- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by PFHLai (talk) 23:46, 31 January 2016 (UTC)
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Strathtyrum
edit* ... that Prince William and Catherine Middleton lived in a dry valley for two years?
- ALT1 ... that Prince William and Catherine Middleton lived in Strathtyrum for two years?
- Comment: Note that I added some of the new content to the St Andrews Links article.
- Reviewed: Sandy Cornish
Created by HelenOnline (talk). Self-nominated at 12:33, 20 January 2016 (UTC).
New article, long enough. QPQ checked. Well referenced. DYK posted by due date. Earwig's Copyvio Detector: violation unlikely. Hook checked in two sources, the Sunday Express and the Evening Standard newspaper websites: they read, "they lived in Strathtyrum". The hook reads "dry valley". Checked page 54 of The place names of Fife and Kinross, which translates it to "the dry strath". @HelenOnline: Instead of synthesizing two sources, can we reword it to... "lived for two years in Stratgtyrum property, which means dry valley", or something else? The current hook phrase is confusing. Alternatively, can you find a source which reads "... lived in dry valley for two years"? Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 18:29, 23 January 2016 (UTC)
- @Ms Sarah Welch: Thanks for your review. I only included the "dry valley" part to make it more hooky. I would rather leave it out if it is a problem. HelenOnline 17:20, 25 January 2016 (UTC)
, with the change @HelenOnline made today. Ms Sarah Welch (talk) 17:31, 25 January 2016 (UTC)
