chore: review, edit docs that haven't been modified in 60+ days (#448)

Katie Horne · web-flow · commit 03304181c0d1 · 2021-06-30T12:34:29.000-05:00
diff --git a/about.md b/about.md
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ enterprise security.
 
 Coder's pre-configured workspaces allow project organization members to define
 what language version and tooling are required to provide consistency across the
-organization and enable new members onboard and contribute. Developers focus on
+organization and enable new members to onboard and contribute. Developers focus on
 their projects and the end product, not on setup.
 
 These pre-configured workspaces are the foundation of Coder's _Dev Workspaces as
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ the cloud's power to provide consistent, secure, and performant workspaces for
 their development teams.
 
 Our software has been pulled over 19 million times from Docker, received over
-40,000 stars on GitHub, and is used by some of the world's largest enterprises.
+45,000 stars on GitHub, and is used by some of the world's largest enterprises.
 We're also working with pilot organizations to shape the future of remote
 development through Coder.
 
diff --git a/admin/access-control/index.md b/admin/access-control/index.md
@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@ and **OpenID Connect**.
 
 ## Built-In Authentication
 
-Built-in authentication allows you (or any admin) to manually create users, who
-then log in with their email address and temporary password. Coder will ask them
+Built-in authentication allows you (or any admin) to manually create users who
+log in with their email address and temporary password. Coder will ask them
 to change their password after they log in the first time.
 
 ## OpenID Connect
diff --git a/admin/access-control/user-management.md b/admin/access-control/user-management.md
@@ -4,17 +4,17 @@ description: Learn how to add, delete and manage Coder users.
 ---
 
 [Site managers](/access-control/user-roles#site-manager-permissions) can create
-and manage users from the **Users** page, which is accessible under **Manage** >
+and manage users from the **Users** page, which is accessible at **Manage** >
 **Users**.
 
 ## Creating a new user
 
 To create a new user:
 
 1. Go to **Manage** > **Users** > **New User**.
-1. In the new dialog window, provide the user's **name** and **email address**
-   and select the **Auth Type** you want for the account. Select **Built-In** as
-   your Auth Type if you want the user to access Coder with a username/password
+1. When prompted, provide the user's **name** and **email address** and select
+   the **Auth Type** you want for the account. Select **Built-In** as your Auth
+   Type if you want the user to access Coder with a username/password
    combination; select **OpenID Connect** as your Auth Type if you would like to
    use your organization's OpenID Connect Identity Provider.
 1. Finally, choose the **Organization** to which the user belongs (this will
diff --git a/admin/workspace-management/installing-jetbrains.md b/admin/workspace-management/installing-jetbrains.md
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ The process of installing an IDE onto your [image](../../images/index.md) is
 similar to installing the IDE onto a local machine.
 
 To see examples demonstrating how to install the various IDEs and configure your
-image to work with Coder's multi editor feature, refer to the
+image to work with Coder's multi editor feature, see the
 [sample images](https://github.com/cdr/enterprise-images) available on GitHub.
 
 ## Supported IDEs
diff --git a/images/index.md b/images/index.md
@@ -33,6 +33,6 @@ Coder hooks into Docker Registries, which store images that you can import. You
 can source control the Dockerfile in your project's repository to provide your
 organization with up-to-date information.
 
-## Get Started
+## In this section
 
 <children></children>
