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05:2205:22, 2 May 2015 diff hist −43 Behavioral optometry →top: Removing disputed source, and language which is only found in that source. This may need more work.

06:1706:17, 29 April 2015 diff hist −64 Behavioral optometry →top: Removing sweeping statements, and changing awkward wording

18:5118:51, 27 April 2015 diff hist −163 Behavioral optometry →top: Removing sweeping statements which are very misleading if one only reads the intro. Slightly tougher wording than my previous attempt.
05:0505:05, 27 April 2015 diff hist +542 Talk:Behavioral optometry →further reversion: Lede
02:0702:07, 27 April 2015 diff hist −150 Behavioral optometry →top: Better summary of article and sources

19:5619:56, 25 April 2015 diff hist −212 Behavioral optometry →top: Novella blog is not RS for such a sweeping statement, and the other source does not totally support this statement
18:5018:50, 25 April 2015 diff hist +368 Talk:Behavioral optometry →further reversion
15:2015:20, 25 April 2015 diff hist 0 m Wikipedia:Avoid instruction creep →top: Updating wikilink
15:1615:16, 25 April 2015 diff hist −225 Behavioral optometry →top: Wording contradicts the end of the first section, which says this approach is at least useful for a few issues. Remaining paragraph makes the fringe aspect clear.

18:4518:45, 31 March 2015 diff hist +11 Talk:Bates method I'm now thinking that this would be better

23:0123:01, 27 March 2015 diff hist +510 Talk:Bates method →Unsubstantiated vs. ineffective
12:0612:06, 27 March 2015 diff hist +4 Bates method Trying again; tone should be impartial
05:1905:19, 27 March 2015 diff hist −32 Bates method →top: Actually this isn't really needed at all, since this basic point is established by the previous paragraph

04:2804:28, 26 March 2015 diff hist −4 Bates method →top: Rather stringy sentence
04:2604:26, 26 March 2015 diff hist +6 Bates method →top: Trying to make the tone more impartial. Not perfect, but better than "because it is ineffective".