IELTS WRITING

TASK1: The chart below shows the number of films

produced by five countries in three years.

Summarise the
information by selecting
and reporting the main
features, and make
comparisons where
relevant.
 LAYOUT
Overview:
Trend: Countries B, C, and E:
increased >< remaining countries:
declined.
Compare: Country A: the most
prolific producer, followed by
B.
BD1: In terms of country A +D

BD2: Country B, C and E

Sample:

The given bar chart compares five different countries in terms of their film
production from 2007 to 2009.
Overall, the number of films produced in countries B, C, and E increased,
whereas a decline was observed in the remaining countries. Notably,
country A remained the most prolific producer despite a slight drop,
followed by country B.
At the start of the period, with 90 films released, country A was by far the
largest film producer. Meanwhile, B made 50 films, more than triple the
figure for D, at just around 15 units. The movie production in countries C
and E was relatively modest, with each releasing only 10 movies in 2007.
Thereafter, the number of films that country A distributed modestly
declined to 80 units in 2009, still ranking first. In contrast, country B saw a
significant rise, increasing by 20 films to end the period at 70 films. C and E
also experienced moderate increases, with figures rising to around 20 and
11 films, respectively. D experienced a slight drop in its film production in
2008, after which it recovered to around 15 films in the following year.
 TASK 2:
Countries with a long average working
time are more economically
successful, but they are also likely to
suffer from negative social
consequences.

To what extent do you agree or

disagree with this statement?
Countries with a long average working time are
more economically successful, but they are also
likely to suffer from negative social
consequences. To what extent do you agree or
disagreeagree
with this statement? disagree
Countries with a long average working time are
more economically successful, but they are also
likely to suffer from negative social
consequences. To what extent do you agree or
disagreeagree
with this statement? disagree
 Vocabulary
Competitive (adjective) /kəmˈpɛtɪtɪv/: Relating to or characterized by competition.
Ex:
Profitability
It is often argued that countries where people work longer hours tend to be more economically prosperous but face significant
social problems. I completely disagree with this assertion because economic success is influenced by multiple factors beyond
working hours, and social issues can arise in any country regardless of its economic status.

Proponents of the idea that longer working hours lead to economic growth might highlight the role of labor in boosting
productivity. Indeed, labor is crucial in transforming raw materials into finished goods and services, which significantly
contribute to a country's Gross Domestic Product (GDP). In this context, longer working hours might seem to correlate with
greater prosperity. For example, China, known for its extensive manufacturing output, has seen rapid GDP growth and is now
considered an economic powerhouse. However, it is essential to recognize that China’s success is not solely due to long working
hours. The skills and knowledge of the workforce play a vital role in developing new technologies and processes,
enhancing efficiency and global competitiveness. On the other hand, many African countries also have long working hours but
do not experience similar economic growth due to a lack of diverse skill sets and infrastructure. This demonstrates that while
working hours contribute to economic activity, they are not the sole determinant of economic success; the quality and skills of
the labor force are crucial.

Regarding the link between economic growth and social problems, it is true that countries where economic prosperity is
achieved through long working hours might face certain social issues, such as stress and mental health problems. For instance,
individuals in affluent countries may suffer from stress and anxiety due to demanding work environments. However, these issues
are not unique to economically successful nations and can be even more serious in low-income countries. This sheds light on
why I believe that a developed economy should not be blamed for social consequences. Furthermore, the economic benefits,
such as higher living standards and reduced crime and unemployment rates, can outweigh the drawbacks. Economic prosperity
allows for better healthcare, education, and social services, which can mitigate many social issues. Therefore, while there are
potential negative consequences of long working hours, the overall impact of economic growth is more beneficial.

In conclusion, I completely disagree with the notion that countries with longer working hours are necessarily more economically
successful and are bound to face negative social consequences. Economic success depends on a combination of factors,
including the skills and quality of the workforce. The advantages of economic growth often surpass the potential drawbacks,
making it a complex yet generally positive outcome.
People have differing views with regard to the issue of (theme)…………………………………While it is true
to some extent that …..(clause-opposite idea)…., the there is a growing movement that advocates for (Noun
phrase/ Verbing- my opinion). This essay will analyze both perspectives and provide my own opinion on the
matter.
BODY 1:
Advocates for (noun)/verb_ing (theme)…………………………argue that it helps to (verb)……. / it is
essential to (verb)…. / it is of paramount importance that (clause)-idea 1……………………
………………..Chief among the reasons is -explanation 1…………………………………… This viewpoint
emphasizes ……………………………… What’s more, another justification for my advocacy is -idea
2……………………………. In fact, explanation 2 ……………… An obvious example
is………………………
BODY 2:
On the other hand, proponents of (Noun/Verbing) (theme)……………………………………… argue that
…………………… ………… This perspective affirms-idea 1……………………….. It is believed that -
explanation 1…………………………….Additionally, it becomes evident that-idea
2…………………………… Ultimately, explanation 2…………………Research has shown
that……………………
In conclusion, the question of whether ……………………….cannot be definitively answered. Both parties
play crucial roles; however, …………………………………………. Recognizing the importance of two
perspective will add on advantages to……