Talk:'Very serious': Chinese government releases corruption report

Review of revision 1151974 [Failed]

Revision 1151974 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:31, 30 December 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: rambling lede, title only answers 2 of 5W+H Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1151974 of this article has been reviewed by Brian McNeil (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 01:31, 30 December 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not ready: rambling lede, title only answers 2 of 5W+H Comments by reviewer: None added. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1152187 [Failed]

Revision 1152187 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:30, 30 December 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Two points that don't match: This article states bribery and shielding bad guys were the reasons for the execution, but the sources clearly indicate a rape conviction was also involved, and this article strongly implies the new regulations are original ideas in this document, whereas actually it merely highlights regulations that have come into force recently. NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Although I have passed on copyright, I'd be happier if the second sentence were less similar to the BBC. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1152187 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 13:30, 30 December 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Not ready: Two points that don't match: This article states bribery and shielding bad guys were the reasons for the execution, but the sources clearly indicate a rape conviction was also involved, and this article strongly implies the new regulations are original ideas in this document, whereas actually it merely highlights regulations that have come into force recently. NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: Although I have passed on copyright, I'd be happier if the second sentence were less similar to the BBC. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1152213 [Failed]

Revision 1152213 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:39, 30 December 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: Problem I asked you to fix last time: "...containing new regulations ordering government officials to report investment and income." From this revision: "...containing new regulations ordering government officials to report investment and income." NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: Instead of window-dressing the piece with changes that did not need to be made, please address the issues raied. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Revision 1152213 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and found not ready at 14:39, 30 December 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Newsworthiness: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Verifiability: Not ready: Problem I asked you to fix last time: "...containing new regulations ordering government officials to report investment and income." From this revision: "...containing new regulations ordering government officials to report investment and income." NPOV: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Style: Not reviewed. Please address other issues. Comments by reviewer: Instead of window-dressing the piece with changes that did not need to be made, please address the issues raied. Questions about the above? Ask. If possible, please address the above issues then resubmit the article for another review (by replacing {{tasks}} in the article with {{review}}). This talk page will be updated with subsequent reviews.

Review of revision 1152223 [Passed]

Revision 1152223 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:09, 30 December 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.

Revision 1152223 of this article has been reviewed by Blood Red Sandman (talk · contribs) and has passed its review at 15:09, 30 December 2010 (UTC). Copyright: Passed Newsworthiness: Passed Verifiability: Passed NPOV: Passed Style: Passed Comments by reviewer: None added. The reviewed revision should automatically have been edited by removing {{Review}} and adding {{Publish}} at the bottom, and the edit sighted; if this did not happen, it may be done manually by a reviewer.