alternative / alternate / (an)other / change(d) / contrasting / new
 viewpoint / (point of) view / way of looking at / stance / angle / position /
attitude / outlook / mindset
1(c) Re-read paragraph 2, (‘The ultimate … tactics.’). 2
Identify two ways that a motivational speaker might have an emotional

or mental effect on a person’s life.
 (help them to) make a significant change / (personal) change in their life
 (encourage them to) concentrate on opportunities / not focus on
problems
Award 1 mark for each idea, up to a maximum of 2.
1(d)(i) Re-read paragraphs 3 and 4 (‘Some motivational … television.’). 2
Identify two different types of online or live audience that motivational

speakers might talk to, according to the text.
 invited (audience) / people with particular interests / conference

(audience)
 (wider) public / those who buy tickets

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1(d)(ii) Re-read paragraphs 3 and 4 (‘Some motivational … television.’). 3
Explain why the job of a motivational speaker might appeal to some

people.
 (go to) important conferences / (if successful) you can be in demand

 (can) travel (to events) all over the world
 become celebrities / write books / present videos / make podcasts /
appear on television / be famous
1(e) Re-read paragraph 5 (‘There is … successful.’’’). 3
Using your own words, explain why this expert does not consider that
the speakers they have met are motivational.
Award 1 mark for each idea, predominantly in own words, up to a maximum

of 3.
 speakers are in it to make money / charge too much / charge a lot

 (many / all) are not good
 use predictable storylines
 patronising / show off / fake / insincere
Answers which are entirely in the words of the text should not be credited.

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1(f) According to Text B, what were the writer’s reasons for giving up 15
motivational speaking?
You must use continuous writing (not note form) and use your own
words as far as possible.
Your summary should not be more than 120 words.
Up to 10 marks are available for the content of your answer and up to 5

marks for the quality of your writing.
Use the Marking Criteria for Question 1(f) (Table A, Reading and Table B
Writing).
INDICATIVE READING CONTENT
Candidates may refer to any of the points below:

1. it’s not really her / not allowing her to be the person she wanted to be /
wants to be honest about what she thinks / feels not being sincere / not
being true to herself
2. some bad experiences / have been many downs
3. did not choose it / wants to inspire people to make their own choices /
can protect legacy by making the choice to leave now
4. assumption that because she is disabled, she is automatically qualified
to be inspirational / not considered a potential doctor or engineer like
her peers
5. felt pushed into it too early / didn’t understand at the time what she was
getting into / found herself doing it before she’d decided on a career
path
6. expected to tell a tragic story / expected to present a false version of
her life / expected to mislead audiences / does not have a ‘tragic story’
7. audience can’t see past her disability when she’s on stage
8. not really a glamorous job / supposed glamour of the job detracts from
other achievements / once people know she’s a motivational speaker
her other achievements and ambitions are ignored
9. seldom asked about her struggles as an entrepreneur / interviewers do
not ask about her main work / interviewers focus questions on their
perception of life as a wheelchair user
10. an unreliable source of income / need another job as well / pay is not
good enough
11. popularity can alter without warning / someone comes along with a
‘better’ story / competitive
12. does not want to have to entertain / wants to be taken seriously / wants
to focus on writing / wants to focus on running her company

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Marking criteria for Question 1(f)

Table A, Reading
Use the following table to give a mark out of 10 for Reading
Level Marks Description
5 9–10  A very effective response that demonstrates a thorough

understanding of the requirements of the task.
 Demonstrates understanding of a wide range of relevant ideas
and is consistently well-focused.
 Points are skilfully selected to demonstrate an overview.
4 7–8  An effective response that demonstrates a competent

 Demonstrates understanding of a good range of relevant ideas
and is mostly focused.
 Points are carefully selected and there is some evidence of an
overview.
3 5–6  A partially effective response that demonstrates a reasonable

 Demonstrates understanding of ideas with occasional loss of
focus.
 Some evidence of selection of relevant ideas but may include
excess material.
2 3–4  A basic response that demonstrates some understanding of the

requirements of the task.
 Demonstrates general understanding of some relevant ideas and
is sometimes focused.
 There may be some indiscriminate selection of ideas.
1 1–2  A response that demonstrates a limited understanding of the task.

 The response may be a simple list of unconnected ideas or show
limited focus.
 There is limited evidence of selection.
0 0  No creditable content.

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Table B, Writing
Use the following table to give a mark out of 5 for Writing.
3 4–5  A relevant response that is expressed clearly, fluently and mostly

with concision.
 The response is well organised.
 The response is in the candidate’s own words (where
appropriate), using a range of well-chosen vocabulary which
clarifies meaning.
 Spelling, punctuation and grammar are mostly accurate.
2 3–2  A relevant response that is generally expressed clearly, with some

evidence of concision.
 There may be some lapses in organisation.
 The response is mainly expressed in the candidate’s own words
(where appropriate) but there may be reliance on the words of the
text.
 Errors in spelling, punctuation and grammar which do not impede
communication.
1 1  A relevant response that lacks clarity and concision.

 There may be excessively long explanations or the response may
be very brief.
 The response may include lifted sections.
 Frequent errors of spelling, punctuation and grammar, which
occasionally impede communication.
0 0  No creditable content.
Note 1: All examiners are instructed that alternative correct answers and unexpected approaches in
candidates’ scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the relevant knowledge and skills
demonstrated. Nonetheless, the content must be clearly related to and derived from the texts.

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Question 2
This question tests reading assessment objectives R1, R2 and R4 (25 marks):
R1 demonstrate understanding of explicit meanings

R2 demonstrate understanding of implicit meanings and attitudes
R4 demonstrate understanding of how writers achieve effects and influence readers.
Overview of items for Question 2
Item Reading assessment Marks for reading assessment

objectives tested objectives
2(a)(i) R1 1
2(a)(ii) R2 1
2(a)(iii) R1 1
2(a)(iv) R1 1
2(b)(i) R2 1
2(b)(ii) R2 1
2(b)(iii) R1 1
2(c) R1, R2 and R4 3
2(d) R1, R2 and R4 15
Total 25

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2(a)(i) Identify a word or phrase from the text which suggests the same idea 1
as the words underlined:
Anna’s journey through New Zealand took her from one end of the
country to the other.
 (the) entire length (of New Zealand) (line 3)
Accept cloze responses that repeat all / some of the question stem with the
correct answer.
2(a)(ii) Anna was going to run the whole way with absolutely no help or 1
assistance.
 (doing it) totally unsupported (line 20)
correct answer.
2(a)(iii) Anna did think about buying a GPS to help her find her way. 1
 (I did) consider purchasing (line 36)
correct answer.
2(a)(iv) Kevin felt that lots of the people attempting it were not at all ready to 1
deal with the challenges of the trail.
 entirely unprepared (line 42)
correct answer.
2(b)(i) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by each of the 1
words underlined:
‘It just comes down to a choice about how you live your life,’ I
shrugged. ‘I’m a ‘‘work-it-out -when-I-get-there’’ kind of person.’
This was perhaps the reason why I’d failed to read even 10 per cent of
the trail notes before setting out. And possibly why a perceptive work
colleague had introduced me to Kevin who would meet me at the
airport.
Local expert Kevin had quizzed me about sections of the trail. Mostly
my responses were: ‘Umm, I’m not too sure on that particular bit.’
 perceptive: able to see Anna needed help / insightful / recognising

Anna wasn't well prepared / knew her well / observant

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2(b)(ii) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by each of the 1
words underlined:
 quizzed: tested / interrogated / asked specific questions / drilling down

into her knowledge
2(b)(iii) Using your own words, explain what the writer means by each of the 1
words underlined:
 trail: a (marked) path / a (set) route / a planned way through
2(c) Use one example from the text below to explain how the writer 3
suggests her attitude during the interview.
Use your own words in your explanation.
I was sitting, star-struck, in the Southland FM’s Invercargill studio,

marvelling at radio host Rach’s seemingly exotic accent. I already
loved the way that people here pronounced my name as ‘Inna!’ I
grinned widely from behind a microphone bigger than my head.
Rach continued: ‘So, are you brave or stupid?’
‘Perhaps both,’ I laughed enigmatically. ‘And excited.’
 Award 3 marks for an appropriate example with a comprehensive

explanation which shows understanding of how the writer suggests
Anna’s attitude.
 Award 2 marks for an appropriate example and attempt at an
explanation which shows some understanding of how the writer
suggests Anna’s attitude.
 Award 1 mark for an example with an attempt at an explanation which
shows awareness of Anna’s attitude. The explanation may be partial.
The explanation must be predominantly in the candidate’s own words.
Responses might use the following:

 sitting, star-struck: admired Rach, liked being on the radio, over-awed
by the occasion, dazzled, unable to communicate effectively
 marvelling at ... seemingly exotic accent: way Rach spoke was
unusual/foreign to Anna, she is amazed by the difference; suggests she
is over-reacting, perhaps romanticising
 grinned widely from behind a microphone bigger than my head:
smiled broadly, open and positive, thoroughly enjoying the experience,
cannot contain her joy; sense of inane, foolish or showing off
 laughed enigmatically: trying to appear mysterious and interesting,
may suggest bravado, playing the role of a celebrity, has not thought
through the implications or dangers properly

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2(d) Re-read paragraphs 7 and 12. 15
 Paragraph 7 begins ‘We discussed the attractions ...’ and is about

Anna’s feelings ahead of the run.
 Paragraph 12 begins ‘No, I’d no idea ...’ and is about the natural
landscape Anna encountered on the trail.
Explain how the writer uses language to convey meaning and to create
effect in these paragraphs. Choose three examples of words or
phrases from each paragraph to support your answer. Your choices
should include the use of imagery.
Write about 200 to 300 words.
Up to 15 marks are available for the content of your answer.
Use the Marking Criteria for Question 2(d)

(Table A, Reading)
Notes on the task

This question is marked for the ability to select powerful or unusual words
and for an understanding of ways in which the language is effective. Expect
responses to provide words / phrases that carry connotations additional to
general meaning.
Mark holistically for the overall quality of the response, not for the number of
words chosen, bearing in mind that for the higher bands there should be a
range of choices to demonstrate an understanding of how language works,
and that this should include the ability to explain images. It is the quality of
the analysis that attracts marks. Do not deduct marks for inaccurate
statements; simply ignore them.
The following notes are a guide to what good responses might say about the
selections.
Candidates can make any sensible comment, but only credit those that are
relevant to the correct meanings of the words in the context and that have
some validity. Alternative acceptable explanations should be credited. Credit
comments on effects created by non-vocabulary choices such as grammar /
syntax and punctuation devices. These must be additional to comments on
vocabulary.

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2(d) Responses might use the following:
Paragraph 7 begins ‘We discussed the attractions ...’ and is about

Anna’s feelings ahead of the run.
Overview: contrasting feelings of nervous tension and excitement

 exquisite, wild showcase of natural diversity: beautiful, widely varied
landscape, as if on display, preserved in a museum; a performance for
her benefit
 framed by forests: surrounded by trees on all sides, as if a picture,
artwork or theatrical presentation
 my spirits lift and soar: cheered up after initial doubts, reminiscent of
a bird taking flight
 nagging self-doubt: unsure if able to do it and not able to let that
uncertainly go; as if someone is trying to undermine her confidence,
persistent, irritating
 gnawing concern: worry keeps working away at her faith in her ability
to complete, insistent and destructive anxieties
 eased with every word I uttered into that gigantic microphone: it
got better as she spoke, talking herself into it - larger than life
microphone suggests getting carried away by the occasion, may not be
realistic
Only credit comments on stylistic effect where these are explicitly linked to
choices.

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2(d) Responses might use the following:
Paragraph 12 begins ‘No, I’d no idea ...’ and is about the natural
landscape Anna encountered on the trail.
Overview: challenging landscape and latent danger

 wildly over- estimated (and certainly hadn’t accounted for): completely
miscalculated, not even close, reckless, impulsive
 massive mountains sprawled across the landscape: foothills of the
huge mountains stretch out across the vista, imposing
 like giant sleeping tarantulas: reminiscent of large spiders; scary and
potentially deadly, could be awoken
 hairy tussock-covered legs forming sharp ridges and deep basins:
coarse vegetation makes progress difficult and unpleasant, sense of
climbing high over narrow summits and travelling down low into dips in
between
 punctuated by icy streams: dotted with waterways, freezing water,
forbidding, halting pace
 seas of chest-high grass: endless, grass so tall it feels like you may
drown in it, undulating movement in the wind; disorientating
 peter away: gradually disappear, like trickle of water, into nothing
 confusing connection of gaps: absence of any sense of trail, way is
unclear, negativity stressed as looking without success for a pattern in
the spaces
 complex maze of slippery roots: easy to get lost, treacherous, difficult
to get through, risk of falling
Only credit comments on stylistic effect where these are explicitly linked to
choices.

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Marking Criteria for Question 2(d)
Table A, Reading: Analysing how writers achieve effects
Use the following table to give a mark out of 15 for Reading.
5 13–15  Wide-ranging discussion of judiciously selected language with some

high-quality comments that add meaning and associations to
words/phrases in both parts of the text, and demonstrate the
writer’s reasons for using them.
 Tackles imagery with some precision and imagination.
 There is clear evidence that the candidate understands how
language works.
4 10–12  Explanations are given of carefully selected words and phrases.

 Explanations of meanings within the context of the text are secure
and effects are identified in both parts of the text.
 Images are recognised as such and the response goes some way
to explaining them.
 There is some evidence that the candidate understands how
language works.
3 7–9  A satisfactory attempt is made to select appropriate words and

phrases.
 The response mostly gives meanings of words and any attempt to
suggest and explain effects is basic or very general.
 One half of the text may be better addressed than the other.
2 4–6  The response provides a mixture of appropriate choices and words

that communicate less well.
 The response may correctly identify linguistic devices but not
explain why they are used.
 Explanations may be few, general, slight or only partially effective.
 They may repeat the language of the original or do not refer to
specific words.
1 1–3  The choice of words is sparse or rarely relevant.

 Any comments are inappropriate and the response is very thin.
0 0  The response does not relate to the question.

 Inappropriate words and phrases are chosen or none are selected.
Note: All examiners are instructed that alternative correct answers and unexpected approaches in
candidates’ scripts must be given marks that fairly reflect the relevant knowledge and skills
demonstrated. Nonetheless, the content must be clearly related to and derived from the texts.

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Question 3
This question tests reading assessment objectives R1, R2 and R3 (15 marks):
R1 demonstrate understanding of explicit meanings
R2 demonstrate understanding of implicit meanings and attitudes
R3 analyse evaluate and develop facts, ideas and opinions, using appropriate support from the text
and writing assessment objectives W1, W2, W3, W4 and W5 (10 marks):
W1 articulate experience and express what is thought, felt and imagined

W2 organise and structure ideas and opinions for deliberate effect
W3 use a range of vocabulary and sentence structures appropriate to context
W4 use register appropriate to context
W5 make accurate use of spelling, punctuation and grammar.

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3 You are Anna. After completing your run successfully you return to the 25
UK and are asked to give a motivational speech to young people.
In your speech you should:

 explain the details of the challenge you undertook and the reasons
you wanted to do it
 evaluate your preparation for the challenge and what you wished
you had done or realised beforehand
 discuss the highlights of the whole experience, what you gained
and why you would recommend your audience to take on
challenges.
Write the words of your speech.
Base your speech on what you have read in Text C, but be careful to
use your own words. Address each of the three bullet points.
Write about 250 to 350 words.
Up to 15 marks are available for the content of your answer and up to

10 marks for the quality of your writing.
Use the Marking Criteria for Question 3 (Table A, Reading and Table B
Writing)
Notes on the task
Candidates should select ideas from the text (see below) and develop them
relevantly, supporting what they write with details from the text. Look for an
appropriate register for the genre, and a clear and balanced response which
covers the three areas of the question, is well sequenced, and is in the
candidate’s own words.
Annotate A1 for references to details of the challenge Anna undertook and

the reasons Anna wanted to do it.
Annotate A2 for references to Anna’s preparation for the challenge and
what she wished she had done or realised.
Annotate A3 for references to the highlights of the whole experience, what
Anna gained and why she would recommend her audience to take on
challenges.

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3 A1: details of the challenge undertaken, and reasons Anna wanted to do it

 running length of New Zealand (det. 3000-kilometre-long, Te Araroa
Trail) [dev. allure of visiting a country for the first time]
 unsupported / travelling alone (det. carrying all gear in backpack)
[dev. potentially dangerous]
 sporting parents (det. Olympians) [dev. make them proud / live up to
expectations / genetically predisposed / destiny]
 health benefits of exercise (det. access to outdoors and sport as a
child) [dev. experience of recovering from illness]
 raising awareness / publicity (det. stopping in schools on route,
organisations supporting individuals to take on challenges) [dev.
educating young people]
A2: preparation for the challenge and what Anna wished she had done or
realised
 reading trail notes (det. only read 10% of notes) [dev. should have been
better prepared / wished paid more attention / worked out ok / need to
know where to go when markers peter out]
 differences between trails in NZ and Europe (det. forests, mountains)
[dev. not used to this terrain / no idea beforehand]
 maps / compass (det. old fashioned navigation techniques/ no GPS)
[dev. may have been foolhardy / romanticised idea]
 safety arrangements (det. spot tracker) [dev. useful / necessary /
sensible precaution]
 practised more with backpack (det. over-estimated speed she could
travel carrying all her gear) [dev. backpack slowed her down / should
have made other arrangements for picking up supplies]
 started the other end of the trail (det began at Stirling point) [dev. less
time to acclimatize / more challenging route from the outset]
A3: highlights of the whole experience, what Anna gained and why she
would recommend her audience to take on challenges.
 radio interview (det. Southland FM’s Invercargill studio, meeting radio
host Rach) [dev. enjoyed fame and attention / new cultural experience]
 discovery / adventure (det. wild, beauty of landscape) [dev. taking
some risks can be worth it / pushing yourself is important]
 confidence / sense of achievement (det. own ‘Olympic’ achievement)
[dev. able to work through problems faced / overcome problems in own
life / positive mindset brings success]
 support from others (det. support from friends, family, work
colleagues) [dev. gained their respect / inspiring others]
 learned from Kevin (det. local expert, new friend) [dev. pleased she
met him / grateful for his advice]

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Marking Criteria for Question 3

Table A, Reading
Use the following table to give a mark out of 15 for Reading.
5 13–15  The response reveals a thorough evaluation and analysis of the

text.
 Developed ideas are sustained and well related to the text.
 A wide range of ideas is applied.
 There is supporting detail throughout, which is well integrated into
the response, contributing to a strong sense of purpose and
approach.
 All three bullets are well covered.
 A consistent and convincing voice is used.
4 10–12  The response demonstrates a competent reading of the text with

some evidence of basic evaluation or analysis.
 A good range of ideas is evident.
 Some ideas are developed but the ability to sustain them may not
be consistent.
 There is frequent, helpful supporting detail, contributing to a clear
sense of purpose.
 All three bullets are covered.
 An appropriate voice is used.
3 7–9  The text has been read reasonably well.

 A range of straightforward ideas is offered.
 Opportunities for development are rarely taken.
 Supporting detail is present but there may be some mechanical
use of the text.
 There is uneven focus on the bullets.
 The voice is plain.
2 4–6  There is some evidence of general understanding of the main

ideas, although the response may be thin or in places lack focus
on the text or the question.
 Some brief, straightforward reference to the text is made.
 There may be some reliance on lifting from the text.
 One of the bullets may not be addressed.
 The voice might be inappropriate.
1 1–3  The response is either very general, with little reference to the
text, or a reproduction of sections of the original.
 Content is either insubstantial or unselective.
 There is little realisation of the need to modify material from the
text.
0 0  There is very little or no relevance to the question or to the text.

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Table B, Writing: Structure and order, style of language
Use the following table to give a mark out of 10 for Writing.
5 9–10  Effective register for audience and purpose.

 The language of the response sounds convincing and consistently
appropriate.
 Ideas are firmly expressed in a wide range of effective and/or
interesting language.
 Structure and sequence are sound throughout.
 Spelling, punctuation and grammar almost always accurate.
4 7–8  Some awareness of an appropriate register for audience and

purpose.
 Language is mostly fluent and there is clarity of expression.
 There is a sufficient range of vocabulary to express ideas with
subtlety and precision.
 The response is mainly well structured and well sequenced.
 Spelling, punctuation and grammar generally accurate.
3 5–6  Language is clear but comparatively plain and/or factual,

expressing little opinion.
 Ideas are rarely extended, but explanations are adequate.
 Some sections are quite well sequenced but there may be flaws in
structure.
 Minor, but more frequent, errors of spelling, punctuation and
grammar
2 3–4  There may be some awkwardness of expression and some

inconsistency of style.
 Language is too limited to express shades of meaning.
 There is structural weakness and there may be some copying
from the text.
 Frequent errors of spelling, punctuation and grammar.
1 1–2  Expression and structure lack clarity.

 Language is weak and undeveloped.
 There is very little attempt to explain ideas.
 There may be frequent copying from the original.
 Persistent errors of spelling, punctuation and grammar impede
communication.
0 0  The response cannot be understood.

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FIRST LANGUAGE ENGLISH 0500/11

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Generic Marking Principles

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 1:

Marks must be awarded in line with:

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 2:

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 3:

Marks must be awarded positively:

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 4:

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 5:

GENERIC MARKING PRINCIPLE 6:

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English & Media subject specific general marking principles

Components using level descriptors:

Components using point-based marking:

From this it follows that we:

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Question Answer Marks

1(a) What is an alternative name for a motivational speaker, according to 1

Award 2 marks for full explanation (both strands).

Credit alternatives explaining the whole phrase.

Award 2 marks for full explanation (both strands).

Credit alternatives explaining the whole phrase

1(c) Re-read paragraph 2, (‘The ultimate … tactics.’). 2

Identify two ways that a motivational speaker might have an emotional

Award 1 mark for each idea, up to a maximum of 2.

1(d)(i) Re-read paragraphs 3 and 4 (‘Some motivational … television.’). 2

Identify two different types of online or live audience that motivational

 invited (audience) / people with particular interests / conference

Award 1 mark for each idea, up to a maximum of 2.

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Question Answer Marks

1(d)(ii) Re-read paragraphs 3 and 4 (‘Some motivational … television.’). 3

Explain why the job of a motivational speaker might appeal to some

 (go to) important conferences / (if successful) you can be in demand

Award 1 mark for each idea, up to a maximum of 3.

1(e) Re-read paragraph 5 (‘There is … successful.’’’). 3

Award 1 mark for each idea, predominantly in own words, up to a maximum

 speakers are in it to make money / charge too much / charge a lot

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Question Answer Marks

Your summary should not be more than 120 words.

Up to 10 marks are available for the content of your answer and up to 5

INDICATIVE READING CONTENT

Candidates may refer to any of the points below:

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Marking criteria for Question 1(f)

Use the following table to give a mark out of 10 for Reading

Level Marks Description

5 9–10  A very effective response that demonstrates a thorough

4 7–8  An effective response that demonstrates a competent

3 5–6  A partially effective response that demonstrates a reasonable

2 3–4  A basic response that demonstrates some understanding of the

1 1–2  A response that demonstrates a limited understanding of the task.

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Use the following table to give a mark out of 5 for Writing.

Level Marks Description

3 4–5  A relevant response that is expressed clearly, fluently and mostly