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13 October 2013
- 02:3602:36, 13 October 2013 diff hist +69 M60 tank →M60A3 series
20 July 2013
- 08:5508:55, 20 July 2013 diff hist +852 Talk:Ender's Game →Plot is wrong.
- 07:5807:58, 20 July 2013 diff hist +490 Talk:Ender's Game →Plot is wrong.: new section
- 07:1407:14, 20 July 2013 diff hist −30 Ender's Game Made minor changes. Whoever keeps changing the synopsis has never read the book. Tag: Visual edit
19 July 2013
- 22:4622:46, 19 July 2013 diff hist +544 Ender's Game Gave more detail to end of story. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:2122:21, 19 July 2013 diff hist +528 Ender's Game Further changes to correct my Grammar and create a better synopsis that is factually and chronologically correct. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:0722:07, 19 July 2013 diff hist +1,335 Ender's Game Made changes to synopsis which are not factually consistent with book. Removed most uses of "cadet" a word which does not appear even once in the text of the book and changed it to launchie or soldier. Corrected use of squad. In Ender's Game it is ARMY Tag: Visual edit
- 21:4321:43, 19 July 2013 diff hist −3 Ender's Game Ender was ten when he was promoted to Command School, from Chapter 13 of Ender's Game. Valentine: “Ender’s only ten years old,” she said. “I thought you told me last time he’d be eligible for a leave when he was sixteen.” Card, Orson Scott Tag: Visual edit
- 03:1603:16, 19 July 2013 diff hist +47 Ender's Game Corrected inaccurate statement claiming that Col. Graff discovered the identities of Locke and Demosthenes. IC Fleet made that discovery and then consulted with Graf. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:4202:42, 19 July 2013 diff hist +58 Ender's Game No edit summary Tag: Visual edit
- 02:3402:34, 19 July 2013 diff hist +349 Ender's Game Updated minor points and cleaned up language. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:2202:22, 19 July 2013 diff hist +502 Ender's Game Made summary closer to the story as it appears in the book. Removed inaccurate terms such as squads. Added age references so people do not become confused by the movies which has changed the age of the characters. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:3301:33, 19 July 2013 diff hist +54 Ender's Game The summary is mostly wrong. There were no "squads" in Ender's Game, they were all "Armies". There are several other points that are not accurate to the book. Tag: Visual edit
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24 February 2008
- 01:4301:43, 24 February 2008 diff hist −2 Adoniram Judson →The "Karen Apostle" and expanding church growth