User contributions for Peter schorn

26 June 2024

• 17:3817:38, 26 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Abstract data type Fixed comma splice: "rather" cannot be used to join two independent clauses. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

20 June 2024

• 16:2816:28, 20 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Electronic viewfinder Fixed comma splice Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

4 April 2024

• 02:3002:30, 4 April 2024 diff hist 0 m International Article Number Removed comma splice. "Therefore" cannot join two independent clauses.
• 02:1202:12, 4 April 2024 diff hist −1 m International Article Number Removed unnecessary comma.

11 March 2024

• 01:5501:55, 11 March 2024 diff hist +4 m CMYK color model Fixed comma splice.

4 February 2024

• 01:5501:55, 4 February 2024 diff hist +4 m MeCard (QR code) Fixed comma splice.

7 December 2023

• 01:4801:48, 7 December 2023 diff hist +1 m Yarborough v. Alvarado Fixed a comma splice: "however" cannot be used to join two independent clauses.

2 December 2023

• 04:2404:24, 2 December 2023 diff hist 0 m Pennsylvania v. Mimms Fixed comma splice.

1 November 2023

• 22:1222:12, 1 November 2023 diff hist +1 Phase (waves) No edit summary Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

15 October 2023

• 20:0820:08, 15 October 2023 diff hist +1 m Sovereign state Fixed a comma splice: "however" cannot be used to join two independent clauses. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 06:0906:09, 15 October 2023 diff hist 0 m Phantom (high-speed camera brand) Fixed comma splice.
• 05:4005:40, 15 October 2023 diff hist +1 m Tannerite Fixed comma splice. "However" cannot be used to join two independent clauses.

13 October 2023

• 21:2121:21, 13 October 2023 diff hist +1 m Secondary surveillance radar Fixed comma splice.

11 October 2023

• 01:2901:29, 11 October 2023 diff hist +1 m Antonov An-225 Mriya Fixed comma splice. "However" cannot be used to join two independent clauses.

3 October 2023

• 19:2519:25, 3 October 2023 diff hist 0 m Unary function Fixed comma splice. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile app edit iOS app edit

23 September 2023

• 22:2222:22, 23 September 2023 diff hist +1 m Rasterisation Fixed comma splice

20 September 2023

• 03:4903:49, 20 September 2023 diff hist 0 m Bore gauge Fixed comma splice. current

15 August 2023

• 21:1421:14, 15 August 2023 diff hist +4 m Communication with submarines Fixed comma splice Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 21:0621:06, 15 August 2023 diff hist +1 m Communication with submarines Fixed comma splice Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 July 2023

• 15:0215:02, 7 July 2023 diff hist +1 m Fallacy of composition Fixed comma splice.
• 04:0204:02, 7 July 2023 diff hist −3 m Herc (The Wire) Fixed grammar issue.

25 June 2023

• 03:3303:33, 25 June 2023 diff hist −1 m Record sealing Fixed grammar error.

24 June 2023

• 03:2803:28, 24 June 2023 diff hist +136 Talk:Insufflation (medicine) →Gobbledygook: Reply Tag: Reply
• 03:2103:21, 24 June 2023 diff hist 0 m First pass effect Fixed comma splice

26 April 2023

• 00:0800:08, 26 April 2023 diff hist +1 Template:Wikipedia:Cleanup/Header Fixed comma splice. current Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 March 2023

• 00:2700:27, 23 March 2023 diff hist 0 m Leading-edge slat Fixed comma splice.

22 March 2023

• 22:3222:32, 22 March 2023 diff hist 0 Turkish Airlines Flight 1951 →Investigation: Fixed grammar issue. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit
• 00:0700:07, 22 March 2023 diff hist 0 DuckDuckGo →DuckDuckGo Private Browser: Fixed comma splice. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

13 March 2023

• 21:0521:05, 13 March 2023 diff hist +16 m John von Neumann Fixed more grammar issues.
• 20:5020:50, 13 March 2023 diff hist +1 m John von Neumann Fixed even more grammer issues. This section is very sloppy.
• 20:4920:49, 13 March 2023 diff hist +1 m John von Neumann Actually fixed grammar issues.
• 20:4820:48, 13 March 2023 diff hist 0 m John von Neumann Fixed comma splice.
• 20:4220:42, 13 March 2023 diff hist +1 m John von Neumann Fixed grammar issues.

12 March 2023

• 04:2804:28, 12 March 2023 diff hist +1 m Cocktail glass Fixed a comma splice: "however" cannot be used to join two independent clauses.

10 March 2023

• 16:1216:12, 10 March 2023 diff hist −5 m Boeing 737 rudder issues Fixed grammar issue.
• 16:0716:07, 10 March 2023 diff hist 0 m Boeing 737 rudder issues Fixed comma splice

5 March 2023

• 04:2304:23, 5 March 2023 diff hist +2 m Juan José Esparragoza Moreno fixed grammar issue

1 September 2022

• 05:4205:42, 1 September 2022 diff hist +1 m Directorate of Military Intelligence (United Kingdom) Fixed the comma splice.

25 August 2022

• 14:3214:32, 25 August 2022 diff hist −2 m UTF-16 The scare quotes are unnecessary here. Endianess is an established formal term that is being used in its intended sense.

24 August 2022

• 05:1305:13, 24 August 2022 diff hist −137 Anders Behring Breivik Square brackets should only be used in direct quotations. I removed some of them. I didn't have time to go through the entire article. Sentences must still be grammatically correct after parentheses are removed. For example, "the conditions under which he serves will remain (the same as earlier)" is incorrect because the sentence does not make sense without parentheses.
• 04:5504:55, 24 August 2022 diff hist −50 Anders Behring Breivik Do not place a comma before the word "or" unless it starts an independent clause.

16 August 2022

• 06:5306:53, 16 August 2022 diff hist +4 m Binary relation Fixed comma splice and added missing article ("the").
• 06:5006:50, 16 August 2022 diff hist +4 m Binary relation Fixed comma splice.
• 06:1706:17, 16 August 2022 diff hist +13 N User:Peter schorn ←Created page with 'Hello, World!' current
• 06:1506:15, 16 August 2022 diff hist 0 m Help:Userspace draft Fixed comma splice.
• 06:1306:13, 16 August 2022 diff hist −1,951 User talk:Peter schorn Removed Notices. current Tag: Blanking
• 06:1306:13, 16 August 2022 diff hist −2,406 User talk:Peter schorn →February 2014

23 January 2017

• 21:4021:40, 23 January 2017 diff hist +40 List of dinosaur genera No edit summary
• 21:2621:26, 23 January 2017 diff hist +9 List of dinosaur genera No edit summary
• 21:1321:13, 23 January 2017 diff hist −1 List of dinosaur genera No edit summary