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HAPPY 1 YEAR UJEUHEJNSMJAMUAHN!!!! I'M SO OS SO OO OS SO S OMSO O O SO SO  GLAD THAT I JUST HAPPENED TO STUMBLE ON OUR WONDERLAND THAT ONE FATEFUL DAY OVER THE SUMMER RAHYBA 💔 super duper excited to play the remake!! (Cant play it rn as I have schoolwork to do+an exam coming up :((() I MIGHT DO ORLAM THIS TIME OR GENZOU AGAIN IDKKK :3 (I love genzou sm ggujhhbybb) pretty sure that I mentioned this somewhere on a review that I did on the game either here or on tumblr BUTTT I'll say it again/in case I didn't say it I absolutely LOVE the way that you portray the characters and their emotions tntvrvef!! None of them are perfect and that in itself is perfect!! It makes them feel so much more real. Can't wait to see more from you Carrot, take care of yourself :)

Wow!!wowie!!! omygod!!! where do i even begin?? this update was so.. siehsuheijimun!!! /vpos

i do have to admit, tellus was just like a whatever character when i first met him but with this update. the beads.. oh my soul aughheundhns.. tellus i love you come back to me💔 but its ok.. we have bayram and bayram makes everything right in the world >:3 i love bayram his design is amazing and he's so incredibly stupid (i swear i have a tendency to pick characters kind of like bayram as ro's no idea why) 🙏/pos all the ro's are gorgeous and i have no doubt that i'll do multiple playthroughs to romance them all ^_^ (calliope's def my next pick

the way that you portray grief is so incredibly poetic and amazing and i love it oh so much!!! :d not to get to comfortable or anything but i am cuban but i moved to america when i was very young and accustomed to the culture way to quickly, and i didn't get to experience enough of my heritage i feel. i of course didn't experience the same thing that mc did but it feels rather familiar, but i still feel way more disconnected from my culture than i would be. and i really love the way you encompassed that feeling <3 (ps. i'm also trans and the way that you portray that feeling of like "i don't understand why they hate us, we haven't done anything wrong" is so visceral(?) and i feel very familiar with i

anyways my mc! oh he is so silly and incredibly joyous (he is not joyous he's like a nervous dog) I LOVE YOU LUMEN (Loralei :3) EUSGSUS AND HIS SILLY LITTLE FERRET NAMED NIALL (Can u tell I picked ferret bc Ferret was the first one i romanced in Viatica >:) /hj)

This is very long so TLDR: I loved this update!! The way you portray emotions is amazing and your writing only gets better, I can't wait so see more of Cantata and maybe even more stories from you in the future :))

(I do apologize if any of this ramble was confusing or possibly even sounded offensive I'm just very bad at explaining 😔)

FAWN AND BISON... CRASHING OUT..

UPDATE A DAY EARLY WHAT DID WE  DO TO DESERVE SUCH GENEROUSITY 🙏 anyways ima go read that now.. Heh😼

Edit: So i died btw /nm (The oneshots r so amazing i love bear he's the silliest guy)

I have to start of saying that this update was absolutely amazing 🙏 you have such a way with immersion to the point that it's visceral. And you describe things so good that I, being as stupid as I may be, can still visualize the environments and actions of the characters lol :3 I could practically feel every emotion that the MC did and I forgot how much Farah and her realness hurt me DX I am however having problems with the save system though. When the update first came out all my saves were gone (which was to be expected) but it was whatever because I'll find any excuse to replay this game :p yesterday I finished replaying and all that and I exported my saves but now that you've updated the mobile layout the saves are gone again and even though I've imported them again when I try to load them it just shows this (like I said earlier I'd find any excuse to replay but I fear if this may cause future problems so yk 🤷‍♂️)

(edit- very sorry if this is confusing I'm extremely bad at explaining :(()

Just came back to this IF bc i finally had time to finish it (I've been very busy with school and I also have an art contest coming up 🙏) and I was so genuinely shocked when I saw it was finished like what!!!! :0 The first time I played Ferret's route and now I did Heron's and omydgos.a.s..d.su,su.sj.s.u.ui..i...... Ohmygod... I got the music box ending and I think rn i'm js gonna do another Heron route and go for the other one ^_^ Scene with Fawn and Bison still breaks me you did NOT have to do them like that 😔 /j /lh

I love the way that you write romance and this story feels so real and amazing and I got very easily immersed with your descriptions! I haven't been with Viatica from the beginning or anything in fact I only found it shortly after chapter 10 got released but I'm still pretty attached to it. Can't wait to see what you do with Cantata!!!! :D

RSHAHRRHARHAHRARHSHRTHSTHAYJATHARYAHRHARHARHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

REASONABLE CRASHOUT!!!!

VAL I'M IN LOVE W U PLS PLSSSSSSS ONE CHANCE PLS PLS PLS

would u believe me if I said I almost cried with Farah DX anyways love this IF sm!!!! Easily up in my top 5!!!! :D can't wait for more updates ^_^

I DO THIS THING WHERE I CHECK LIKE THE IF'S IM INTERESTED A FEW TIMES A WEEK MAYBE TO SEE IF THEY'VE UPDATED AND SAFE TO SAY IM PLEASANTLY SURPRISED W THIS UPDATE >:3 GONNA PLAY IT RN!!! ^_^

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Another comment about chapter 12 but here I am again re reading the entire chapter, same choices, same character, same LI, I might be a little bit hyperfixated these guys r always on my mind 😭

I get it dude honestly the only reason I'm still here is for my friends

THATS SO REAL I HAVE LIKE SO MANY IFS THAT I'M READING AT THE SAME TIME 😭🙏 

lmao it's fine dw abt it XD just gives me an excuse to replay

She said on tumblr there should b  ~25 chapters if i remember correctly ^_^

BARKING GROWLING FRTHING AT THE MOUTH KICKING MY EET TWIRLING MY HAIR THE HIGH ROMANCE R ROUTE OMYGOD MY ELUSIONS ARE FED I SHALL NEVER BE STARVED GAIN THIS WILL LINGER IN MY MEMORY FROM YEARS WHEN I TELL YOU MY JAW DROPPED /gen

the game is supposed to save to your cookies (i think) so either they got fucked up or its js a bug from the update!! 

I got the low romance version and its just as good omg R i love u sm 😭

o shit my save got deleted :((( (I'm rlly stupid so I didnt make a backup lmao)

Congrats!!!!! :D I can't wait to get top surgery myself lols

My save deleted :(( oh well at least I can replay this game now >:3

SO EXCITED GUYS WHAIHSOWHA?????? LOVE THIS GAME SM I'VE BEEN MEANING TO WRITE A COMMENT BUT IDEK HOW TO WORD IT..

HKSUDCHGIDFYEBSFIFH I love this game sm!!! :D the writing is incredible and as someone who has a relatively short attention span It keeps me hooked!! :) Currently trying to romance Az'Lean bc it seems like a very interesting dynamic lols :3 Can't wait to see more updates!!!! (Also how do you pronounce Az'Lean's name 🙏)

Its fine lol that chapter aside its an amazing game cant wait to continue it :3

Real shses actually so me

CLOSEST I HAVE EVER GOTTEN TO ACTUAL TEARS WHILE PLAYS N ITCH IO GAME HOLY SHIT NO WHY DID U HAVE TO DO BISON AND FAWN LIKE THAT 💔

Guys I'm terrified for chapter 10 js judging by the comments brb future me how scary was it 🙏