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× UXD(User Experience Design) is one of the biggest trends in the IT field.
✓ UXD(User Experience Design) is one of the most important areas of the IT field.
× In order to figure out why this trend has flourished so much, as crucial factors, I came up with three important aspects of the setting changes.
✓ Why has this area flourished so much?
× In this paragraph, I’d like to introduce one of them.
× In my opinion, a shift in profits-gain structure is one of the keys.
✓ In my opinion, the key is the shift in profits-gain structure.
× The subscription business model is more and more popular because the user prefers this low-risk option without paying a big amount of fee to start.
✓ The subscription business model is more and more popular because the user prefers this low-risk option without paying a large fee to start.
× That means, on contrary, enterprise profits come from the more cautious practical judgment of the users nowadays.
✓ That means, as opposed to upfront fees, enterprise profits in current times are more likely to be a result of the more cautious practical judgment of clients.
× Users at this time tend to judge by actual experience through the trial periods rather than by just impressions or one-way information from the service provider.
✓ Clients nowadays tend to judge by actual experience through trial periods rather than just impressions or one-way information from the service provider.
× In this situation, enhancing user’s engagement to continue using the service even with a certain fee becomes more crucial than ever before.
✓ In this situation, encouraging clients’ engagement to continue using the service even with a regular fee becomes more crucial than ever before.
× It requires a more detailed and precise understanding of the user’s use of the service.
✓ It requires a more detailed and precise understanding of the client’s motive for using the service.
× Deep comprehension of not only the usability of the service but users’ feeling or emotion is the present large interest of UI/ UX designers.
✓ Deep comprehension of not only the usability of the service but clients’ feelings or emotions is the top priority of UI/ UX designers.
× So it can be said that’s one of the reasons each company seeks for some framework of user research and applying them for the actual design.
✓ This is one of the main reasons each company seeks for some framework of user research and applying them for the actual design.
Not a UXD by my husband is. Great write up, but the last sentence is bad and I don’t know how to fix it because I don’t understand UXD!! I’m sorry. Please try to explain the last sentence another way so I can help?