Initial QualityScale updates for Squeezebox doc #38407
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📝 WalkthroughWalkthroughThe Squeezebox integration documentation has been updated to include a new "Prerequisites" section outlining the requirements for compatible hardware, software players, and Lyrion Music Servers. A configuration section detailing parameters such as Host, Port, Username, and Password has been added, along with descriptions for each. The note regarding HTTPS support has been clarified to indicate that a single configuration entry can encompass all Squeezebox devices connected to one LMS. Additionally, a "Removing the integration" section has been introduced, stating that standard integration removal procedures apply. Changes
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44-45: Manual Configuration Prompt
The line "When the LMS cannot be discovered, it can be manually configured." clearly directs users on what to do if auto-discovery fails. Consider, if available, adding a reference or link to additional manual configuration guidance for improved usability.
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[error] 56-56: Incorrect usage of the term: “https”, use “HTTPS” instead terminology
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29-33: Enhance Prerequisites Section Clarity
The newly added "Prerequisites" section is well-organized and clearly lists the requirements (i.e., the need for compatible players and a Lyrion/Logitech Media Server). This addition helps users quickly verify they satisfy the prerequisites before configuring the integration.
41-42: Clear Note on Unified Configuration
The note stating that a single configuration entry adds all Squeezebox devices connected to one LMS is clear and useful. It reinforces the convenience of the integration setup.
46-55: Comprehensive Configuration Block
The configuration block detailing the fields for Host, Port, Username, and Password is complete and described in a user-friendly manner. The provided examples (e.g., example IP address) enhance clarity.
85-87: Removing the Integration Section Clarity
The new "Removing the integration" section succinctly informs users that standard removal procedures apply. This addition enhances the readability of the documentation by addressing how to disable the integration without extra steps.
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41-42: Consistency in Note Block.In the note block (lines 40–42), the sentence now clearly explains that a single configuration entry covers all Squeezebox devices connected to one LMS. Please verify that the inline text formatting and any required indentation align with our documentation style guidelines; this was previously flagged.
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29-33: New Prerequisites Section Added.The addition of the "## Prerequisites" section (lines 29–33) effectively outlines the hardware or software requirements for using the Squeezebox integration. This addition enhances clarity for first-time setup, aligning with our quality guidelines.
If there are further prerequisites (e.g., software version requirements), consider adding them for completeness.
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3-3: Clear and Descriptive Integration Overview.The updated description on line 3 clearly states the purpose of the integration. It is concise and informative, which helps users immediately understand the content.
10-12: Updated Codeowners List Verified.The inclusion of the new code owner entries (lines 10–12) properly reflects the team members responsible for the integration. This update improves accountability.
44-45: Manual Configuration Guidance.The statement on lines 44–45 about manual configuration when LMS cannot be discovered is clear and succinct. It provides an immediate next step for users who cannot rely on automatic discovery.
46-57: Well-Structured Configuration Parameters Section.The configuration block (lines 46–57) is neatly formatted with clear descriptions for each parameter. In particular, the "Connect over HTTPS" parameter now uses the correct capitalization and detailed description, which improves consistency and readability.
61-74: Clear YAML Example for Transporter Integration.The YAML example provided for activating the Transporter (lines 61–74) is properly formatted and illustrative. The changes on lines 72–73 ensure that the media content values are clear. This example nicely complements the integration documentation.
85-89: Added "Removing the integration" Section.The new section on removing the integration (lines 85–89) is a welcome addition. It succinctly informs the user that standard removal procedures apply, maintaining consistency with Home Assistant documentation practices.
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29-33: Addition of the "Prerequisites" Section
The new "Prerequisites" section effectively outlines the required hardware/software resources. For enhanced clarity, consider using a hyphen and rephrasing as “Squeezebox‐compatible hardware or software players.”
85-90: Addition of the "Removing the integration" Section
The new section succinctly informs users that standard integration removal procedures apply. For even greater clarity, you might consider specifying “standard Home Assistant removal procedures.”
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1-3: Improved Description Clarity
The description now clearly states the integration’s purpose and aligns well with the updated documentation standards.
41-42: Clarification on Unified Configuration Entry
The note that a single configuration entry adds all Squeezebox devices connected to one LMS is clear and valuable.
44-45: Manual Configuration Reminder
The added line reminding users that manual configuration is available if LMS discovery fails is both practical and concise.
46-57: Enhanced Configuration Block with HTTPS Support
The configuration block now includes the “Connect over HTTPS” entry with a clear and detailed description. The indentation and formatting are consistent with the other entries, and the HTTPS terminology adheres to proper capitalization.
* Initial QualityScale updates * lint * lint * Update squeezebox.markdown * indents * Update source/_integrations/squeezebox.markdown * Apply suggestions from code review --------- Co-authored-by: c0ffeeca7 <38767475+c0ffeeca7@users.noreply.github.com>
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Updates to Squeezebox documentation to improve doc quality in line with Quality Scale.
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