Updates for Squeezebox integration doc for Gold Quality Scale #38420
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📝 WalkthroughWalkthroughThe pull request updates the Squeezebox integration documentation. It introduces new sections ("Supported devices", "Data updates", and "Known limitations") and reorganizes existing content. The "Entities" section is renamed to "Supported functionality" and expanded to include detailed subsections for entities, binary sensors, buttons, sensors, and actions. In addition, the action descriptions for Changes
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63-63: Reduce Multiple Blank Lines for Cleaner FormattingThe markdown appears to contain consecutive blank lines (as flagged in the static analysis). Consider removing extra blank lines to improve readability according to markdown guidelines.
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90-93: Correct Hyphenation in Known Limitations SectionIn the "Known limitations" section, the phrase "fade-in & cross fade settings" is used. For consistency and clarity, consider changing "cross fade" to "cross-fade" so that both compound adjectives match the hyphenation style.
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[grammar] ~92-~92: The word “cross-fade” is spelled with a hyphen.
Context: ...bility to override or control fade-in & cross fade settings. This means that if you have ...(CROSS_COMPOUNDS)
185-189: Vary Descriptive Phrasing in the Binary Sensors SectionThe description for the "Needs restart" binary sensor closely echoes nearby phrasings. To avoid repetition and improve readability, consider rewording this entry. For example, you might change it to:
- Needs restart
- Description: Indicates when the server service must be restarted to apply updates.
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[style] ~188-~188: You have already used this phrasing in nearby sentences. Consider replacing it to add variety to your writing.
Context: ...eds to be restarted (typically, this is needed to apply updates). - Library rescan ...(REP_NEED_TO_VB)
218-219: Review Grammar in 'Player count off service' EntryThe phrase "Player count off service" might be unclear. Consider revising it to something like "Players not on service" or "Offline player count" to better communicate the intended meaning.
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[grammar] ~218-~218: The singular proper name ‘Player’ must be used with a third-person or a past tense verb.
Context: ... of players on the service. - Player count off service - Description: Numb...(HE_VERB_AGR)
221-225: Refine Preposition Usage for Total CountsThe descriptions for "Total albums" and "Total artists" currently use the phrase "currently available in the service." It might read more naturally as "currently available on the service." Please review and adjust if it better fits the typical usage within your documentation style.
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[uncategorized] ~222-~222: The preposition “on” seems more likely in this position than the preposition “in”.
Context: ...al number of albums currently available in the service. - Total artists - *...(AI_EN_LECTOR_REPLACEMENT_PREPOSITION_IN_ON)
[uncategorized] ~225-~225: The preposition “on” seems more likely in this position than the preposition “in”.
Context: ...l number of artists currently available in the service. - Total duration - ...(AI_EN_LECTOR_REPLACEMENT_PREPOSITION_IN_ON)
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[grammar] ~92-~92: The word “cross-fade” is spelled with a hyphen.
Context: ...bility to override or control fade-in & cross fade settings. This means that if you have ...
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[style] ~188-~188: You have already used this phrasing in nearby sentences. Consider replacing it to add variety to your writing.
Context: ...eds to be restarted (typically, this is needed to apply updates). - Library rescan ...
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[grammar] ~218-~218: The singular proper name ‘Player’ must be used with a third-person or a past tense verb.
Context: ... of players on the service. - Player count off service - Description: Numb...
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[uncategorized] ~222-~222: The preposition “on” seems more likely in this position than the preposition “in”.
Context: ...al number of albums currently available in the service. - Total artists - *...
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[uncategorized] ~225-~225: The preposition “on” seems more likely in this position than the preposition “in”.
Context: ...l number of artists currently available in the service. - Total duration - ...
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38-41: Verify Clarity in the Data Updates SectionThe new "Data updates" section outlines the polling mechanism and default port details clearly. Ensure that any implications on error handling or polling frequency are documented elsewhere if needed. Otherwise, this addition enhances the documentation.
179-184: Rename 'Entities' to 'Supported functionality'The renaming of the "Entities" section to "Supported functionality" improves clarity by providing a more comprehensive heading that reflects various supported items. Please ensure that cross-references within the documentation are updated if necessary.
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34-37: Markdown Link Syntax Corrected
The "Supported devices" section now correctly formats the markdown link to the players page. This fixes the previous issue with a missing[in the link text.
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63-63: Remove Extra Blank Lines
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185-192: Vary Phrasing in Binary Sensor Descriptions
The descriptions under the "Binary sensors" section (e.g., for Needs restart and Library rescan) use very similar phrasing. Consider varying the language to improve readability and avoid repetition.🧰 Tools
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[style] ~188-~188: You have already used this phrasing in nearby sentences. Consider replacing it to add variety to your writing.
Context: ...eds to be restarted (typically, this is needed to apply updates). - Library rescan ...(REP_NEED_TO_VB)
215-220: Grammar Improvement for Sensor Heading
For the sensor titled Player count off service, consider rephrasing it (for example, as "Players Not on Service" or "Offline Player Count") to conform with standard grammatical conventions.🧰 Tools
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[grammar] ~218-~218: The singular proper name ‘Player’ must be used with a third-person or a past tense verb.
Context: ... of players on the service. - Player count off service - Description: Numb...(HE_VERB_AGR)
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[style] ~188-~188: You have already used this phrasing in nearby sentences. Consider replacing it to add variety to your writing.
Context: ...eds to be restarted (typically, this is needed to apply updates). - Library rescan ...
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[grammar] ~218-~218: The singular proper name ‘Player’ must be used with a third-person or a past tense verb.
Context: ... of players on the service. - Player count off service - Description: Numb...
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38-41: Clear Data Updates Section
The new "Data updates" section clearly explains the polling mechanism and default port usage for the LMS web interface. Consider mentioning any reverse proxy considerations if applicable.
90-93: Useful Known Limitations Section
The "Known limitations" section effectively describes the LMS API constraints regarding fade-in and crossfade settings. This provides valuable context for users.
179-235: Improved Organization of Supported Functionality
Renaming the "Entities" section to "Supported functionality" and subdividing the list into clear categories (Entities, Binary sensors, Buttons, Sensors) enhances the documentation's structure and overall clarity.🧰 Tools
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[style] ~188-~188: You have already used this phrasing in nearby sentences. Consider replacing it to add variety to your writing.
Context: ...eds to be restarted (typically, this is needed to apply updates). - Library rescan ...(REP_NEED_TO_VB)
[grammar] ~218-~218: The singular proper name ‘Player’ must be used with a third-person or a past tense verb.
Context: ... of players on the service. - Player count off service - Description: Numb...(HE_VERB_AGR)
236-322: Comprehensive Actions Section
The updated "Actions" section, with detailed subsections forcall_methodandcall_query(including tables and YAML examples), is well structured and provides clear guidance for integration.🧰 Tools
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| The integration uses {% term polling %} to receive updates from the LMS. It uses the web interface of the Lyrion Music Server (LMS) to send commands. The default port of the web interface is 9000. It is the same port that you use to access the LMS through your web browser. |
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- Is there something we can say here about the polling interval?
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Please take a look at the requested changes, and use the Ready for review button when you are done, thanks 👍 |
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Hi @c0ffeeca7 . I've restructed it along the lines of the example you posted. |
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🧹 Nitpick comments (6)
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171-178: Review Binary Sensors descriptions.
The description under “Needs restart” repeats the phrasing “needs to be restarted” which you may have used nearby. Consider varying the language (e.g., “requires a restart to apply updates”) to add variety and improve readability.🧰 Tools
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[style] ~174-~174: You have already used this phrasing in nearby sentences. Consider replacing it to add variety to your writing.
Context: ...eds to be restarted (typically, this is needed to apply updates). - Library rescan ...(REP_NEED_TO_VB)
179-194: Verify Buttons capitalization consistency.
The list of button actions (e.g., “Brightness up, Brightness down”, “Bass up, Bass down”, “Treble up, Treble down”) is clear. Please double-check that the capitalization aligns with Home Assistant’s sentence-style guidelines for UI strings.
196-221: Improve clarity for sensor descriptions.
The sensor section is comprehensive. In particular, the heading “Player count off service” might be rephrased for better grammatical clarity—consider using “Players not on service” or similar wording.🧰 Tools
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[grammar] ~204-~204: The singular proper name ‘Player’ must be used with a third-person or a past tense verb.
Context: ... of players on the service. - Player count off service - Description: Numb...(HE_VERB_AGR)
309-312: "Data updates" section review.
The explanation of the polling mechanism is clear and informative. Note that the content is somewhat similar to earlier descriptions; if this repetition is not intentional, you might consider consolidating it.
313-316: Enhance "Known limitations" guidance.
The section effectively communicates that the LMS API cannot override fade-in & crossfade settings. Consider adding a brief recommendation or reference on mitigating this (for example, suggesting a short fade-in duration or disabling the fade-in feature when announcements are used) to further assist users.
58-59: Address consecutive blank lines.
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[style] ~174-~174: You have already used this phrasing in nearby sentences. Consider replacing it to add variety to your writing.
Context: ...eds to be restarted (typically, this is needed to apply updates). - Library rescan ...
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[grammar] ~204-~204: The singular proper name ‘Player’ must be used with a third-person or a past tense verb.
Context: ... of players on the service. - Player count off service - Description: Numb...
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🔇 Additional comments (5)
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29-32: New "Supported devices" section added.
The new section clearly defines the supported hardware and software, and the markdown link syntax is now correct.
165-172: Renamed "Entities" to "Supported functionality".
This change improves clarity by grouping related features under a more descriptive heading.
222-291: Detailed Actions section is well documented.
The explanations for bothcall_methodand the YAML examples are thorough and clear, which should help users integrate these actions effectively.🧰 Tools
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[uncategorized] ~248-~248: Possible missing comma found.
Context: ...e worked by calling directly Squeezebox server as IFTTT cannot escape the text field. ...(AI_HYDRA_LEO_MISSING_COMMA)
292-308:call_queryaction documentation is clear.
The description and provided example for thecall_queryaction concisely illustrate its use.
317-322: "Removing the integration" section is concise and clear.
The removal instructions follow standard guidelines and require no additional steps, which is well communicated here.
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Update the Squeezebox doc in a number of areas to better meet the requirements for Gold Quality Scale
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