User contributions for 42.2.34.156

18 June 2017

• 08:1508:15, 18 June 2017 diff hist −28 V for Vendetta: Music from the Motion Picture No edit summary

15 June 2017

• 12:3712:37, 15 June 2017 diff hist −2,278 The Mock Turtles Removed paragraphs that were primarily about Coogan, and not the band in general.

14 June 2017

• 13:4113:41, 14 June 2017 diff hist −219 Wang Chung (band) →Reunions (1997-present): Removed mention of covers album. 1) Not notable album 2) Seemed like a plug for commercial product

11 June 2017

• 13:4113:41, 11 June 2017 diff hist −224 Amy Mathews →Personal life: removed section, as it only included "she enjoys travel" and a list of countries she has visited. This did not seem notable. Tag: section blanking

8 June 2017

• 14:1514:15, 8 June 2017 diff hist +481 Talk:LMS Ivatt Class 2 2-6-0 →Good grief!: new section
• 14:1214:12, 8 June 2017 diff hist −31 LMS Ivatt Class 2 2-6-0 →Design

7 June 2017

• 14:0914:09, 7 June 2017 diff hist −10 Shout (Tears for Fears song) →B-side
• 12:0412:04, 7 June 2017 diff hist −7 The Americans →Casting: replaced wordy "stated that" with "said"

6 June 2017

• 14:0814:08, 6 June 2017 diff hist −13 Spectrum (Billy Cobham album) →Recording: simplified clumsy writing

5 June 2017

• 07:5207:52, 5 June 2017 diff hist −13 Noel Edmonds →Early life and radio career: Shortened "was undergoing treatment" to "was treated"

4 June 2017

• 10:0410:04, 4 June 2017 diff hist −34 Steve Strange →The Detroit Starrzz and Visage (Mk III): removed superfluous words, replaced "stated" with "said"
• 09:5109:51, 4 June 2017 diff hist −58 Presdales School removed redundant "boys and girls" "16-18" etc
• 09:2709:27, 4 June 2017 diff hist −17 Piccadilly Palare Rewrote wordy sentences.

31 May 2017

• 10:3910:39, 31 May 2017 diff hist −53 Get Me Roger Stone Removed redundant sentence from first section

27 May 2017

• 13:5313:53, 27 May 2017 diff hist +127 Talk:RAF Staff College, Andover →Where was it?: new section

22 May 2017

• 13:3213:32, 22 May 2017 diff hist −7 D.I.S.C.O. No edit summary
• 13:3013:30, 22 May 2017 diff hist −3 Ottawan No edit summary

21 May 2017

• 10:4010:40, 21 May 2017 diff hist −9 The Left Banke →Death of Michael Brown: removed redundant "actively"

20 May 2017

• 11:5111:51, 20 May 2017 diff hist −12 16:9 aspect ratio →In Asia: replaced "commencement" with simpler "started"

16 May 2017

• 10:3810:38, 16 May 2017 diff hist −81 Roger Zelazny →Characteristic themes: shortened and sharpened sentence

11 May 2017

• 11:0411:04, 11 May 2017 diff hist +56 J. D. Bernal No edit summary

1 May 2017

• 09:2409:24, 1 May 2017 diff hist +150 Talk:Cambodia: A Book for People Who Find Television Too Slow →What on earth does this mean?: new section
• 09:0009:00, 1 May 2017 diff hist −93 Linda Ronstadt →A return to roots music: Removed PR guff, simplified sentence and misuse of "unique"
• 08:5808:58, 1 May 2017 diff hist −4 Linda Ronstadt →From rock to operetta: simplified tense

30 April 2017

• 23:3923:39, 30 April 2017 diff hist −5 The Association →Comings and goings: simplified tense

29 April 2017

• 06:3306:33, 29 April 2017 diff hist +2 Fugazi Change "hiatus" to simpler "break"

28 April 2017

• 14:1914:19, 28 April 2017 diff hist +71 Talk:Here Come the Double Deckers! →Why so few episodes?: new section
• 06:3006:30, 28 April 2017 diff hist −5,324 Isochronic tones Removed the irrelevant and redundant material explaining "entrainment" -- there's a separate article for that Tag: section blanking
• 06:2806:28, 28 April 2017 diff hist +120 Talk:Isochronic tones →Not really about isochronic tones: new section

22 April 2017

• 14:1114:11, 22 April 2017 diff hist −8 Tamerlane chess removed redundant "multiple"

20 April 2017

• 10:2110:21, 20 April 2017 diff hist −45 Gary Snyder Simplified prolix sentence

9 April 2017

• 08:4408:44, 9 April 2017 diff hist −4 USS Carl Vinson →Awards: replaced "numerous" with simpler "many"

8 April 2017

• 13:3813:38, 8 April 2017 diff hist −4 The Protectors →Actor relationships: replace "numerous" with "many"

3 April 2017

• 08:3708:37, 3 April 2017 diff hist +15 Wild Men of Borneo →Life: added metric equivalents

22 March 2017

• 08:5708:57, 22 March 2017 diff hist −8 Grace Slick →The Great Society: replaced "pertaining to" with "about"

20 March 2017

• 10:0910:09, 20 March 2017 diff hist −24 Sinking of the RMS Lusitania →Contraband and second explosion: Shortened and simplified start of para.
• 10:0810:08, 20 March 2017 diff hist +2 Sinking of the RMS Lusitania →Last survivors: Last survivor more important than last American survivor. Reordered paras.
• 08:3108:31, 20 March 2017 diff hist +152 Talk:Vehicle registration plate →Licence vs registration.: new section

3 March 2017

• 14:4314:43, 3 March 2017 diff hist +332 Talk:Sean Spicer →Birthplace?
• 14:1914:19, 3 March 2017 diff hist +194 Talk:Kellyanne Conway →What on earth does this mean?: new section
• 14:0714:07, 3 March 2017 diff hist +84 Talk:Shirley Manson →Pompous tone: new section

23 February 2017

• 14:1514:15, 23 February 2017 diff hist −39 Taboo (2017 TV series) →Reception: removed padding
• 12:4512:45, 23 February 2017 diff hist +1 Frederick Storrs Turner No edit summary
• 12:2012:20, 23 February 2017 diff hist −35 Goldsmiths, University of London →Student Housing: Removed redundant "which offer accommodation for students"
• 12:1812:18, 23 February 2017 diff hist −56 Malcolm McLaren Removed Category:Alumni of Goldsmiths, University of London as the article does not say he was at Goldsmiths'
• 10:5110:51, 23 February 2017 diff hist −42 Hot Tuna →History: simplified some sentences. Replace pretentious "hiatus" with "break"

22 February 2017

• 10:1410:14, 22 February 2017 diff hist −30 Robinson Road, Hong Kong Removed "2-lane, bidirectional" as most roads are two lanes and are bidirectional, so this is not particularly notable.

9 February 2017

• 09:0009:00, 9 February 2017 diff hist −4 Betty Marsden →Death: Removed initial caps and incorrectly used apostrophe

2 February 2017

• 11:5311:53, 2 February 2017 diff hist −13 African Reference Alphabet →1982 version
• 11:0711:07, 2 February 2017 diff hist −35 Train to Busan →Remake: rewrote Variety announcement