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Okay, so, like, the whole naming yourself thing is a nice touch 😂

But, uh, maybe there's a little hiccup in the code? Carter still called you "MC" instead of your name when you first met, lol.

The ending was a bit... unexpected... and sudden 😅
Like, you listened to the maid, and bam, game over? lol.
It's kinda funny how you managed to spend a whole month without bumping into someone to move the plot forward.
If you're looking for ideas, looping the story so the rose event starts the next day if you choose to do what the maid says on the first day could work better.

I really enjoyed the demo though, and I'm definitely looking forward to seeing more of the game in the future! 😊

I love Leander. 🥰
He’s a total sweet, though maybe a little indecisive when it comes to love. lol

This game is a good reminder to always read the fine print before making deals with supernatural entities! lol
I think Leander might have gotten more feelings than he bargained for. Poor guy.

It’s kinda weird you can ride, but I'm assuming the mc took riding lessons before getting there since cars were not really a thing back then. lol

Ooooh~ And he's clearly cunning~ ❤️
And the gifts are pretty nice too!
I’m seriously loving this guy more and more.

I'm a little bummed about ending 4, though. I really wanted to tell Leander that I understood and accepted him for who he was. 🥺

Ending 7 was just so heartbreaking... 😭
And I don't get why he does that in that end. Seems so out of character. 🤔

I'm having a hard time getting a happy ending with Leander... Is there any kind of guide floating around?
I'm clearly doing something wrong.

For some reason I cannot seem to download the actual game.
All I get is a blank page of some sort...? oO

Okay, so I played this visual novel and it was pretty interesting! 

It's awesome that you can actually choose to not date anyone, even if it leads to a quicker ending, it's a great option to have 😊

Antheros is definitely cute, but Cupid is like... a bit much sometimes, just buzzing around.

The pacing though, is kinda strange. Like one day you’re just chill, and the next you're head-over-heels and ready to confess, which felt a bit sudden and illogical. Feels a bit rushed at the end there. Was there a word limit for the game or something?

In Cupid's route, I was hoping for more choices at the ice cream parlor.
I'm not really into the whole sweet and reliable thing, I'd love characters who are like, amazing, and cool, someone that I would genuinely admire and ideally a manipulative yandere. lol. 

The game is short but sweet, and honestly, it has a good number of choices for the playtime.

Okay, so, the art style is definitely... unique. lol
It's not exactly my favorite style, but the game itself is  great! 

The game is pretty good and kinda funny.  I like it a lot.

And Basil is kinda cute, in a trollish sort of way.

 I really like the friends you chose for the game. They're so different, which is good cuz then there's a good chance everyone will like at least one of them.

The demo felt kinda short, but that might be because I was really into it, lol. 

I’m super curious if you're planning to release this on Steam? 

Also, the info on the page is a little vague about whether the game is complete and if you will update the art. 

I really hope to play more of this, I'm super-curious about what will happen. ^_^

The artwork is seriously gorgeous! The characters are super pretty and the backgrounds are really nice.

The loading times were a bit slow, but I don't blame the creator for that. It seems like it's probably a program thing, since I've seen that in other games using the same engine (or whatever it's called) as you do.

About the story, I'm a bit confused about why our main character just goes along with the goat creature. Is she just that resigned? I kind of wish there was a "no" option, even if it led to a more dramatic outcome.

I do like that you can choose to run away and have your bad end! But it's a little annoying that it makes you pick differently rather than letting the game end there so you have to restart or load the game. It feels a bit too forceful when you're being pushed into a set storyline.

Snowe is kinda cute, even if he keeps us locked up, lol.

It just feels like our choices don't really change anything in the story. The only real choice seems to be whether or not we romance Snowe.

Mind you, I do like the game. It's a really good game, by and large.

And it IS a good story, and pretty well-written.

I just miss having a sense of Free Will.
Even if that will leads to shitty outcomes. lol

I guess it didn't really occur to me that the game was meant to be surreal. My apologies.

Oh, I'm not doing the feeding. I couldn't program a toy, much less an AI. lol
If I mention anything about that, I'm using a free AI that I ask to suggest games of a specific genera.
Which is pretty much a google-search done via an AI that doesn't have access to google.

I''l try that. Thanks. ^_^

This may be a culture difference... lol
I have NEVER seen a town small enough to not have at the bare minimum a medical center.

I duknow... what if the mc was 18 and Tartaglia 17?
Could work! ^_^

But I do get the point, all things considered.
Plus his obsession with his gf, so, yeah... *sigh*

Really? *raises an eyebrow* Humans are truly strange creatures...
Then again, I'm pretty sure I'm halfway to sociopathy, so I wouldn't know normal if it hit me in the face.

Depends on the game tho.
In Pact With a Witch there's the exact same type choice where they try and force your hand, but if you outmaneuver it, you get a whole different ending. (I think they had some plans to write a separate path there, but haven't gotten around to it, so they made it a summary end of the path instead.)

I can't know if the mouse forcing, when there is -clearly- a choice, means some force is trying to control your mind and you need to break out of it or not. It's very confusing, and I'm very stubborn --especially about avoiding churches.

It IS a pretty cool game mechanism, but certain overly stubborn readers will try to get out of it anyway I fear. lol

I have very strong opinions, and is not very good at wording my feedback nicely I fear.
The sad thing is that I sound a million times nicer than I used to. lol

And speaking as a writer myself I've gotten a lot of feedback, some of it sounding extremely harsh, far worse than me (especially on my older stories that wasn't as well-written as my newer ones), but I always found it helpful, because how can you improve as an artist if you don't know what you're doing wrong or could do better?

Yupp, totally forever 15. Always have been, always will be. ^_^
But my ID will still get me into any bar, so no worries. :p

The problem with my feedback I think, is that I tend to be very direct and honest when I talk.
And my attempts of joking probably don't sound as funny as it does to me.

It's a work in progress, but I'm working on it.

Aside from the random happenings, I could totally believe this mc could be me. lol
(That's a compliment btw. Most mc's are just too far from anything I can relate to, but this one is not.)

The range of choices did help tho.
So kudos.

I DO wish there was a save and load button in this game tho...

I like this game. ^_^
It's really super-cute.

I do wish it was longer tho. All the endings are, like, really short.

And it WOULD have been hilarious to se him try and set you up with all sorts of guys only for you to fall for him in the end. lol

(Although I suppose several love interest tend to improve upon any game. Especially if they're varied and very different from each-other.)

Any chance you'll pick up the project in the future and create a longer version of it? 

Now I'm intrigued~ ^_^

Yeah, I guess I'm not overly good at expressing myself. So I apologize for that.

I do realize I tend to sound harsher than I mean it.
I really am trying to give helpful review, but my way of wording things may not be the best.

I'll try and work on it. lol

If it makes you feel better, I wouldn't have bothered to comment at all if your game wasn't good to begin with.

Is the sketchy drawing of the boy a placeholder for the real artwork?

....this may be one of the rare few mc's I ACTUALLY agree with! Erza really DO seem like a looser. And a clingy one to boot. Yuck.

(Nothing against anime and fantasy, but his personality... >_> But that's the point I suspect. So good job. lol)

The 'hot side character' do have the promise to be hot. He reminds vaguely of Sol from The Kid in the Back --lookwise. (Another yandere game here. I love Sol. Every tiny ever-so-slightly-creepy/dangerous acts and all. :heart: )

I look forward to see the finished artworks. ^_^

...hot guy still sounds like a dork, but Imma gonna chalk that up to manipulations for now. (As in; he sounds like a nice guy. I don't like nice guys. But if he -is- a yadere, he won't be a nice guy. So it's all good. lol)

It was a pretty short game, but I like it thus far. ^_^

Do you plan to update it more?

You can always take a leaf from Sebastian Dallarosa instead, and have him carve the MC's name into their chest instead. lol

Aaaaaand nothing I do can make the game work. At all.

I binned the old game, all of it, and re-downloaded the game...and it's STILL broken. >_>

How can I clear everything from my pc so the game works again? >_<

That is a BIG crash for refusing to enter a church. *sigh*

Why do you not ask to be taken to the hospital immediately, and ask why he didn't do that?
(I'm sure he'd have a good excuse, but it's really weird and unnatural for the mc to not even question it. Anyone can buy a lab coat and pretend to be a doctor, and no town is without a clinic at the bare minimum.)

....kinda sad Tartaglia isn't a love interest.
I like him. ^_^

...after the fence deal, I REALLY like him! :heart:
(The bad ending I mean. lol)

I do not understand how the mc can feel remotely worried about people they just met and expect to leave behind in a few days...

But I suppose if the mc holed themselves up in a room alone and/or kept avoiding people and look for a way out like I would have done, then this wouldn't have been much of a story. lol

...pretty sure if I ever set foot in a church I'd go up in flames. >_>;
Best not to try.

I wish there was an option to NOT help with that part tho. Seriously.

The enter vs leave option is TOO difficult.
I've seen those before, and they're usually hard, but not impossible. It stops being a choice if it's impossible.

Fyi: When you DO manage to hit ANYTHING but Enter, then your game crashes. Might wanna fix that.
(It was a pain in the ass too. I'm a -BIT- pissed off at that so-called 'choice' atm. >_> )
I also broke the game and had to shut it down the hard way.

...and now the game is broken and won't even let me open it anymore. >_<

--

Pop quiz: IS there a route that lets you leave?

I tried downloading this now, and it finally worked!

So whatever you did seems to have worked out. ^_^

Haha, I see.

I guess if you really want a parody you should have two love interests to choose from:
The super-popular muscle stud that's both an athlethe and top of class who everyone loves that have issues with his parent's overly high expectations...
...and that weird, skinny emo kid in the back of the class type that looks halfway like he's into satantic human sacrifice and/or cutting himself, and acts all socially awkward, but in a really cute way, while still acts tough and stoic most of the time.

I guess I  was too tired to see the warning when I looked this game over. lol
Maybe I saw the words "violent" and "sexual in nature" and glossed out everything else. xD

*pats your cute little head*

I realize muscles on guy may be popular with some people.
Most yandere-lovers I've met are more emo/metal/cute-asian-idols style lovers tho.
But I don't know everyone in the world. lol

I suppose the name should have clued me in on the parody part. lol

Too bad... I kinda like the Nightstalker --although mainly because he has satanic leanings. lol
Bundy was smarter, but a bit...boring. (Although that may just be his disguise. He was really good at playing people.)

And I've played the majority of the yandere games here already.
I'm literally scraping the bottom of the barrel for more, in hopes I've missed a good one.

It wouldn't be the first time I found a great game hidden inside a horrible-looking package. lol

But thanks for telling me. ^_^
...does it mention it's a parody and I just missed it btw? xD

Nope. I simply cannot download it.

Every single other game on itch downloads just fine.
But every time I try to download THIS game, it comes down as an empty zip-file.
As in: there's nothing in it to extract.

But if you're uploading a new beta, I'll try to download that one instead. Thanks. ^_^

Even if it's a prologue you can add choices without changing the end.

Add a few false choices (maybe him learning the girl's favorite things and whatnot), and a few choices that loops back into the story later on.
(Like, he can try and run away from his mom, but is forced back. He tries not to eat and for a while it works, but then he has to do it to gain strength to protect someone he loves or something.)

There are many ways you can add choices without changing the end.

And even changing the end, you can do that in smaller ways that do not change the story itself.
(I admit I got frustrated with the lack of choices and skimmed the last part before I stuck it somewhere to read when I've cooled off my irritation. It's too good a story to bin, but I really am in a game-playing mood, not a novel reading mood. So I can't give exact suggestions there. I also don't know more than the demo for the main story.)

I guarantee I am not the only person who tend to get pissed off over a lack of choices.
So at the very least make sure you point out that the prequel have zero choices --or people will expect it, get disappointment, and possibly pissed off at it.

Feel free to ask for suggestions if you want them tho, to add choices I mean.
I'm a really lazy writer, but I've studied writing for some time, and written since I was young enough to send stories to a lego competition --probably as long as I've been able to write. lol
I am good with ideas, even if I'm bad at sitting down and actually writing them.

Wow, that's an evil (and profitable) strategy for a game page. lol

I look forward to see your game there then.
I'm sure you'll earn back the cost regardless. Your game is mentioned a lot of places, so people clearly love it.
And people tend to buy what they love.

....should I be creeped out that the game guessed my name? ^_^;

Or is it just a pirate thing cuz it's a bird name? lol

Speaking as someone who's been pulled under water in a bad way before: You don't try to scream. It would be stupid, and your body knows it. (Takes a while to get your bearings and realize what happened tho. Time is funny in danger situations... it dilutes and stretches out. A second is dragged out forever.)

Not a fan of how bossy the mc is in bed, but I don't know if that's cuz I picked Riley (or went with a male mc this time), or if the mc is always like that. (I really prefer a more submissive mc to play, but that's me.)

Do choices actually matter?
Because you can't seem to choose whether to check that room or not. Even if you say you won't.

It's an interesting game tho.

And good if you like obsessive pirates.
(I mean... there's literally no other yandere pirate game out there to the best of my knowledge. lol)

The arworks looks like a bad scrapbook.
The creator clear CAN draw, so this is just lazy.

The kid looks cute tho.
The crow, not so much.

It's incredibly difficult to take this game serious when there is a gigantic crow head glued to it, and you don't even play the human kid but the crow. >_>;

And then we stare at the road for ten million clicks....
And another road for ten million clicks....

I feel like a kid playing with cardboard cutouts. >_>

I can't even say if the story is good or not, cuz I've lost patience with it.

Is there a flaw in the part where you name yourself?
Or is it intentionally bland and vague who you are?

Kinda cute setting. Very...early 90s.
(Or 80s, maybe.)

Not a super-fan of the gameplay setup.
I like a more visual novel style, and less point and click.
But that's my personal preference.

The mc really should have started carrying around a weapon tho. Kinda idiotic not to, all things considered.

I'm not sure I understand the story tho.
If someone is in love with you they won't randomly kill you.
And if they want you dead, it's pretty much a guarantee that you know why --considering the notes were clearly not written by someone you had never met if they were genuine threats.

(If you wanted the mc to not be sure who it could be from, him making tons of enemies cause he can't hold his tongue or something makes more sense.)

And it is unlikely to be caused by jealousy from a partner of someone you know if you ignore everyone around you.
(Seems the most likely, but also not really warranted since I never spoke to Jack at all the first few times.)

Why is is labeled Yandere btw?

Nothing about this game make it seem like yandere.
More like a homicidal stalker. Which is not the same thing.

(And about there I realize I mistook 'Jane' for a cute guy. *sigh* I need to read these things before downloading them.)

I really prefer to choose myself over this gambling thing...
The first guy turned out to be a complete dork.
(Which I could have guessed just by looking at him.)

And no matter what options I pick, I get matched with the same damned dork. >_>

....yupp. I CANNOT escape the damned looser dork. >_<

So Imma gonna say this game sucks.

If for no other reason than the idiot I keep being matched with suck.

I notice how the guy, when he introduces you, explains how you were washed overboard --despite NOT actually telling him that.

I wish there was a third choice to not get involved with the two guy's fighting too. Not like I was there when it happened, so how can I have an opinion?
(Also, neither of them is cute. Like, at all.)

NOT a fan of the current ending. >_>
(Being poisoned is not nice)

(I mean, I guess I'll have to test picking one of the other guys to sleep in their hut, but the ONLY good-looking one is Nicolas. *pouts*)

Will there be more endings for that route late on?

-

Edit: Yeah, no. Who you pick to sleep with decide who you get stuck with.

Guess I have to wait with playing this game until Nicolas' route is more fleshed out.

Overall I did like the game tho.
The art wasn't great, but the concept is really good.
And the writing isn't half bad.

I just wish more of them looked good.
(But maybe normal people like those looks, and I'm the one who's weird. lol
Nicolas looks good and seems interesting based on what's posted on his profile on this page tho.
So I guess I just have to wait for him.)

Well, I think one needs morals to find someone being a serial killer a bad thing, and luckily I am free from those. ^_^

My biggest problem with most games is that people advertised as villains tends to be anti-heroes in disguise.
OR there is zero happy endings with them. (Locked up is -not- happy. Unless you choose to be. I'm big on Free Will, but ironically enough I adore manipulation. I dislike brute force tho, and tend to view that as a sign of stupidity. If you can't make people -want- to have you, you're clearly not doing a good job. Kidnapping is best left as a last resort when all other methods have failed.)

(I may use the word 'happy ending' a bit loosely here. Happy in my world does not always match happy in the world of other people.
My favorite character at this point (aside from Sebastian Dallarosa) is Sol from The Kid in the Back. (He's also my view on hot looks.)
The fact that he slips you sleeping-pills so he can sleep next to you it utterly charming. And I suppose I wouldn't have minded a bit more NSFW content over it either. Which says something about what I like I think. lol)

Yandere games tend to be better than other type games tho.
But it varies a lot from game to game.

The game premise is very good tho, and I can't predict the writing without trying to play it, but the art is kinda horrid.
(But a part of that is the muscles. NOT a fan of beefcakes. *shudders* )

While I normally prefer the games where I can insert myself rather than a pre-named mc, your game is good enough that I'm willing to invest in a character that is not me.

(I know, I'm super-lazy. I don't even read books without first reading a spoiler-heavy summary because most of them ends shitty in my opinion.
Visual Novels are no different --especially the big pro ones.
I've bought a million games that promise a villain love-interest, only to find he's just a sad kid who wants to do good thing but the world makes him seem more cruel than he is, OR he's got some kind of dumb-ass reason for killing people that totally justify it, making him an anti-hero, not a villain. Even more sadly, the first version is by far the most common and the second hard to find. >_>
I keep hoping to see a true villain, but the games who features the kind of guy (or girl) I like are pretty much all unfinished games, and most doesn't seem to ever update.

I'm so tired of investing in new stories only to be disappointed at the end. *sigh*)

As far as I can tell, your story doesn't promise things it's unlikely to deliver on at least.
(I played the other game in the triology just now. The choice-less demo at any rate.
The story is interesting. The lack of choices a bit disappointing tho.)

So it may be worth playing the full game, regardless of how it ends.

Still, I'm gonna keep my fingers crossed that at least one of the ends is a "bad end" where the guy goes serial killer crazy and the girl goes along with him in a Bonny & Clyde style. ^_^

Probably won't happen, but all the same... It'd be my favorite kind of end. lol

Ah, I see. I didn't realize Steam took that kind of commission fee. I always assumed they'd take a percentage of the sales instead.
That would have been a more profitable choice for them in the long run --especially with more popular games.

If you have games that become popular on Steam, maybe you can release DCL content for them rather than a new sequel seperatly?
Is that cheaper?
I'm a writer, not a game-maker, so I have no clue how putting your game on Steam works. lol

I miss seeing choices in this "game" (and I use that term very loosely, as it's not really a game if it doesn't have choices.)

If it was a story on kindle, it would be a very good one.
It's a bit less good as a game because, as I said: it lacks choices.

So...

This is a very good novel. If you want to read a novel.
The art is extremely good, and the story intriguing, unique and wonderful. (Provided you like darker stories, which I do.)

As a game it kinda sucks.
Because as much as can be downloaded have exactly zero choices.
And it's pretty damned long for having no choices.

(I really can't stress the importance of having choices in a game enough.)

I don't understand the mc's reason to break up. It makes no sense.
I mean; It makes even less sense than usual in these games. oO
Not that I am good at understanding human behavior, however much I study it.

I feel there is so much information missing in the intro that it leaves my head spinning. The mc acts completely unreasonable towards her ex, in every way.

The game hints at something we don't know, so I'll withhold my judgement on that. But I don't understand -anything- she does.

He's being nothing but nice and loving.
Why is she overreacting so much? And over nothing at all?

Does she suffer from paranoia? Or some other mental illness?

The game is really well-made.
Both the writing and the art is very good.

But the main character acts really effing weird, over absolutely nothing.

I'm going to guess she has some kind of mental problem, or something happened with her ex that we don't know about or something.

But she's behaving stranger than I am used to an mc behaving.
And I'm pretty sure it's not just because human emotions eludes me this time.

I AM curious about what is going on tho.

As far as a 'hook' scene goes, this was excellent writing.

The game is seriously popular tho.
I used a AI program to find yandere games, and most newer, and smaller, games do not show up because it has zero internet access --so someone took the time to feed the AI info on your game. Which is a good indication it's a good game. Or at least a popular one.

And I know it's a trilogy; Steam says so on my wishlist. lol

I never buy games outside of Steam, but I'll be waiting for the realize of the full game there.
I like to collect all the good games in one place when I can. ^_^

Releasing the games one by one on Steam could actually benefit you more than realising them together.
People who play a game and love it will always want more and more content.
Being able to buy a follow-up / related game with their beloved characters after finishing the first one, even if they have to wait for it to come out, is always going to be common.

I remember the lines for the World of Warcraft expansion packs, even AFTER they started to sell them online, because people wanted the new ones the second they dropped. lol
And I personally always end up buying DCL content for the games I love because I want the story to never end, after I first get the happy ending I want. (Using the word 'happy' loosely here, since I consider a romantic ending far better than any other ending in a yandere game.
Even if that means you end in the hospital horribly broken and the super-nice guy who's never hurt anyone tells you he's going on a killing spree to kill those who did that to you, or like one end in Particles of Reality when Sebastian pulls the plug on you in the hospital and kills himself to join you.
Although it's of course better if you both live and can be together. But not all games allow for such a super-happy ending.
...and that's not despite the fact that the guy is bat-crap crazy, but because of it. lol

I make no guarantees for my sanity. xD

AAAAAHH!! THE CAT!! THE CATTT!!! *hides*

Haha, no. I just played a horror game with a cat villain.
Don't Take the Cat Home! or something. lol

It's cute tho. And BOY is that cat pissed off. Look at those eyes!
(I guess in human terms they're adorable tho. lol Not everyone speaks 'cat'. )

How does the saying go again.... "Don't say sorry; Do better." ?

Anyway... I did enjoy the game. And I do apologize if I sounded harsh.
I just wanted to give you good feedback so you can improve the game.

I'm just not very good at expressing myself in a nice way.
(And also because lack of logic kinda pisses me off. But in your defense, your mc is the first mc in ages that hasn't pissed me off by being a do-gooder, so... you're still beating the odds. lol )

I didn't mean the part you can download.
I was reading about the endings that was listed, and non of them said there was a good ending.
Thus the question.

I suppose I should have specified "when it is finished".

Usually not a fan of popular guys, or nice guys, but I will concede that this one is cute.

The mc is cute too.
I've never understood the concept of being nervous for a date. There's just so many other things to focus on --specifically the guy (or girl) you're on a date with, and maybe things you need to fix for it (like convince the restaurant to let you set up the table in advance with their favorite flowers and such, unless they take care of that headache for you).
It looks uncomfortable, but cute.

A boring park. lol
I thought it would be an amusement park. 😂

I'd love to see a bit more choices.
Specifically ones that impact the story.
You never actually get a choice at the pivotal moment.
Like when he's actually asking you a question like if you want to go on a date or be a friend and so on.
(Even if saying no would lead to an end because the creator don't have time to create multiple pathways, it'd still be better than no choice.)

I'm VERY happy that the game specifies that the mc have an anxiety problem.
Because it means that her worrying and anxiety is there for a reason --and not because she's an idiot who worry over things that there is no point worrying about (in my opinion.)
Anxiety disorders doesn't listen to logic. Healthy people can. And thus should. (Again; in my opinion.)
It makes me less annoyed at the mc when she has a good reason for behaving like she does. ^_^

You can't even choose your own interests. >_>
Although there are some choices after that one, which is nice.
(Tho the language thing threw me off the loop because I speak 2 languages fluently, and two others on a minor conversation level, and one more well enough to find my way in a grocery store. lol
....and she actually -likes- her brother. Instead of considering him a pest. >_>
The mc is just too different from me to really connect with her because of the lacks of choices.)

.....kind, brave and considerate... Name 3 words that do NOT fit me even a little.

So...SO weird character to play.

Awww.... Liev is super-sweet after he calls you that tho! ^_^
...so of course the mc doesn't appreciate it. *sigh*

Weird, Weird MC....
....she's being so mean to him too. *pouts*
Poor Liev.

I like Liev more and more as the game goes on. ^_^
Wasn't a super-fan at first, but he improves.

He's a little blunt and over-the-top, but I'm guessing that's because the creator has not yet mastered subtlety in writing.
It's not an easy skill to master tho, so I get it.

He's very sweet and cunning --but a bit TOO honest and open.
He's not very smart.

Note to the creator: PLEASE watch Brandon McNulty's youtube video on good dialogue vs bad dialogue. Please. ^_^;

(Or, as parents like to say; "Some things you keep inside your head, and don't tell people."
And instead show hints of it in the person's actions, rather than state it outright.)

He's as subtle as a sledgehammer.

And of course the ONLY choice you get is whether to lie or not.
You never get a choice to actually accept him for the sweet and wonderful (somewhat homicidal) darling he is... *sigh*

Aww.... Liev is so adorable~ ❤️

The mc, on the other hand, I want to wack over the head with a baseball bat. 😒
She's even bitching about how her date pays for everything ON A DATE!!!
Sheezh louise! It's perfectly normal for the dominant person to pay on a date, and he's rich to boot.

*shakes my head* The mc is so useless...
I feel like she picked up a puppydog from the pond, watch it run around and nip at her feet and tug at her clothes, and instead of actually teaching it what to do she runs away crying. 😒

Oooh~ And Liev is so strong and protective too. ^_^
...well, okay. The knife is strong. Same difference. lol

Of course the mc doesn't apriciate it, and you get zero choice on how to react.
Again. 😒

Speaking as someone who's studied both psychology and writing;
The writer need some serious practise with both.
Everything with Liev is so... over-the-top.
It's not even scary, because it becomes comical when it's exaggerated so much.

(At this point he is, for some unfathomable reason, laughing like the Joker.
Which makes no sense what-so-ever. Especially for someone who usually don't feel much at all. Which again makes no sense for a yandere, who tends to feel too much...)

Aww... I got the happy ending. ^_^
...I choose to believe the mc was crying because she was so happy. 

If these games had an mc capable of emotions, I'd almost pity the ones I play.
Almost.

But I will say I am impressed at the creator of this game for having him use kidnapping as a last resort only. That's very realistic, and a sad rarity. ^_^

And even in that scene Liev is super-sweet. ❤️
(You did kinda bring it on yourself too, so I don't blame him -very- much for it.
I'm sure he'll let you go when he can trust that you won't run away.)

He's sweet right to the bitter end. ^_^

Despite my nitpicking, I really did enjoy the game.

It could benefit from a bit polishing --writing wise, and most problems I have with it could be fixed with giving the readers choices on how to react.

But overall it is a good game.

The game lacks a "Load" button.
Very annoying.

Cute cat tho. I love cats. ^_^
Clearly it agrees with me that a nice, yummy steak is the best food. *nods seriously* That is -clearly- what it meant when it licked the knife.

....I was kinda hoping you'd keep trying to find food the cat liked until you had to kill someone, but I guess that was not the way this game would go. lol

It's only two choices in the entire game tho.
But then, the game is ridiculously short, so it makes sense.

How on EARTH are you going to get so many endings from that? oO

I can only assume the game is still under development, seeing as it's too short to even be a full demo version.

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Huh. On the second playtrough your choices changed.
(Or did I miss it the first time?)

(Death by fright? Are you an old lady or something? >_>)

This is by far the cutest horror game I've played.

Although I'm not a fan of games you keep dying in, but that's a personal preference. lol

It's well made tho.

Oh! I've been waiting for this to hit Steam properly!
(It's been on my wishlist since I discover it scheduled to drop there, I heard about it.)

I'm happy to be able to try it out. ^_^

I DO like serial killer.... I do not like men with big muscles....
...especially not ones with blond boyband hair.

Tricky decision... >_>;

Is this game connected to Seraphim Slum?
Cuz I got that game on Steam, and I absolutly love it!

(I will admit that making angels fall is a hobby I truly enjoy... lol
But the game is also really well-made, and the weird art grows on you....like fungus....until it starts to look pretty even if it weirded out at at first.)