Talk:Global Citizen Awards
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Proposed changes
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I work with the comms team at the Atlantic Council and I'd like to propose a few updates to this article, starting with the description of the event.
- Specific text to be revised: Global Citizen Awards is presented by the Atlantic Council annually to individuals who have made exceptional and distinctive contributions to strengthening the transatlantic relationship.
CHANGED TO Global Citizen Awards are presented by the Atlantic Council annually to individuals who underscore “the Atlantic Council's critical mission to shape the global future together” and who "seek to improve the state of the world."
- Reason for the change: For the grammar fix: Awards is plural. Added more direct language from Atlantic Council on why the awards are presented.
- References supporting change: https://sponsored.foreignpolicy.com/atlantic-council/these-leaders-are-defining-what-it-means-to-be-a-global-citizen/
| − | Global Citizen Awards | + | Global Citizen Awards are presented by the Atlantic Council annually to individuals who underscore “the Atlantic Council's critical mission to shape the global future together” and who "seek to improve the state of the world.”.
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Partly done, grammar fixed but synthesis should generally be preferred over quotes. Rusalkii (talk) 19:56, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
- Specific text to be added: I request this be added after the first sentence about the award:
The awards are presented annually during the United Nations General Assembly week in New York.
- Reason for the change: This provides more context on where/when the awards are given.
- References supporting change: https://www.atlanticcouncil.org/events/global-citizen-awards-2023/
https://sponsored.foreignpolicy.com/atlantic-council/these-leaders-are-defining-what-it-means-to-be-a-global-citizen/ https://www.atlanticcouncil.org/global-citizen-awards/
Done Rusalkii (talk) 19:56, 8 September 2024 (UTC)- Thank you @Rusalkii. Much appreciated.
- The sentence as it is now is not accurate. The award is more broad than just transatlantic focus. How about this instead?
Zackbaddorf (talk) 18:40, 10 September 2024 (UTC)− Global Citizen Awardsispresented by the Atlantic Council annually to individuals whohavemadeexceptionalanddistinctivecontributionstostrengtheningthetransatlanticrelationship.+ Global Citizen Awards are presented by the Atlantic Council annually to individuals who underscore the Atlantic Council's mission of shaping solutions to global challenges.- I agree "transatlantic" doesn't seem to be the only focus but this is still too close a paraphrase of the source. Rusalkii (talk) 21:49, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks @Rusalkii. I appreciate you reviewing and for explaining that it's too close of a paraphrase. How about this change instead?
− Global CitizenAwardsispresented by the AtlanticCouncilannuallytoindividualswhohavemadeexceptionalanddistinctivecontributionstostrengtheningthetransatlanticrelationship.+ Global Citizen Awards, presented by the Atlantic Council, honor individuals ranging from heads of state to world-renowned artists for their contributions toward addressing global challenges.- Zackbaddorf (talk) 16:37, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
- I agree "transatlantic" doesn't seem to be the only focus but this is still too close a paraphrase of the source. Rusalkii (talk) 21:49, 17 September 2024 (UTC)
- Specific text to be added or removed:
2024
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Nana Akufo-Addo - President of Ghana
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Kyriakos Mitsotakis - Prime Minister of Greece
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Giorgia Meloni - Prime Minister of Italy
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Miky Lee - Vice Chairwoman, CJ Group
- Reason for the change: Updating to be more recent.
- References supporting change: https://www.atlanticcouncil.org/global-citizen-awards/
- Specific text to be added or removed:
2023
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Volodymyr Zelenskyy – President of Ukraine
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Olaf Scholz – Chancellor of Germany
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Fumio Kishida – Prime Minister of Japan
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Janet Yellen – United States Secretary of the Treasury
• Victor L.L. Chu – Chairman and CEO of First Eastern Investment Group (Distinguished Service Award)
- Reason for the change: Updating to be more recent.
- References supporting change: https://www.president.gov.ua/en/news/volodimir-zelenskij-vid-imeni-ukrayinskogo-narodu-otrimav-pr-85773
https://mia.mk/en/story/scholz-zelensky-among-those-awarded-global-citizen-awards https://www.mofa.go.jp/na/na1/us/page4e_001478.html https://home.treasury.gov/news/press-releases/jy1754 https://www.chathamhouse.org/about-us/our-people/victor-chu
Done, though note that your source for Chu didn't actually contain the relevant infomration. I've replaced it. Rusalkii (talk) 19:56, 8 September 2024 (UTC)
Since I work for the Atlantic Council and thus have a conflict of interest, I will not be making any changes to the page myself. I am hoping, though, that editors who watch this Talk page will be able to review this request and then update the page. I appreciate your attention to this matter. Zackbaddorf (talk) 21:09, 6 September 2024 (UTC)
Remove inaccurate information and revise title
[edit] | An impartial editor has reviewed the proposed edit(s) and asked the editor with a conflict of interest to go ahead and make the suggested changes. |
I work with the comms team at the Atlantic Council and I'd like to propose a few updates to this article.
REMOVAL REQUEST
- Specific text to be removed:
2004 Stanislav Petrov - lieutenant colonel, who played a key role in the 1983 Soviet nuclear false alarm incident.
- Reason for the change: This information was erroneously added. If you look at the link, you'll see that it mentions that Petrov was provided the "World Citizen Award" by the Association of World Citizens (AWC). Of course, flagging that the two references be removed as well.
- References supporting change: https://web.archive.org/web/20200731194757/https://brightstarsound.com/
TITLE REVISIONS
- Specific text to be revised:
| − | [[Erna Solberg]] - [[Prime Minister of | + | [[Erna Solberg]] - [[Prime Minister of Norway]]
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- Reason for the change: Correcting this to reflect the proper formatting of the page on Wikipedia.
- References supporting change: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Prime_Minister_of_Norway
- Specific text to be revised:
| − | [[Wynton Marsalis]] - Managing and Artistic Director, | + | [[Wynton Marsalis]] - Managing and Artistic Director, [[Jazz at Lincoln Center]]
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- Reason for the change: Adding link to Wikipedia page.
- References supporting change: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jazz_at_Lincoln_Center
- Specific text to be revised:
| − | [[Queen Rania Al Abdullah]] - | + | [[Queen Rania Al Abdullah]] - [[Hashemite Kingdom of Jordan]]
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- Reason for the change: Adding link to Wikipedia page.
- References supporting change: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jordan
- Specific text to be revised:
| − | [[Aung San Suu Kyi]] - Chair, Burmese | + | [[Aung San Suu Kyi]] - Chair, Burmese [[National League for Democracy]]
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- Reason for the change: Adding link to Wikipedia page.
- References supporting change: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/National_League_for_Democracy
Since I work for the Atlantic Council and thus have a conflict of interest, I will not be making any changes to the page myself. I am hoping, though, that editors who watch this Talk page will be able to review this request and then update the page. I appreciate your attention to this matter.
Zackbaddorf (talk) 18:41, 10 September 2024 (UTC)
- Hi, having reviewed this request I am happy for you to go ahead and make the changes yourself. Thank you for following the COI request process. Axad12 (talk) 09:00, 20 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you @Axad12! I made the changes and flagged my COI in the edits as well. Zackbaddorf (talk) 16:21, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
- Appreciated, thank you for following the COI edit procedure with this request. Axad12 (talk) 16:24, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you @Axad12! I made the changes and flagged my COI in the edits as well. Zackbaddorf (talk) 16:21, 21 October 2024 (UTC)
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I work with the comms team at the Atlantic Council and I'd like to propose a move of the page as explained below.
Requested move 21 October 2024
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Global Citizen Awards → Atlantic Council Global Citizen Awards – Per Wikipedia's Article_titles policy, a good Wikipedia article title has "Precision – The title unambiguously identifies the article's subject and distinguishes it from other subjects." The Atlantic Council is one of multiple organization that has a 'Global Citizen Award.' While it is important to note that the Atlantic Council has annually honored notable world leaders, mostly presidents and prime ministers, since 2010, the Atlantic Council's Global Citizen Awards should be differentiated from the other similarly named awards. The other awards:
Clinton Global Citizen Award
https://www.whitehouse.gov/briefing-room/speeches-remarks/2024/09/23/remarks-by-president-biden-receiving-the-clinton-global-citizen-award-new-york-new-york/
Waislitz Global Citizen Award https://www.globalcitizen.org/en/programs/waislitz-award/
Henley & Partners' Global Citizen Award https://www.henleyglobal.com/philanthropy/corporate-social-responsibility/global-citizen-award
University of South Florida's Global Citizens Award https://www.usf.edu/undergrad/hipur/programs/global-citizens-project.aspx
UNCW Office of Global Partnerships and International Education's Global Citizen Award https://uncw.edu/myuncw/seahawk-life/support-success/international/fac-staff/awards/global-citizen-award
SOKA University Global Citizen Award https://www.soka.edu/soka-global-citizen-award
UN Association Global Citizen Award https://www.unadane.org/global-citizen-award.html
Experiment in International Living Global Citizen Award https://www.eilireland.org/explore/action-at-home/the-global-citizen-award/
The International Global Citizen’s Award http://globalcitizensaward.org/
Jacksonville University's Global Citizen Award https://www.ju.edu/globalcitizen/
Georgetown Baratta Center for Global Business's Global Citizen Award https://globalbusiness.georgetown.edu/global-impact-award/
AMISA Global Citizen Award https://www.amisa.us/awards
Broder-Ackermann Global Citizen Award https://www.caes.uga.edu/students/scholarships/broder-ackermann.html
Alternatively, I suppose the article could be named Global Citizen Awards (Atlantic Council) per Parenthetical disambiguation under Article_titles to differentiate it from the others. Zackbaddorf (talk) 20:24, 21 October 2024 (UTC)