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Blood Compact/Sandugo and Sandugo Festival
editPlease comment on whether there is a need to make a separate article for the Blood Compact/Sandugo and a separate one for the Sandugo Festival.--Pinay06 08:32, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
- I think they'll warrant different articles. --Howard the Duck 08:45, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
- Definitely should lead to two articles. Take the History part, in addition to the information about the Bohol seal and make that the new article about the Blood Compact/Sandugo. Leave the rest for the Sandugo Festival and leave a sentence about why each one is related to the other in each article. Great Article by the way... kinda like, Thanksgiving Day here in America... the pact broken by one side in the end. PhilipDM 09:08, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
- Creating separate articles is a legitimate choice. Magalhães 16:17, 23 November 2006 (UTC)
- If we merge this two topics, we can produce a long (maybe confusing also) article. This would be very lengthy if merged and very broad. Sandugo is the ritual and Sandugo Festival is the occasion for the said ritual. --- Kevin Ray 13:20, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks for the input. I appreciate it. Best regards--Pinay06 02:10, 25 November 2006 (UTC)
- If we merge this two topics, we can produce a long (maybe confusing also) article. This would be very lengthy if merged and very broad. Sandugo is the ritual and Sandugo Festival is the occasion for the said ritual. --- Kevin Ray 13:20, 24 November 2006 (UTC)
- Best to merge the two, but blood compact english article is a separate article for all blood compacts, even non-Philippine ones. :) --Noypi380 12:15, 22 November 2006 (UTC)
- If blood compacts are separate for all English articles I think they should be separte in this case too. :)--Jondel 07:10, 23 November 2006 (UTC)
- Okay. but there is no blood compact yet. :) --Noypi380 10:50, 23 November 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks for all the input, you guys! Sorry, I did not see these until now. My bad...Rest assured that your points will be taken into consideration. BTW, I did a separate article for Sandugo from Sandugo Festival. You might like to post more comments in Talk:Sandugo. Thanks.-Pinay06 06:43, 5 December 2006 (UTC)
- Okay. but there is no blood compact yet. :) --Noypi380 10:50, 23 November 2006 (UTC)
- If blood compacts are separate for all English articles I think they should be separte in this case too. :)--Jondel 07:10, 23 November 2006 (UTC)
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