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The Article "Barriers to Effective Postmenopausal Osteoporosis Treatment: A Qualitative Study of Patients’ and Practitioners’ Views" is overall good. Just as the title suggests, the article's main subject is the treatments for postmenopausal osteoporosis. Although the article is not big in size, it sure has a sufficient amount of references. Besides the clear and comprehend-able language, one draw back would be the chronological order of the ideas and sub-topics within the article. I personally think that there is a better way to manage the order of sub-topics.