Talk:Suicidal Tour

Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Sohom Datta talk 03:12, 22 June 2024 (UTC)

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• ... that after performing a tour, football club Santa Cruz Futebol Clube had four fewer players, two of them being dead?

• Source: www1.folha.uol.com.br/esporte/2023/04/ha-80-anos-santa-cruz-completava-a-maior-epopeia-da-historia-humana.shtml (in Brazilian Portuguese, limited access): "Partiu em 2 de janeiro, no escuro. Só conseguiu retornar ao Recife em 29 de abril, com quatro jogadores a menos, dois deles mortos" (transl. It left on January 2, in the dark. They only managed to return to Recife on April 29, four players short, two of them dead)

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Moved to mainspace by Hilst (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

– Hilst [talk] 13:30, 26 May 2024 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: This is a fascinating article. There are so many potential hooks! Nazis, football, thieves... everything looks good to me.  — Chris Woodrich (talk) 14:10, 18 June 2024 (UTC)

GA Review

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Nominator: Hilst (talk · contribs) 20:14, 23 May 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Idiosincrático (talk · contribs) 09:55, 28 May 2024 (UTC)

Hi, I'd like to review this article. When I first read it, I found the story fascinating and engrossing. It honestly reads like a Hollywood movie. I don't read or speak Portuguese but I don't suspect that it'll be a problem. Idiosincrático (talk) 09:55, 28 May 2024 (UTC)

Comments

• Brazilian Portuguese is wikilinked twice in the lead, probably is only required the first time.
• The lead mentions Nazi attacks, there is no mention of any attack in the article and the Costa source states that there was only the threat of Nazi attacks. I suggest rephrasing to: "several problems faced by the club, such as deaths, the threat of Nazi attacks, and a lack of funding."
• I'd probably wikilink dysentery the first time it's used in the Manaus section.
• Past tense: "Goalkeeper King and striker Papeira are diagnosed with typhoid fever" >>> "Goalkeeper King and striker Papeira were diagnosed with typhoid fever"
• "The club would play against Paysandu just three days after the passing" >>> "The club then played against Paysandu, just three days after the passing"

I think this is a good start, I might have more later. Idiosincrático (talk) 10:17, 28 May 2024 (UTC)

• Thanks for reviewing my article!  Done all :) – Hilst [talk] 10:48, 28 May 2024 (UTC)

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