My one suggestion is to outline the dark colored banners, then blank those out. The text may need a dark outline. Otherwise this looks great so far. Just minor changes and nits from me.
That’s something I’m working on for home printing as well. Just need to remove the 3 columns in the document, then import into Scribus reflowing my Text Frames so that they fit.
Same here. I haven't got a copy either. I noticed that at one point Ben said he had issues with LF OSR and switched to Swordfish Islands. I may have to see if I can get a refund some how and get that money back if I can just print my own copy of Knave 1e via Lulu.