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Good job expanding the article. Please try using inline citations. Also, there is no need to capitalize the word Film. Keep up the good job, and feel free to ask me questions (on my talk page)! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 18:25, 19 October 2010 (UTC)
Citations and quick review
editYour citations look like a good start. What they need is page numbers (for books in particular); you can but you don't have to use the cite templates (see WP:CITE) for more information. I would like to see each sentence referenced, not only some (think what will happen when somebody inserts content in a middle of a paragraph that has only a reference at the end). You also need to make your headings second level (so use two == instead of one). External links should be more descriptive. Great so far! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 15:57, 28 October 2010 (UTC)
Another thing to do is to nominate your article for Did You Know section of the main page. This article should be eligible for appearing on the main page as a "Did you know" entry, if it is nominated it soon; it is supposed to be nominated within 5 days of being created or significantly (5x) expanded.
The instructions for nominating it are at Template talk:Did you know. Basically, all you need to do is take this code:
{{subst:NewDYKnom| article= | hook=... that ? | status=new | author= }}
and write the hook, a concise and interesting bit of info from the article beginning with "... that" and ending with a question mark. The info from the hook has to be present in the article and supported (in the article) with a citation. Someone will double-check to make sure the source says what it's claimed to say.
Once you've come up with a hook, fill in your username as the author and fill the title of the article, then add the above code, including your hook following the "hook=" part, to the top of the appropriate section for the day the article was started on the DYK template talk page. The code will produce an entry formatted like the others. After that, just keep an eye on the entry; if anyone brings up an issue with it, try to address it. I'll keep an eye out as well. If everything goes well, it will appear on the Main Page for several hours a few days from now.
--Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 15:57, 28 October 2010 (UTC)
DYK nomination of Film studies
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Hello! Your submission of Film studies at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed, and there still are some issues that may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) underneath your nomination's entry and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! The Interior(Talk) 02:40, 31 October 2010 (UTC)
DYK response
editThanks Piotr for campaigning for my page on DYK, I should have saved all my work in the sandbox and added it all at once. I'll just continue to add and make the changes you and the other wiki ambassadors have suggested.— Preceding unsigned comment added by Joko123nm (talk • contribs) 4:28, November 4, 2010
- Glad to hear back from you. In the future, please consider leaving your reply on my discussion page (or copying it there, or using Template:Talkback), as editors get notifications of new messages only if they are left on their own discussion pages. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 20:15, 4 November 2010 (UTC)
- We have support to extend the expansion date for your article at DYK. There is just one more issue we need help with. This source is the ref for your "hook". We need a page number for the info you referenced, as the source is quite long. Hopefully we can still get this on the main page! The Interior(Talk) 17:07, 6 November 2010 (UTC)
DYK Schedule
editHi, good news, your nomination has been accepted for DYK (barring any unforeseen problems). Here is a link to the schedule. Your article is in Prep 3. Congrats! The Interior(Talk) 16:10, 9 November 2010 (UTC)
Re:Dyk
editGlad to hear you'll be more active. As you can see, your article is still likely to be DYKed :) Keep up the good job, and don't forget to brag to your classmates, to encourage them to get their articles DYKed, too! --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 16:14, 9 November 2010 (UTC)
- Schedule wise, it is a bit random. You could ask in the queue to have it scheduled around the time of your class, perhaps. I've never tried to influence the exact time my DYKs show, but there is no harm in trying. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk 16:19, 10 November 2010 (UTC)
DYK for Film studies
edit | On 11 November 2010, Did you know? was updated with a fact from the article Film studies, which you created or substantially expanded. The fact was ... that film studies are less concerned with filmmaking than with exploring the narrative, artistic, cultural, economic, and political implications of cinema? You are welcome to check how many hits the article got while on the front page (here's how, quick check) and add it to DYKSTATS if it got over 5,000. If you know of another interesting fact from a recently created article, then please suggest it on the Did you know? talk page. |
The DYK project (nominate) 18:03, 11 November 2010 (UTC)