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02:5302:53, 9 November 2024 diff hist +4 m Fuzzy bit No edit summary current

00:5800:58, 6 November 2024 diff hist −75 The Day After →Plot

20:1020:10, 29 October 2024 diff hist −11 Peace on Earth (film) Naw. current
20:0920:09, 29 October 2024 diff hist +384 Peace on Earth (film) →Plot: Partial rewrite.

23:4123:41, 23 October 2024 diff hist −8 m The Day After make that up by 4.
23:3923:39, 23 October 2024 diff hist +120 The Day After →Plot: Since word count is an issue, removed the conversions to kilometer and the mention in this section of Guttenberg as Klein. Trimmed the part about the nuclear attack (e.g. needn't mention what blinds Danny) but readded in shortened form McCoy's part as I'm told it's important to his characterization (not to mention the character's only characterization we give in this summary). The word count about the nuclear attack increases by 5, but this part of the summary is left in better shape.

21:5721:57, 19 October 2024 diff hist +1 m Cellana strigilis →Description current
20:0620:06, 19 October 2024 diff hist +11 Timeline of transport in Oslo Word order. Also wikilinked horsecar. current
20:0420:04, 19 October 2024 diff hist +203 Talk:Original War →issues that needs to corrected: Done. current
20:0220:02, 19 October 2024 diff hist −1 Original War Changed infobox: the game is an RTS, although a highly unusual one, missing defining features of the genre. (Compare Bionic Commando, a series of platformers without a jump button.) Soviet Union -> Russia, per talk page. current
19:5619:56, 19 October 2024 diff hist −16 Original War →Plot
19:5519:55, 19 October 2024 diff hist −115 Original War →Gameplay: I was wrong.
19:1719:17, 19 October 2024 diff hist −239 The Day After →Plot: Re: this and previous edit, rm mention of Pact forces in East Germany consisting of East German and Soviet Armies. Force composition is interesting, but doesn't really help understand the hows and whys of this movie or the real life situation it was made to talk about. Both sides attack targets in the Persian Gulf. Tactical nukes are stated policy, not a new threat. This is 1 day.
18:3918:39, 19 October 2024 diff hist +407 The Day After →Plot: restored mention and wikilink of the Helmstedt-Marienborn crossing. This is not important to the plot. However, the film's grounding in the real world is both crucial to it and something it's very famous for, so elementary information viewers were assumed to know but our readers may not is more relevant & possibly of interest to our readers. This includes elementary information about the nature of transportation arrangements to West Berlin, the film's flashpoint for nuclear war.

04:1304:13, 18 October 2024 diff hist −324 The Day After →Plot: I ain't happy with trying to decide by word count what gets said. Things take the time they take. However, if length's a factor, the first order of business is to say things more tersely, no downside in that. Also removed the mention about dispatch of nuclear weapons, as AIUI that only comes up as a mention of the Brits pensive about NATO positioning Pershing-2s and cruise missiles in Europe, which is background to the strategic situation but not part of the whole thing cooking off.

16:3616:36, 15 October 2024 diff hist 0 m Cultural Marxism conspiracy theory capitalization

22:4922:49, 9 October 2024 diff hist −285 Original War →Plot: tightening things up

21:4621:46, 18 September 2024 diff hist +15 m Killing of Sonya Massey →Aftermath: (sigh)
21:4321:43, 18 September 2024 diff hist −37 Killing of Sonya Massey →Aftermath: I think our readers get that it was controversial.

21:0921:09, 12 September 2024 diff hist −1 m Incubation: Time Is Running Out →Plot: grammar

22:5722:57, 8 September 2024 diff hist 0 m Texas Ranger Division the January 28, 1918 massacre -> the January 28, 1918 massacre to make it clearer to readers without mouseovering, tapping or the like that the link leads to the article for this specific one and not massacres in general

00:0600:06, 1 September 2024 diff hist +179 m Ayaiga archiving abc link current

23:1623:16, 31 August 2024 diff hist +4 m Harry McNish →Polar Medal: wikilinked medal
23:0923:09, 31 August 2024 diff hist +76 Mrs Chippy →Cultural references: link to painting at Wikimedia Commons current

12:3712:37, 29 August 2024 diff hist 0 m Vilhelm Junnila →Political views: decapitalization
12:3612:36, 29 August 2024 diff hist −250 Mari Rantanen →Controversies: you mean "in the same paragraph." This is true. I don't think it changes things one way or the other about her statement about being blue-eyed.

01:0601:06, 11 August 2024 diff hist −1 m In the Presence of Mine Enemies No edit summary

21:0221:02, 2 August 2024 diff hist −720 Imane Khelif "Biographies of living persons ("BLPs") must be written conservatively and with regard for the subject's privacy. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a tabloid: it is not Wikipedia's job to be sensationalist, or to be the primary vehicle for the spread of titillating claims about people's lives." - WP:BLP. In theory this could be a neutral statement about a curious quirk of biology; in practice it'll make people think or wonder about Khelif, and per the note on records, has no basis to do so.

16:2316:23, 1 August 2024 diff hist +953 Sinfest Addressing current state of the subject via primary sources, by restricting ourselves strictly to factual statements about the sources used rather than more general statements. Tag: Reverted

22:4122:41, 12 July 2024 diff hist +1 m Boiler explosion →Nuclear reactor explosions

23:3823:38, 4 July 2024 diff hist +4 m My Lai massacre →Investigation and cover-up: redirect
23:3623:36, 4 July 2024 diff hist +66 Five O'Clock Follies +see also section with a link to United States news media and the Vietnam War. Could work it into the lead instead.

18:4018:40, 22 June 2024 diff hist +806 Sponge grenade →United States

00:4100:41, 11 June 2024 diff hist +77 Paul Gosar attacking AOC -> killing AOC. Now please strap in, this is where the nitpicking comes. It's an important distinction that Gosar's video showed him killing, not just attacking a colleague. But if we write "killing a character with AOC's face", readers'll think of something far worse than the video (which was already bad enough to get him censured & kicked off committees). And if we writer "killing a monster with AOC's face" they'll think of a giant boar or something. So giant it is.

20:4020:40, 1 May 2024 diff hist −28 AI-assisted targeting in the Gaza Strip Trimming lead

13:3913:39, 30 April 2024 diff hist −24 AI-assisted targeting in the Gaza Strip →Lavender: phrasing
13:3013:30, 30 April 2024 diff hist +71 AI-assisted targeting in the Gaza Strip Italicized The Guardian. Rephrased the bit in == Lavender == about identification of targets as legitimate. It paraphrased uncomfortably close and stopped to give and define the IDF term for the process (incrimination). What it is is important, what name the IDF uses about it isn't. (Is the rephrased text too harsh?)
13:0113:01, 30 April 2024 diff hist +9 AI-assisted targeting in the Gaza Strip →Technological background: wikilinked combatant, non-combatant (changed spelling from noncombatant)

11:2911:29, 29 April 2024 diff hist +9 m AI-assisted targeting in the Gaza Strip "likely" is an important point, but doesn't go there. Something the IDF bombs is a target, no matter what it is. Added Kohavi's rank.

11:1411:14, 24 April 2024 diff hist −11 AI-assisted targeting in the Gaza Strip →Ethical ramifications: ¤%&/ it, changed it to just "diligence"

22:5522:55, 22 April 2024 diff hist +1 AI-assisted targeting in the Gaza Strip →Ethical ramifications: "Degree of diligence" -> "Extents of diligence"
22:5422:54, 22 April 2024 diff hist +11 AI-assisted targeting in the Gaza Strip →Ethical ramifications: "due care" -> "degree of diligence"
22:5322:53, 22 April 2024 diff hist +44 m AI-assisted targeting in the Gaza Strip italics

10:2410:24, 19 April 2024 diff hist +307 Template:Did you know nominations/AI-assisted targeting in the Gaza Strip withdrawn
10:2310:23, 19 April 2024 diff hist −1,074 m Template:Did you know nominations/AI-assisted targeting in the Gaza Strip Reverted edit by Kizor (talk) to last version by Launchballer Tag: Rollback
10:2210:22, 19 April 2024 diff hist +1,074 Template:Did you know nominations/AI-assisted targeting in the Gaza Strip closed as withdrawn Tag: Reverted

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