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Revision as of 16:08, 25 October 2018

Featured articleBert Trautmann is a featured article; it (or a previous version of it) has been identified as one of the best articles produced by the Wikipedia community. Even so, if you can update or improve it, please do so.
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Article milestones
DateProcessResult
May 1, 2008Peer reviewReviewed
June 8, 2008Good article nomineeListed
September 23, 2008Featured article candidatePromoted
Current status: Featured article

Testimonial

In 1964 he finished his career with a testimonial in front of a crowd of 60,000 people, not bad for a German whom no one had originally wanted. At this testimonial Bobby Charlton, the captain of the English national team, called him one of the greatest goalkeepers ever.

I'm changing this to Bobby Moore, as I presume this is who was meant - in 1964 Jimmy Armfield of Blackpool FC captained England against Scotland on 11th April, Ron Flowers of Wolverhampton Wanderers captained England against the USA on 27th May, Wales on 18th November, and the Netherlands on 9th December. All other England matches that year were captained by Bobby Moore (v Uruguay, 6th May; Portugal, 17th May; Republic of Ireland, 24th May; Brazil, 30th May; Portugal, 4th June; Argentina, 6th June; Northern Ireland, 3rd October; and Belgium, 21st October). (England Football Online) -- Arwel 15:24, 28 Oct 2004 (UTC)

Charlton or Moore? It was Charlton who said, "Trautmann was one of the greatest goalkeepers ever."

Bobby Charlton was actually playing for the combined City and United team. Tom Finney, Stanley Matthews and Jimmy Armfield were amongst those playing for the England eleven.

(User: Trevor Roberts, 25th October, 2005)

Factual problem

There was no Football League Fourth Division until 1958 so how could he have played in that division post-war? Cutler 12:28, Jan 14, 2005 (UTC)

Dunno. Obviously someone couldn't conceive of a lower standard of football! According to the timeline] at St Helens Town's unofficial website, the club was reformed in 1946 and played in the Liverpool County Combination from 1946 until it was promoted into the Lancashire Combination Division 2 in 1949. I've changed the article appropriately. -- Arwel 17:09, 14 Jan 2005 (UTC)

Factual problem

I know very little about this guy, but I pretty sure that his father is not Snoop Dog —Preceding unsigned comment added by 76.66.180.202 (talk) 19:31, 22 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

POW Camp

There is evidence to suggest that Trautmann spent some time in the Northumberland village of Wylam as a POW prior to being moved to the Manchester area. It is also suggested that Trautmann played for local teams whilst located in Wylam. See (Brooks P.R: 1998) "Wylam Past - A Pictorial History of a Northumberland Village" p.45.

Anyone know any more about this?

He was never moved to the Manchester area. He was in Essex, Northwich, Ashton in Makerfield, Milnthorpe and Huyton. Never Manchester. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 94.170.205.195 (talk) 22:24, 25 July 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Changed line

I changed this line "quite a change from the crowd that initially didn't want a Nazi." to "quite a change from the crowd that initially didn't want a German." as I haven't seen anywhere that he was a nazi. -- User:Drogo 22:08, 3 Aug 2006 (UTC

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Bert Trautmann/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

I think this is a really nice article, and I enjoyed reading it. I do have a few comments though:

  • Youth in Germany seems a little bit short. Is nothing else known about it? Did he have any brothers or sisters for instance?
  • We're told in the lead that he refused the offer of repratiation in 1948, but later, in Early football career, we're told it was in 1947.
  • "The couple had three children, all sons, though his firstborn son who was killed in a car accident a few months after the FA Cup Final in 1956, aged five." This needs to be rewritten.
  • "One of Trautmann's weaknesses was acceptance of criticism ..." Reads a bit awkwardly, I think, and leaves the door open to asking the question "What were his other weaknesses?" What about something like "Trautmann found it difficult to accept criticism ..."?
  • "The printed sources – especially the ones being repeatedly cited – should be separated from the notes to make finding them easier, and cited including the author's surname. I've made the changes to Rowlands' Trautmann: The Biography to show what I mean.
  • Note#37 is broken.
  • A picture or two would be nice to have, if possible.
  • "Though recognised as one of the leading goalkeepers of his era, he never played international football ... Trautmann's only experience of international football came in 1960 ...." Presumably what's meant is that Trautmann never played football for his country?

That's about it, I think. I'm putting this article on hold to allow time for these relatively minor issues to be dealt with. Nice job. --Malleus Fatuorum (talk) 20:10, 7 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Note: a copy of the article from reference 37 can be found at http://www.herefordtimes.com/search/848963.The_day_Edgar_St_hailed_brave_Bert_/. GaryColemanFan (talk) 22:04, 7 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I've dealt with (or attempted to deal with) all the above points, more specific responses to three of them:
  • The chronology of the repatriation offer is not totally clear. The repatriation process started in 1947, but did not complete until 1948. I've reworded it so that the repatriation offer itself is not dated.
  • I've added a little more about his youth. Not mentioning the Hindenburg certificate was something of an oversight, so I'm glad I've looked over the sources for that period again. Rowlands' biography is the only source to talk about his youth in any real detail.
  • The lack of a free-use image of Trautmann was a major factor in the decision to submit the article for GA instead of FA. I have an image in mind which would qualify as fair use, but I currently lack access to a scanner. I have added two images of tangential relevance. Oldelpaso (talk) 13:01, 8 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]


Thanks for dealing with all of those issues. I've got no hesitation at all in listing this article as a GA now, as I believe it more than meets the GA criteria, and is in fact a plausible FA candidate. --Malleus Fatuorum (talk) 20:00, 8 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your copyediting. I may take the article to FAC in future, once a couple more images are sorted out. A recent visit to the National Football Museum revealed that the neck brace worn by Trautmann after his injury is normally on display, but is on loan to Vienna for the duration of Euro 2008. I intend to make a second visit to get a photo of it, by which time I hope to have sorted a fair use picture of the 1956 cup final too. Oldelpaso (talk) 21:07, 8 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Good luck with that. When you take this article to FA I'll certainly be onside to help in any way I can. Even though I am a Man U supporter, one of only three who actually live in Greater Manchester apparently. :-) --Malleus Fatuorum (talk) 21:22, 8 June 2008 (UTC)[reply]


Hello... What a great READ this article is! I don't give more than a Hoot about 'Football' Yet this whole story held me from start to finish... Should be a movie or something. Kudo's to all who contributed to it. Why Wikipedia is on my Bookmark list! Sincerely, 71.6.81.62 (talk) 00:50, 22 October 2009 (UTC)--MBD--71.6.81.62 (talk) 00:50, 22 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Anachronism

Bert Trautmann was never "red carded" as red and yellow cards did not come into use until the 1970 World Cup (See Penalty card). Even if one argues that this is a metaphor for being sent off, it introduces a sense of accidental - and potentially misleading - anachronism. I have changed it to "being sent off." —Preceding unsigned comment added by 208.78.113.193 (talk) 20:43, 26 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

You are absolutely right, good spot. Oldelpaso (talk) 15:03, 29 November 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Does this belong into the article?

Ath the end of the second paragraph: He had died twenty days later after smoking pot. He was using soda powder. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 84.163.29.116 (talk) 14:49, 22 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Personal Information

In the box "Personal Information" on the Article page his date of birth 22 October 1923, correct enough, but then added in brackets: (aged 86).

Somehow I don't think that is right and we cannot edit!

Can this obvious mistake be corrected? It may cause embarrassment.

MacOfJesus (talk) 18:44, 22 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Don't see what the problem is. Most personal infoboxes will calculate the person's age. Nothing to be ashamed of in being 86, I'm glad he's still around and in the unlikely event that he sees this, happy birthday Bert. Great article, one of the most interesting FA's I've read in some time.yorkshiresky (talk) 19:30, 22 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry, I now see the significance, I was not expecting to see a calculation of his age here. Virtual World! How real is that! Happy Birthday, too!

MacOfJesus (talk) 20:54, 22 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

What confused me was the comment above affirming of referring to a reference that he had died 20 years earlier, which appeared at the time to be true, is it? Maybe someone, who knows, should affirm or deny.

MacOfJesus (talk) 12:01, 5 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

It was vandalism, and was removed. Bert is alive and well. Oldelpaso (talk) 17:49, 5 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thank You.MacOfJesus (talk) 22:32, 5 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]


Factual Problem (another one)

I wonder if Bert Trautman ever reads this page. If so, I'd like to ask him a question. (Anyone else who knows the true story may also answer this one).

Which pow camp was Bert Trautman at?

It is claimed 'locally' that he was in Garswood Park Camp, Ashton in Makerfield, Lancashire. It is also claimed that he was in a camp in Huyton, Lancashire. Now, on this page, someone suggests another camp.

It's written that he played for Garswood Park against Haydock Park in 1946. Garswood Park camp closed in April, 1948. It is written that he was released in 1948 and played for Manchester city in 1949. This doesn't give him much time to have played for St.Helens Town, does it?

As it is, everybody's dad played against him, scored against him, had a pint with him, was his mate etc. etc. etc. So, over toyou Bert. What's the truestory?

92.239.71.235 (talk) 23:08, 5 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Intro

The introduction states that Trautmann made 545 appearances for Manchester City, but only 508 can be seen in the infobox. The introduction also states that the DFB's development scheme sent him to Burma, Tanzania and Pakistan, but Burma, Liberia and Pakistan are in the infobox. If the 545 appearances also include cup games, could this be mentioned? And what's with Tanzania/Liberia? Can someone check and correct the information? Many thanks. Jared Preston (talk) 17:27, 7 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

1956 FA Cup Final

It would be great if someone could create the line-ups for the 1956 FA Cup Final and include it in the article. -- Linksfuss (talk) 10:25, 24 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

The team line-ups are shown at 1956 FA Cup Final#Details. Interesting information, but I think it would be off-topic to include it in an article about the life of one of the players. – Wdchk (talk) 15:23, 24 August 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Location of Bert's remains

Anybody know where Bert was buried or cremated? I've looked everywhere, no joy.Fletcherbrian (talk) 14:45, 1 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

According to the Manchester Evening News in a piece published in July, shortly after his death: "Trautmann’s third wife Marlis and his family plan to scatter his ashes over the sea in Valencia, where he spent his final years, on October 22 which would have been his 90th birthday." Oldelpaso (talk) 18:07, 1 February 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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