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Add prerequsite to APCUPSD #38540
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📝 Walkthrough""" WalkthroughThe documentation for the APC UPS Daemon (apcupsd) integration in Home Assistant was updated to provide a comprehensive "Prerequisites" section. This new section offers step-by-step guidance for installing and configuring apcupsd on various operating systems, including editing the configuration file for network access and starting the service. The previous brief notes about supported device types and unofficial add-on installation were replaced, and the explanation regarding connection errors was clarified to direct users to check their network configuration. No changes were made to code or public entities. Changes
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source/_integrations/apcupsd.markdown (1)
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: Minor style improvement: use "cannot" instead of "not able to".For conciseness and readability, consider changing "not able to connect" to "cannot connect" as suggested by style guidelines.
-If you get `ConnectionRefusedError: Connection refused` errors in the Home Assistant logs, it means that Home Assistant is not able to connect to the daemon. Please check if the `NISIP` is properly configured. +If you get `ConnectionRefusedError: Connection refused` errors in the Home Assistant logs, it means that Home Assistant cannot connect to the daemon. Please check if the `NISIP` is properly configured.🧰 Tools
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[style] ~54-~54: As a shorter alternative for ‘able to’, consider using “can not”.
Context: ...tant logs, it means that Home Assistant is not able to connect to the daemon. Please check if ...(BE_ABLE_TO)
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[style] ~54-~54: As a shorter alternative for ‘able to’, consider using “can not”.
Context: ...tant logs, it means that Home Assistant is not able to connect to the daemon. Please check if ...
(BE_ABLE_TO)
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source/_integrations/apcupsd.markdown (1)
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: Excellent addition of the "Prerequisites" section.The new step-by-step instructions for installing and configuring apcupsd on multiple platforms are clear, accurate, and greatly improve the usability of the documentation. This will help users avoid common setup pitfalls and aligns well with Home Assistant documentation standards.
Please take a look at the requested changes, and use the Ready for review button when you are done, thanks 👍 |
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: Optimize prerequisites spacing and update link to HTTPS
The “Prerequisites” header and first step are clear, but there are multiple blank lines that should be collapsed to a single blank line. Also, switch the apcupsd URL to HTTPS for improved security:- [apcupsd](http://www.apcupsd.org/) + [apcupsd](https://www.apcupsd.org/)
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: Refine error note phrasing
Use “cannot connect” instead of “is not able to connect” to improve readability:- it means that Home Assistant is not able to connect to the daemon. + it means that Home Assistant cannot connect to the daemon.🧰 Tools
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[style] ~44-~44: As a shorter alternative for ‘able to’, consider using “can not”.
Context: ...tant logs, it means that Home Assistant is not able to connect to the daemon. Please check if ...(BE_ABLE_TO)
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[style] ~44-~44: As a shorter alternative for ‘able to’, consider using “can not”.
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source/_integrations/apcupsd.markdown (1)
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: Verify steps for network access and service start
The instructions for configuring network access (item 2) and starting the service (item 3) use correct markdown list syntax and are concise. No changes needed here.
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Thank you, @yuxincs 👍
Proposed change
This PR follows https://developers.home-assistant.io/docs/core/integration-quality-scale/rules/docs-installation-instructions and adds a
Prerequisites
section to APCUPSD documentation to list instructions on installingapcupsd
on the host machine (since the community-maintained add-on is no longer being maintained).Type of change
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