I spoke to @helenlynn re: naming - although Raspberry Pi 4 Model B is officially correct, removing the Model is entirely fine.

I spoke to @helenlynn re: naming - although Raspberry Pi 4 Model B is officially correct, removing the Model is entirely fine.

Sorry - you're quite right. The product page does indeed show all of the products with the word 'model' included. The element 14 packaging in my Pi 4B also says 'Raspberry Pi 4 Computer Model B'. I'm not sure why I thought this wasn't the case.

Just to restate (as I deleted the original to try to tidy things up) two proposed changes to this file, in parts not altered by the changes in this PR:

• 2nd paragraph of page: remove reference to firmware after 2016 - no longer necessary.

• last paragraph of page: change 'gencmd' to 'command'.

Agree with @andrum99 so have made the suggested changes. Since copy editing is taking so long, can the reviewers please comment if they want anything else changed or see typos, if nothing is spotted, I'll merge in a couple of days.

Did this one ever get the ready-for-copy-edit label added? I think I've checked over the last couple of weeks and I don't think I've seen this one. One large PR (#1333, currently with a freelancer) notwithstanding, we are (for once this year!) not currently horribly backlogged for copy-edit.

No, this was CE'd by @lurch and @andrum99 directly as was vaguely urgent as the DVFS code had just been released. If necessary you can make changes on another branch then either merge directly or create another PR for technical checking.

No, this was CE'd by @lurch and @andrum99 directly as was vaguely urgent as the DVFS code had just been released. If necessary you can make changes on another branch then either merge directly or create another PR for technical checking.

Not sure my contributions qualify as 'copy edit', more 'checking for typos' 😋