Oh my goodness, this demo has left me... well, ravenous! Riven is absolutely gorgeous (I love his subtle expressions) and I love how you've written him! The second scene had me absolutely gripped as he really feels like someone who's believably not in his right mind.
The cold finality of his statements! The inability to keep his hands off of the MC! The way he's looking out for them in his own way! Absolutely loved it! <3 "It seems you keep clinging to the idea that you're better than this" was my favourite line! It really sold the moment for me :) Will be eagerly anticipating the full version! Thanks so much for sharing this with us.