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Last year, I had the opportunity to attend my older cousin’s graduation ceremony.
It was a beautiful, sunny day, and the entire campus was filled with excitement.
While we gathered in the auditorium, I could see the proud faces of family
members, all eagerly waiting for the ceremony to begin. The graduates, dressed in
their caps and gowns, walked down the aisle, looking both nervous and thrilled.
When my cousin’s name was called, I cheered as loud as I could. She walked
across the stage, shaking hands with the principal and receiving her diploma.
Although I could see her smiling from the stage, I knew she had worked hard to
reach that moment. It was a very special experience for our family because we had
supported her through every challenge along the way.
After the ceremony, we took lots of pictures with family and friends. While I
watched my cousin enjoy the moment, I thought about my own future graduation.
It inspired me to keep working hard, knowing that one day, I could have a similar
celebration.