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Q: The strong performance was attributed to Kirin Beer's

① Since its launch, the beer has been highly acclaimed as a product that expands the value of beer by setting a new standard, being an innovative product, tasting very satisfying and tasting great, and being a joy to drink.

②Following the revision of the liquor tax law, the launch of this product comes at a time of heightened interest in the beer category, which has seen a reduction in taxes on alcoholic beverages, and there are high expectations from distribution companies to revitalize the beer market.In addition to supermarkets and convenience stores, the beer has been widely adopted by drugstores, which sell many sugar-free and zero-sugar beer products.

③Because of the health-consciousness that has increased as a result of the the COVID-19 epidemic and product design that captures demand for home drinking, the company has won trials from a wide range of beer users, not just those who already drink existing zero-sugar beer. 이 표현은 자연스럽습니까?
A: × The strong performance was attributed to Kirin Beer's
✓ The strong performance was attributed to (Kirin Beers or Kirin's Beer)

× ① Since its launch, the beer has been highly acclaimed as a product that expands the value of beer by setting a new standard, being an innovative product, tasting very satisfying and tasting great, and being a joy to drink.
✓ ① Since its launch, the beer has been highly acclaimed as a product that elevates beer by setting a new standard, being an innovative product, tasting great and satisfying, and overall being a joy to drink.

× ②Following the revision of the liquor tax law, the launch of this product comes at a time of heightened interest in the beer category, which has seen a reduction in taxes on alcoholic beverages, and there are high expectations from distribution companies to revitalize the beer market.
✓ ②Following the revision of the liquor tax law, the launch of this product comes at a time of heightened interest in beer, which has seen a reduction in taxes on alcoholic beverages. There are high expectations from distribution companies to revitalize the beer market.

× ③Because of the health-consciousness that has increased as a result of the the COVID-19 epidemic and product design that captures demand for home drinking, the company has won trials from a wide range of beer users, not just those who already drink existing zero-sugar beer.
✓ ③Because of increased health-consciousness as a result of the the COVID-19 epidemic and product design that captures demand for home drinking, the company has won trials from a wide range of beer users, not just those who already drink existing zero-sugar beer.

This sentence doesn't make sense. You wouldn't have beer trials (although that sounds amazing). You can have beer studies, taste tests, etc. Trials are more for safety testing. Drug trials test whether drugs are effective or have side effects.

Also, a beer winning a taste test (that's what it looks like) would not be linked at all to health consciousness or product design.

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