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18:0618:06, 3 December 2024 diff hist +58 Augusta, Georgia "Independent" rather than "unconsolidated" (consolidation isn't discussed until later). Also, under Georgia law, both Blythe and Hephzibah are officially called cities rather than "towns," which have a different definition in the state. current
17:0217:02, 3 December 2024 diff hist +61 Kash Patel →Personal life: Syntax -- less convoluted Tag: Disambiguation links added

16:4716:47, 2 December 2024 diff hist +13 Susie King Taylor →Childhood: Avoid repetition (3 times in same paragraph) of word "born"; clarity current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
03:0903:09, 2 December 2024 diff hist +4 Colonial Park Cemetery Stylistic fix Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
03:0703:07, 2 December 2024 diff hist +35 Colonial Park Cemetery Avoids unnecessary repetition of word "cemetery" in lead paragraph. Dates added. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
03:0003:00, 2 December 2024 diff hist +16 Augusta, Georgia Clarity. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
02:5402:54, 2 December 2024 diff hist +1 Augusta, Georgia Comma to set off clause Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
02:4902:49, 2 December 2024 diff hist −34 Augusta, Georgia Correction. This is the metro area; the city proper and its population were already cited at start of paragraph. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22:5122:51, 1 December 2024 diff hist −5 Madonna Delete repeated word
20:0420:04, 1 December 2024 diff hist −2 Madonna →1958–1978: Early life: Fix run-on sentence.
20:0120:01, 1 December 2024 diff hist 0 Madonna →1958–1978: Early life: Correction: at five years of age. Her age at time of mother's death is very important.
19:5719:57, 1 December 2024 diff hist +37 Madonna →1958–1978: Early life: Basic syntax fixes. "She" must be clear after other "she" refs to Madonna's mother. Avoid repetition such as ""
18:5018:50, 1 December 2024 diff hist 0 Taylor Square (Savannah, Georgia) →Dedication: syntax current
18:2318:23, 1 December 2024 diff hist +24 Lake Hartwell Syntax current
18:1918:19, 1 December 2024 diff hist 0 Savannah River Tugaloo link at first mention, not second current
01:2901:29, 1 December 2024 diff hist +70 Savannah River Add Tallulah Gorge details; indicate reservoir; no quotation marks.
01:1801:18, 1 December 2024 diff hist +140 Savannah River More logical order of description.
00:3400:34, 1 December 2024 diff hist +168 Culture of the United States →Public holidays: Clarity current
00:1500:15, 1 December 2024 diff hist −5 Culture of the United States →Youth dependence: $1,000 month is too dated a stat.
00:1400:14, 1 December 2024 diff hist +22 Culture of the United States →Youth dependence: Clarification about "the custom" (which alone is too vague).

20:0020:00, 28 November 2024 diff hist +14 Susie King Taylor →American Civil War: Clarity of syntax
19:5719:57, 28 November 2024 diff hist −80 Susie King Taylor →Childhood: Syntax, grammar, vocabulary fix. Removed editorializing sentence.
19:4419:44, 28 November 2024 diff hist +80 Susie King Taylor →Childhood: Grammar: fix dangling modifier. Biographical style: Use Susie's maiden name during her childhood years (she becomes Taylor much later). Add details about Savannah: this was an important city in that era.
15:3515:35, 28 November 2024 diff hist +2 Savannah River Syntax Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
00:2000:20, 28 November 2024 diff hist 0 Gustave Courbet →Courbet and the Paris Commune: Colon, not semicolon. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
00:1400:14, 28 November 2024 diff hist +23 Gustave Courbet →Courbet and the Paris Commune: Clarity, punctuation fix. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

22:4722:47, 27 November 2024 diff hist +28 Denver WP stule: The metro population should be cited first, before any unofficial urban area populations like the Front Range Urban Corridor.
19:2919:29, 27 November 2024 diff hist +20 Susie King Taylor WP link Tag: Disambiguation links added
19:1919:19, 27 November 2024 diff hist +33 Susie King Taylor Should appear in lead.
19:0819:08, 27 November 2024 diff hist +6 Susie King Taylor Parallel style with birthplace
19:0819:08, 27 November 2024 diff hist +4 Susie King Taylor Add link to WP article
19:0719:07, 27 November 2024 diff hist +7 Susie King Taylor Add date tag.
19:0419:04, 27 November 2024 diff hist +4 Susie King Taylor →Teacher: Spell out -- no postal codes in Wikipedia text and captions
19:0219:02, 27 November 2024 diff hist +179 Susie King Taylor →Legacy: Description, fix typo
03:1103:11, 27 November 2024 diff hist +4 I Can Help Link current
03:0903:09, 27 November 2024 diff hist +99 I Can Help More precise: November, or four months to climb the charts. Also give genre.