Talk:William Aitken (architect)/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Generalissima (talk · contribs) 23:31, 29 August 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: MaranoFan (talk · contribs) 20:18, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

Hello, once again!! I have been assigned to review this article at GARC. I didn't know users could nominate articles by others at the process. Still learning about it!--NØ 20:18, 29 September 2024 (UTC)

• Update: Quite small so I have just gone through and fixed the comma issues myself. I just wanted to know why it can't be separated into more sections? I am seeing a possibility for having Early Life, Career, and Personal Life as three different ones. Ping Generalissima.--NØ 13:38, 5 October 2024 (UTC)

  I'm just unsure if that'd make it more readable; I feel the prose works better as one big section with a personal life subsection. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 13:40, 5 October 2024 (UTC)

  Not really an issue when the content is great. ✓ Pass!--NØ 13:49, 5 October 2024 (UTC)

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