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yes!! That's totally your right as the creator of the world, and I'm excited to see what you craft next! 

I love the writing and word play, as well as the characters and pov shifts! The worldbuilding and lore are also so interesting! Tldr: I'm obsessed. 

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I was having issues accessing the two options to submit bug reports, so I hope this works!

When selecting the first dialogue option here, several errors pop up on the following page:

Also! I noticed that the intro of the game is filled with lore that is organically dispersed throughout the text. As a reader, I was overwhelmed with the new lore before I got my footing as my character. I wonder if it would be possible to put that lore somewhere as reference material in the menu/stats page vs as a prologue to the prologue. 

Lemme paused Avowed and replay chapter one real quick before I dive into this bb 🤌🤌

Such fun and lovely writing! I'm sorry to say the bad guy is gonna get me good, and the only reason I haven't been got yet is bc I ran out of words to read. So excited to see what you're cooking! 

You 🤌 are 🤌 not 🤌 alone 🤌

I noticed the scene change immediately! The king is so cute 😭

Hope recovery is going even better than expected! Please don't apologize for healing. Deadlines can be motivating but after a point they become vehicles for shame and harm. Take all the time you need, without any pressure or need for apologies! 

I saw on the cog forum that the author is already working on a fix!

Hope you're doing well and have gotten a chance to rest (and here's hoping that chance was actually restful)! Chronic fatigue is no joke :(

Excited to see more! And cannot wait to see some people get what they deserve 👀 hope all's well, author! 

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I think you might've meant "deaf," unless you were implying our girl Eloise had skilled hearing? ;)

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* dilemma

Possible coding error when Marcella and Julian get ready to head to market.

Ah!!! I missed this update!! So pepped to play through again!

So happy to see this upon logging in! Thanks for the update, and I hope crafting the M!LS chapter goes even more smoothly than expected :) 

This is a great list of resources! Thanks for providing such insight into your workflow!

So valid!! I hope you're doing well and have found time to rest!

One given by the cult and one chosen by you, if I understand the setup correctly.

So cute! I love how some of my choices (like choosing a person during a game vs switching it up) were mentioned by other characters. Hope all is well, author!

Wow! The character art is so serene!

Oh my god, this is so fun!! The premise? Divine. The characters? Stunning. The writing? Eloquent and irreverent.

This feels very promising! I love the tone so far, and the available character choices are thoughtful and engaging. I hope all is well with you and yours and that whatever you're writing right now is going better than expected :)

Great setup, Ash! The characters and lore are charming and engaging. I also appreciate the way character customizations were woven throughout the text; it felt much more seamless and natural than what I've come to expect.

Hell yeah! Excited to see what you've crafted!

William, please, this is wonderful! Thanks for sharing. I hope things are going well for you!

Congratulations!! And thank you!

Hello! I'm obsessed. I'm wondering if I've perhaps lost my way in my playthrough; a certain waitress had just woken me up. Is that the end of what's currently available? I ask because I've just played through three times and I'm certain I've messed up somehow. Hope all's well!!

That's wonderful!! I hope the craft honing is going well🥰

I cannot believe how romantic this sex-heavy game is, like, I'm taken aback. You have such a fun and immersive writing style! I'd love to know more about how you came to hone your craft. 

Additionally, I'm dying over the warlord joke and the later mention in the heretic route. As of the most recent update (like an hour ago, so hell yeah), there are a few repetitive passages during the last available night. I also believe I saw a stray "her" when referring to V very early on in the story; perhaps a mistyped reference to MC's gender?

Lol same! Love to imagine the artist ordering a water and sketching out the judgey ppl at the next table 

Hell yeah!! I hope the revamp (hah!) is going well!

Us judgmentally waiting for other readers to join us in this Meta Waiting

thank you!! 😭😭

Hope things have gotten easier/better for you!

Ooooo! This is so interesting! Adore the characters. Sazora gives me v strong Michelle from Derry Girls vibes, and I love her to bits. If she betrays me, I'll lose it 🫠

(Many well wishes, Devi! Hope recovery is going better than expected!)

The lore and characters are so interesting! I hope to light the fire that chars Gen Kane's corpse 🥰🕯

This setup is so interesting!! Also, I cannot wait for my little boxcar acolyte to eff shit up!

Honestly? I LOVE the whole Duke of the North revival happening rn. So excited for this!

This is so fun! The pacing and characters are great, and I loved the timed reaction!

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You're a wonderful writer, and your characters were a blast to hang out with! I'm excited to see what happens next! I sincerely hope you charge for the full game once it's out bc this is fantastic work (and i would like to buy it).