[symfony#1937] Small tweaks in changes out of first person language

weaverryan · weaverryan · commit 25a0f40d8624 · 2012-11-23T10:16:24.000-05:00
diff --git a/book/controller.rst b/book/controller.rst
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ a serialized JSON array, an image, a redirect, a 404 error or anything else
 you can dream up. The controller contains whatever arbitrary logic *your
 application* needs to render the content of a page.
 
-See how simple this is, by looking at a Symfony2 controller in action.
+See how simple this is by looking at a Symfony2 controller in action.
 The following controller would render a page that simply prints ``Hello world!``::
 
     use Symfony\Component\HttpFoundation\Response;
diff --git a/book/doctrine.rst b/book/doctrine.rst
@@ -418,7 +418,7 @@ of the bundle:
     If you're following along with this example, you'll need to create a
     route that points to this action to see it work.
 
-Walking through this example:
+Take a look at the previous example in more detail:
 
 * **lines 9-12** In this section, you instantiate and work with the ``$product``
   object like any other, normal PHP object.
@@ -963,7 +963,7 @@ table, and ``product.category_id`` column, and new foreign key:
 Saving Related Entities
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
-Now, to see the code in action. Imagine you're inside a controller::
+Now you can see this new code in action! Imagine you're inside a controller::
 
     // ...
 
diff --git a/book/forms.rst b/book/forms.rst
@@ -576,7 +576,7 @@ of code. Of course, you'll usually need much more flexibility when rendering:
             <input type="submit" />
         </form>
 
-Taking a look at each part:
+Take a look at each part:
 
 * ``form_enctype(form)`` - If at least one field is a file upload field, this
   renders the obligatory ``enctype="multipart/form-data"``;
diff --git a/book/installation.rst b/book/installation.rst
@@ -188,7 +188,7 @@ development! Your distribution may contain some sample code - check the
 to learn about what sample code was included with your distribution and how
 you can remove it later.
 
-If you're new to Symfony, look at ":doc:`page_creation`", where you'll
+If you're new to Symfony, check out ":doc:`page_creation`", where you'll
 learn how to create pages, change configuration, and do everything else you'll
 need in your new application.
 
diff --git a/components/console/introduction.rst b/components/console/introduction.rst
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ You can install the component in many different ways:
 Creating a basic Command
 ------------------------
 
-To make a console command to greet you from the command line, create ``GreetCommand.php``
+To make a console command that greets you from the command line, create ``GreetCommand.php``
 and add the following to it::
 
     namespace Acme\DemoBundle\Command;
diff --git a/quick_tour/the_view.rst b/quick_tour/the_view.rst
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ Decorating Templates
 --------------------
 
 More often than not, templates in a project share common elements, like the
-well-known header and footer. In Symfony2, this problem is thought about
+well-known header and footer. In Symfony2, you think about this problem
 differently: a template can be decorated by another one. This works exactly
 the same as PHP classes: template inheritance allows you to build a base
 "layout" template that contains all the common elements of your site and
diff --git a/reference/constraints/Valid.rst b/reference/constraints/Valid.rst
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ object and all sub-objects associated with it.
 Basic Usage
 -----------
 
-In the following example, you create two classes ``Author`` and ``Address``
+In the following example, create two classes ``Author`` and ``Address``
 that both have constraints on their properties. Furthermore, ``Author`` stores
 an ``Address`` instance in the ``$address`` property.
 
