whump and writing and such

19 - she/her - reviving my whump blog + oc writing

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oc introduction! :D

in a hopes to participate in Whumptober after quite a few months of being inactive, I thought I’d introduce my ocs who (much to their dismay) will be the victims of my Whumptober pieces! (TW: mentions of drugs, alcohol, death of sibling). This might get really confusing so apologies in advance! :))

the simplified, summarised version is here, and more details of the overall story and character relations are under the cut:

koi - whumpee, mainly following the defiant whumpee trope and emotional/psychological whump

guido - caretaker, sometimes unwilling but overall wants to help (!secret crush on koi!)

cantaro - whumper, mob boss

fab - whumpee, mainly emotional whump but sometimes physical

important side characters:

ciro - fab’s dead brother, subject of koi and fabrizio’s emotional whump

catalina - another caretaker who actually has medical experience so helps guido

#whump blog #whump community #oc intro #koi oc #guido oc #fabrizio oc #ciro oc #my ocs #whump oc

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TW: drugging

imagine your whumpee so pumped full of drugs that they can’t think anymore. their eyes are glossy and vacant. their existence reduced to a dull ache.

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Whumpee tropes with their own perfect method of torture...

Submissive whumpees--getting confused about what their master wants them to do, and now terrified of punishment
Stoic whumpees--getting worn down by repetitive, relentless abuse until they crack and let out a sob... And then they just crumble
Defiant whumpees--being slapping/beaten for speaking, gagged or muzzled, tied up, left in stress positions until they beg
Living weapon whumpees--beaten for failing a mission, and also, being tortured by an enemy group for their owners' secrets

I think the key is an inner conflict (between their personality and what they want) when deciding how to respond under immense pressure.

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thebadphilosopher

Remember, the phrase "write what you know" is confusing. A lot of people bang their heads on walls because they haven't had the opportunity to experience the world.

Instead "write what you feel, know what you write."

You feel upset or angry? Chanel it into a tale of dystopian rebellion and do research on different uprisings throughout history.

Joyful and inspired? Imagine an invention in the 18th century that some mad scientist makes to save his family and look into the science that could potentially make it realistic.

Take what you feel as the basis and then build on that.

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a healing whumpee is so tragic - reminds me of prometheus and the eagle :(

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lawrencespen1777

“Marry me.”

“Ooookay now I know you’re delirious.”

“I’m not. No really, listen. I love you.”

“I love you, too.”

“Yeah but I really, really love you and when I get out of this place I’m gonna marry you.”

“How about you just focus on getting better first?”

“I won’t be in this hospital forever. They’re going to let me go soon.”

“You’re really sick.”

“I don’t care.”

“I do. You need to rest.”

“I sleep 20 hours a day. I want to talk to you.”

“I know. I’m sorry. I’m just really freaked out lately with all this… and I miss you.”

“I’m here. I’m delirious. But I’m here.”

“You almost left.”

“I’d never do that. I’m gonna marry you. Remember?”

“I remember.”

“My face…feels heavy…”

“Rest. Don’t fight it.”

“Okay…I love you.”

“I know.”

“We’re getting married…”

“…I know.”

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whumpee’s legs finally give out.

they’re weak, exhausted, maybe been starved or malnourished. what have they escaped? or have they been let go?

one hand might be held to the gaping wound on their side, but they’ve lost so much blood, and their feeble pressure isn’t making much of a difference.

they stumble. they buckle. they hit the ground.

let’s just hope to god they’re somewhere safe…

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cheeto-flavoured-pasta

You will not use AI to get ideas for your story. You will lie on the floor and have wretched visions like god intended

whitesheepwrites

And jokes aside, creativity is a muscle. You need to exercise it. Relying on something else to "make it easier" in the long term is gonna lead you to a dead end where you will find yourself unable to come up with your own original ideas and I say this, regretfully, from personal experience. Don't automate your imagination folks!

koi gets branded :0

(this is my first whump piece in months! i want to keep improving so any feedback/advice is more than welcome)

TW: starvation, branding/burning, death wish, swearing

The agitating dripping of the tap in the corner of the dank, warm room was slowly grating away at Koi’s sanity. How long had he been here? There was no way to tell. The room was devoid of windows, barring all light except for one solitary lightbulb, flickering pathetically and casting a taunting orange glow. The thick coarse ropes were digging into his wrists, leaving them bruised and bloody. Koi had been waiting in this room for what felt like days.

His escape attempt had only been a few hours ago, but the anticipation had made it feel like an eternity. Cantaro, after wrestling the weakened Koi back to the basement, and tying the ropes painfully tight around his wrists, had sworn that Koi would be “dealt with”. Koi had no clue what that entailed, he felt as if he had gone through the worst of it, what new ideas did Cantaro have? The waves of fatigue were crashing over Koi, making it hard to think, to prepare. He hadn’t eaten in a while, he wasn’t sure how long, but it was long enough to create a painful black hole inside his very empty stomach. He decided he would take the win, that Cantaro wasn’t with him in this moment, and tried to enjoy his time alone.

Koi thought of his home, his room. How he longed to have a cosy bed to fall asleep in, a comforting shower that wasn’t too hot or cold. He wished for his privacy back, to stop being treated like an animal, a spectacle that Cantaro could toy with.

Losing himself in his imagination, or maybe delusions from hunger, Koi woke with a start when he heard the metal bolt unlock with a threatening thud. Cantaro was here.

#whump #whump blog #whump writing #whumpee #whump community #whump things #branding #burn whump #koi oc #whump scenario #whumper

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whump-or-whatever

Whumpee picking up smoking as a habit cause whumper smokes. That’s it. That’s the post.

Simple but beautiful

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I'm sorry... what the hell do you mean "I have to write the content I want to read about my OC's"?¿?¿?¿? You mean it won't just magically write itself for me to keep me warm on a cold winters night???

OUTRAGEOUS

REAL

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Requiring whumpee to cooperate

(some of my favorite most awful tropes)

Content: whipping, punishment, noncon nudity, humiliation

Forcing them to put themselves in vulnerable positions--"lay on the table."
"You remember the punishment room? You get one more chance."
"open your palms." (Whumpee is lying on a table with their hands tied behind their back.) "Or else this whipping will break your fingers. It's up to you, really."
"I want you to count. Say 'thank you sir' after each one."
"Kneel." (Does whumpee thump to the ground immediately, desperately, do they slowly, begrudgingly do it with a glare, and get a slap for it?)
Forcing whumpee to ask to be punished
"Strip." Whumper orders. Whumpee stares at whumper's demand. "I said strip. Or I'll do it. And I won't be delicate."
"That's fifteen lashes. Turn around and face the wall."

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Phases of breaking a defiant whumpee

Physically fighting every chance they get even if it's hopeless, watching themselves fail over and over and struggling to keep up hope
If whumper gives them an order, "you're gonna have to ask nicely, whumper." *Cue punishment*
Starts to just block instead of attacking back, knowing it's useless to really try. Maybe blocking is pointless. One last attempt to prove they have some power.
Malicious compliance
"Take off your jacket, whumpee." Whumper brandishes a whip. "Oh sure, and I guess I'll take off the rest of my clothes while I'm at it, you pervert."
That fire in their eyes when they're given an order, darkening to smoldering anger
Fake obedience becomes real obedience because... Whumpee's beginning to think they'll never escape
That moment when the rage at being forced to comply turns into this dead silent frozen state. They won't interact. Not even if there's a caretaker there.
Rageful tears as they do exactly what whumper wants
When they're finally rescued, that charismatic spark of boldness has been crushed down to the darkness of someone who's seen too much.
Their defiance might take new forms after this. Sarcasm? Passive aggression? Outright yelling instead of just a simple "no"? Overcompensating?

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Scare your whumpee

(some conditioned/pet whump ideas here)

Choke them until their eyes widen and pupils dilate with panic
Snap your whip over their head just to watch them flinch
Tell them you're going to stop at 5 lashes. Listen to them beg and wail when you don't
Give them contradictory orders and watch them struggle to decide what to do
Like order them not to speak, then say "I didn't hear a 'yes sir'!" And watch their mouth open and close in terror
Give them ambiguous looks so they have no idea if you're pissed or not, what is awaiting them later?
Fake emotional explosions--yell and then get really close and watch them flinch and stutter and apologize
Give them hope. Tell them you won't punish them this time, if they can just keep from pissing you off for 10 minutes. Watch them walk on eggshells.
Tell them to convince you why you shouldn't hurt them
Quiz them on their actions. Who knows, maybe they'll admit to something you can punish them for! And meanwhile you get to watch them tremble in terror about whatever they think they did wrong.
Punish them for showing emotion. watch them struggle to contain their fear.

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whumperoni-and-wheeze

Whumpees who can't breathe from the pain the whumper inflicts, eventually going into shock 💞

Whumpees whose mental faculties are strained from the sleeplessness of their torture 💞💞

Whumpees who can't even look at themselves after the damage has been done 💞💞💞

Whumpees who have to sit with a mirror in front of them while they're being tortured, the mental anguish of seeing their own form becomes suffocating 💞💞💞💞

Whumpees who, when rescued, can't even bring themselves to emote. They are completely numb. The whumper did their job, they are a husk. 💞💞💞💞💞

i couldn’t have put it any better this is so painstakingly wonderful

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Whumpee being manhandled into restraints:

Shoved up against a wall and handcuffed.
Pinned to the floor and handcuffed.
Fighting for each limb as they’re forced down on a table, slowly secured by leather restraints.
Overwhelmed by multiple Whumpers, each one working to subdue them.
Yanked back by their hair so a collar or rope can easily be fitted around their throat.
Pinned while in combat (double points for being caged against a wall or trapped in a chokehold)
Improvised restraints like belts, sheets, or clothing when Whumpee won’t be still enough to retrieve proper ones.
Manhandled in a hospital bed, held down for the duration of a procedure.
Injected with a chemical restraint, a sedative or numbing agent that quickly bleeds the fight out of them.
Struggling as a muzzle is wrestled over their head and secured.
A blow to the head that knocks Whumpee out or makes them too dizzy to fight anyone off.

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Defiant Whumpee who has been put in a stress position by Whumper, and just left alone for a while. When Whumper returns, they release Whumpee and watch them crumple to the ground.

Whumpee, who normally fights Whumper at any chance they get, lies still, their breath raspy and gaze far away as they try to work through the pain.

Whumper just watches with a slight smile. This is the first time Whumpee is completely unrestrained, and they're not even trying to escape.

Progress.

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