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Misplaced Modifiers

LENG201 Academic Reading and Writing II


Modifiers
• A working definition for the word “modify” is to
change or to alter something. (eg. tall , short )

• A modifier changes, clarifies, qualifies, or limits a


particular word in a sentence in order to add emphasis,
explanation, or detail.
Modifiers
1. Adjectives and adjective phrases 4. Dependent clauses
A red car; a quickly-moving train We arrived after the crowds had
left. ( more info about the time)
2. Adverbs and adverb phrases
Soon afterward, they cooked 5. Infinitive phrases
dinner. We all helped to push the stalled
car.
3. prepositional phrases 6. participial phrases
We walked to the store. We finally finished, helped by Sally.

Time place statement


時間 地點 程度 狀態
Modifiers of Nouns
A modifier may provide more information about a
noun. More technically, they could be called
“adjectivals”.
• Hong Kong is an international city [single word].
• Firms from all over the world establish offices in
Hong Kong[phrase].
• Only those applicants who have passed the English
proficiency test will be shortlisted for a second
interview [clause].
Modifiers of Verbs
Modifiers of Verbs-A modifier may provide more
information about a verb. More technically, they
could be called “adverbials”. -> help the verb
• Having near-native English proficiency can greatly
enhance your job prospects in today’s competitive
job market [single word].
• In this essay, we will analyse the status of English
from multiple perspectives [phrase].
Modifiers: Only
Misplaced Modifiers

• A misplaced modifier means that there is a separation of


space between the word, phrase, or clause and the modifier.
When a modifier is misplaced, the meaning of your
sentence becomes awkward, ridiculous, or confusing:
Eg 1a. She wore a bicycle helmet on her head that was too
large.
Eg 1b. She wore a bicycle helmet that was too large on
her head.
Eg 2a. The patient was referred to the physician with
stomach pains.
Eg 2b. The patient with stomach pains was referred to the
physician.
Misplaced Modifiers
Beside the modifiers
Fixing a Misplaced Modifier
• When fixing a misplaced modifier, the general rule
is to get the modifier as close as possible to the
word or phrase it is modifying.
How Does a Misplaced Modifier Look in a
Sentence? (adjectives)
• On her way to work, Elaine saw the silver woman’s
earring laying on the park bench.
This sentence implies that there is a silver woman who left her earring on
the park bench, not that the earring itself is silver.
• On her way to work, Elaine saw the woman’s silver
earring laying on the park bench.
Now the earring is silver instead of the woman.
How Does a Misplaced Modifier Look in a
Sentence? (adjectives)
• Try it…
The stolen man’s wallet was placed on the police
department’s counter.

Think about what was stolen – the man


or the wallet?
• Answer:
The man’s stolen wallet was placed on the police
department’s counter.
How Does a Misplaced Modifier Look in a
Sentence? (adverbs)
• We drove off in the car we had just bought quickly.
Did we buy the car quickly, or did we drive
the car quickly?
• We quickly drove off in the car we had just bought.
Okay! We must have made a great deal and
were afraid the dealership would change its
mind!
How Does a Misplaced Modifier Look in a
Sentence? (phrases/clauses)
•I chased the balloon running down the
street.
Who was running – you or the
balloon?

 Running down the street, I chased the


balloon.
Simple Modifiers that Indicate Number…

• Simple modifiers like only, almost, just, nearly, and


barely often get used incorrectly because writers
often stick them in the wrong place.
• Almost and nearly mean close to
• Nouns can be counted; verbs cannot be counted, so
these words should be close to the noun.
• For example: He nearly swam for an hour.
• How can somebody nearly swim? Is he in the water, or is
he on dry land?

He swam for nearly an hour

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