So… As you all know, Chicago franchise is always good in teasing their fans with good potential whumps but, after weeks of waiting, they usually end into nothing… Same happened into the last two episodes of Chicago Med: Jonathan Frost (Darren Barnet) meets someone from his past as a teenage actor, Ainsley: she’s going to play the part of a nurse and asks him to help her getting the opportunity to observe first hand the real work. He looks uneasy, taken aback, yet agrees to every requests, even a dinner invitation…

He literally flies away from her and seeks refuge in the bathroom, taking deep breaths…

until he throws up

He’s definitely upset.

Later, while he’s worried for his friend’s fate,

he has puppy eyes, seems regressed to his childhood needs,

she takes advantage of his emotional distress to try to kiss him but when she makes her move, he steps back, minimizes the situation and walks away.

In the following episode (three weeks later, we had to wait) he’s uncomfortable every time she’s around.

Then he finds himself in the storage room with her. He tries to make conversation remembering the past, then she tries to kiss him again. At first he let her kiss him then steps back and exits the room shaken. Maggie notices them, especially the expression on his face, and gets suspicious.

Seeing a father reassuring his son about his unconditionally love for him, John gets upset and goes for some fresh air where Maggie finds him.

She confronts his friend about the episode in the storage room, asking him about their relationship when he was a minor. He gets defensive, he’s tense while reassuring he was not a victim and tells her to stop prying.

At the end of the episode, he confronts Ainsley, telling her to leave the feelings in the past and refusing to go out for dinner with her. He stands in the hall upset while she leaves livid.

I don’t think they will elaborate it more, besides some tension with Maggie

and that’s a shame: they planned it since John reluctantly admitted he was a child actor, he’s always been secretive of that part of his life… Now that it’s made clear he was the underage victim of an adult predator, they dismiss all the potential in a bunch of scenes… I also think they cut some good material, even if part of it was presented in the episode teaser…

Here comes my request to all the amazing fanfiction writers here in the whump community: would you elaborate it? Develop all this potential? Maybe adding more whump? I can think of a couple of aftermaths:

* John still shaken for remembering the events in his childhood, he has nightmares so he’s sleep deprived at work, plus he’s feeling powerless, unable to change the past rereading it as an adult… He gets careless and vehemently confronts an abusive parent who doesn’t like to be challenged;

* John feels a bit relieved after confronting Ainsley, he tries to go back to his normal life but feels estranged from his coworkers: his relationship with the head nurse is tense, they don’t talk anymore, Ripley is still out of commission and doctor Charles is a psychiatrist, he would guess too much, as Maggie did. One night, exhausted and distracted after two shifts, he walks home but Ainsley has different plans for him, she wants her revenge…

What do you think? I’m no writer and, as you can guess, English is not my mother language, so would some of the many talented fanfics writers take over from here?

Please, say yes.

The Cleaning Lady US episode 4.01 “My Way”

Character: Jorge Sanchez, performed by Santiago Cabrera.

Type of whumps: ambushed and under gunfire, into a gunfight, shot and collapsed, laying on the ground bleeding and taken care of, rolled over then finger pushed into his wound to stop the beleeding, screaming in pain twice, passed out, laying on the floor waiting for help, taken care of on the field and patched up, IV into his arm.

Red Eye’s whumps’ list

[referred to main character Dr. Matthew Nolan, portrayed by Richard Armitage]

Season 1

.01: running away and chased, bleeding wound at his flank and blood on his heads, almost passed out and into a car accident, bleeding head wound and wobbly, arrested and detained in the airport, bruised knuckles, patch-up stripped away and screaming in pain, daring escape from the airport police, handcuffed and hit at his flank, almost poisoned, upset and suspicious.

.02: grief for his colleagues’ sudden death, rough fight and in pain for his his wound.

.03: memories of the previous night: drugged and wobbly, assaulted and stabbed in his flank, groaning and fought, running away and chased, bleeding wound at his flank and blood on his heads, almost passed out and into a car accident, white shirt stained with blood and holding his flank, moaning and mumbling, treated himself with improvised equipment (stapler and paperclips), trembling hands and almost collapsed, groaning in pain and heavily breathing; upset and panicking, grabbed by handcuffs and restrained, heavily breathing.

.04: groaning and blood from the wound, changed the dressing by himself, upset and agitated, punched at his wound and folding in pain, searched and moaning, tense and under gunpoint, throbbing wound and taking ibuprofen, handcuffed again, received upsetting news.

.05: reopened the wound on purpose and wincing, digged into the wound with fingers and crying out in pain, heavily breathing and groaning, wincing, under gunpoint and threatened, attacked and rough fight, repeatedly hit at his wound and cried out in pain, heavily breathing.

.06: back to the inicpit, with the stabbing and the car accident; upset and furious, under gunpoint, jumped in the path of the bullet to protect his friend and shot in the chest, collapsed on the ground groaning, passed out, into a hospital bed half conscious.

Tracker episode 1.10 “Into The Wild”

Character: Colter Shaw, performed by Justin Hartley.

Type of whumps: [training, grunting for physical effort,] ambushed and under gunpoint, shielded another person and got shot at his shoulder, rough landing on the floor and shot at again, grimacing getting up, almost hit by a car, bleeding and heavily breathing, field approximative medicine, panting, brief scuffle, hunted, arm into a sling.

Zorro’s whumps’ list

(referred to main character Zorro / Diego de la Vega, portrayed by Miguel Bernardeau;
*bonus: Enrique Monasterio, portrayed by Emiliano Zurita.]

Season 1

.01: brief scuffle and under swordpoint during a training session, received upsetting news about his father’s death and tears in his eyes, grief, shot at and unpleasant confrontation, nightmare and rough awakening, upsetting news and conflicted, fought against multiple armed soldiers twice, rough sword fight, zorroed himself on his chest.

.02: red fresh Z sign on his chest from previous episode, into a hostage situation during a robbery and under gunpoint, pistol-whipped at his neck, under gunpoint, scuffle and almost shot, worried and defeated, conflicted, brief scuffles and sword fight.

.03: harsh confrontation and sort of shot at, various scuffles, gun pointed at his head, disappointed, lured into a trap and under gunpoint, under gunfire and captured, hands tied above his head and identity exposed, upsetting news and almost shot in the face.

.04: hands tied above his head from previous episode, stabbed and heavily breathing, collapsed and dragged by his arms, laying unable to move and heavily breathing, moaning, falling from the horse, taken care of, feverish, upset but unable to leave the bed, shirt stained with blood after an effort and fainted, helped laying on the bed and wound exposed and bleeding, moaning helped getting undressed, Z scar on his chest, pale, wound taken care of, hand pushed against the wound and groaning in pain, under arrow point, into a duel with swords.

.05: upset, blade at his throat twice, Z scar on his chest, brief scuffle against two armed men, under gunfire and brief scuffles, under gunpoint, disappointed.

.06: ackward conversation and uneasy, Z scar on his chest, upset, brief scuffle, under gunpoint, under gunpoint and chloroformed, passed out and kidnapped, slapped in the face and helped getting up, pointed the gun at his own head and pressed the trigger without consequences, chloroformed again and grabbed when collapsed, upset; *bonus Enrique Monasterio: shot with an arrow at his shoulder, bloody and taken care of.

.07: blackmailed, rough scuffle and pushed to the ground, blade at his throat and heavily panting, upset and heartbroken, difficult conversation and conflicted, annoyed.

.08: brief scuffle, threatened and upset, bitten, angry and argued, rough fight and stabbed, upset and crying.

.09: unpleasant conversation and identity exposed, massaging his injured leg, under gunpoint, sword fight, grieving his father and tears on his cheeks, upset and conflicted, indignant, stabbed in flank and shot at, fallen from the horse semi-unconscious and taken care of, groaning and heavily breathing, grunting in pain and passed out.

.10: holding his flank because of the injury from previous episode, received upsetting news and agitated, moaning during physical effort, harsh confrontation (on purpose), intense sword duel, harsh confrontation (for fake), under gunpoint, rough sword fight and cut at his thigh, stabbed in the back and collapsed on his knees, almost killed, grunting in pain while getting up, pale and sweating, upset, silently crying on his father’s grave, rejected, emotional goodbye; *bonus Enrique Monasterio: intense sword duel, stabbed and collapsed (dead for fake), shot at then swordfights.

In the original book “The Mark of Zorro” (1919) by Johnston McCulley:
brief scuffle, various chases, rejected, brief scuffle, fought and chased, sword duel without consequences, surrounded and rescued.

Tracker’s whumps’ list

[referred to main male character: Colter Shaw, portrayed by Justin Hartley.]

Season 1

.01: pensive, painful memories about his childhood, apprehended by police and into a cell, painful memories telling about his father’s death, under gunpoint and on his knees, shot at his arm and collapsed on the ground, groaning in pain, grunting getting up, furious chase through the woods by foot, jumped on a running truck and almost fallen off, grunting in effort pulling himself up, hanging over a waterfall from a falling truck by only one arm and bleeding by the other, jumped into the waterfall from a great height, arm sling, shown bicep bandaged.

.02: a bit worried for the break-in at his mother’s home, brief scuffle with two men then under gunpoint, interrogated by a cult leader and annoyed, memories of his childhood, surrounded and threatened, under gunpoint, brief fight.

.03: harsh confrontation with an armed man and fought, cut at his back, taken care of by a medic and sewn stitches without anesthesia, old scars on his back, groaning softly, covertly threatened, under gunfire, brief scuffle.

.04: conflicted, rough climbing a hill, under gunpoint, under gunfire and brief scuffle.

.05: arrested on porpouse, chased, hit at his head and knocked out, bloody wound and T-shirt stained, tied to a chair and interrogated, cleaning up by himself, worried, rough fight withiut consequences.

.06: uneasy conversation and painful memories of being betrayed, conflicted, grunting in effort, trapped into a burning barn, slipped and almost fallen into the fire, under gunpoint and threatened.

.07: confronted, angry and indignant, brief scuffle, upset, attacked and punched, thwron to the ground and under gunpoint, brief scuffle, under gunpoint again, fought against two opponents and gash on his forehead, pensive and bruised forehead.

.08: brief scuffle, fought and punched in the face, bruised cheek.

.09: hit with teaser and brief scuffle.

.10: training, grunting for physical effort, ambushed and under gunpoint, shielded another person and got shot at his shoulder, rough landing on the floor and shot at again, grimacing getting up, almost hit by a car, bleeding and heavily breathing, field approximative medicine, panting, brief scuffle, hunted, arm into a sling.

.11: uneasy, unpleasant conversation with his sister, under gunfire and brief gunfight, difficult conversation with his sister about past childhood and pensive.

.12: uneasy conversation with his estranged brother, pensive and conflicted, tense, arrested and handcuffed, into a holding cell, under gunpoint and brief scuffle, into a gunfight (plus Russell Shaw’s whump).

.13: roughly pushed and brief scuffle, restrained and punched in the gut, groaning and on his knees, coughing, under gunpoint, brief scuffle, blackmailed, handcuffed for fake., received upsetting news, pensive.

Season 2

.01: upset confronting a suspect, brief scuffle, under gunpoint, brief rough fight and abrasion on his cheek, bruised cheek, under gunpoint, upset about an old case (from the beginning of the episode).

.02: taken and gone missing, recovering consciuosness un a stretcher restrained, locked into a room and rescued, trasker removed from his neck without anesthesia, brief fight, high-pitched whirring and sore ears.

.03: worried about his friend’s fate, rough fight without consequences (!).

.04: brief fight against a man with a hammer.

.05: TO BE UPDATED https://www.tumblr.com/sowhumpful/766903559256244224 + https://www.tumblr.com/sowhumpful/766854655902908416

.06: under gunfire.

.07: brief scuffle.

.08: under gunpoint twice, upsetting news and tears in his eyes.

.09: upsetting news and tears in his eyes, coughing after a gas filling the room and dizzy, attacked with a hammer and brief fight, on the ground almost killed and saved at the last moment, groaning and coughing.

.10: still shaken up from previous episode’s events, attacked and bar fight, ambushed and knocked out, tied up, under gunpoint, into a gunfight.

.11: fast forward: on his knees kneed and spitting blood, bloody lip and under gunpoint; brief fight and under gunpoint, manhandled and hands tied, (back to beginning) under gunpoint, hit at his leg and kneeled, grabbed by his head and kneed to his face, spitting blood, blood in his mouth and bloody lip, brief scuffle and under gunpoint, brief scuffle.

.12: almost shot because of a trap, into a gunfight, emotional memories.

.13: into a dangerous situation and tense, threatened, annoyed, brief scuffle, under heavy gunfire and into a gunfight.

.14: UPDATING

.15: UPDATING

.16: airing next Sunday.

In the original books (by Jeffery Deaver):

0.5: “Captivated”: under gunpoint, brief scuffle.

1. “The Never Game”: (fast forward) T-shirt stained with blood, jumped into the cold water, hit his head on the pylon, hit his shoulder on a rusty nail and bleeding; molotov thrown against him without consequences, threatened with a (fake) gun, under sniper’s fire, fallen into a trap and badly fallen to the ground, oil drum slammed into his shoulders and toppled him, handcuffed and arrested, ambushed and thought he would be shot, grabbed and interrogated, feeling sick on the helicopter and almost rechted, encounter with a mountain lion, hasrh confrontation and blade at his face, told he’s been shot in the past, under gunpoint and taken, manhandled, under gunfire and worried, back into the cold water and hit by the boat, shoved again toward a pylon and almost crushed, gasping hardly after remerging from water, rescued and dragged onto the pier, hypothermic and badly shivering, upset, brief scuffle, threatened with a gun and handcuffed, sore and pensive.

1.5: “The Second Hostage”: into a hostage situation and under gunpoint, brief scuffle, almost shot and brief fight.

2. “The Goodbye Man”: (fast forward) rock rolling toward his car and almost hit, trapped inside the car and trying to break free, shot at twice, disgusted, dangerous climbing and brief scuffle, shocked, palm slammed into his back and knocking him forward, sore, feeling guilty, upset after a difficult conversation, grabbed and manhandled, brief scuffle, shocked and upset, elbowed and scuffle, slapped in the face, disgusted, worried, brief fight, attacked and pinned under a crowd, his gut and shoulder in agony from the piling on, struggling for breath, pulled to his feet and grippec arms, spat in the face, gasping and breathless, slammed hardto the ground and breathless, hands zip-tied behind him, blow to his gut and struggled to keep
from vomiting, ankles zip-tied too and dragged towars the cliff’s edge, rescued and fought back, shocked, encounter with a rattlesnake, fifty-five feet jump from the cliff into the water, jarring impact and cold water pushing out all of his air, soles stung like hell from impact with water, rescued, rough fight and pounded hard on his back and shoulder and head, car chasing and under gunfire.

2.5: “Forgotten”: ambushed and shot tire, under gunpoint and brief scuffle.

3. “The Final Twist”: stun bomb and brief deafness, into the enemy’s den and surrounded, daring escape and chased, almost shot in the foot and rescued at the very last moment, memories about being overwhelmed by an avalanche and get a bit injured when he was a teenager, attacked in the safe house without consequences, under arrow fire and brief scuffle, into a burning bulding, attacked and forced to drift with the bike, trapped under it and under gunpoint, rescued at the last moment, bleeding scraped knee, ambushed and under gunpoint, rough knife fight and slashed the back of his hand, under heavy gunfire and worried, dressed hand.

3.5: “The Deadline Clock”: targeted and almost hit by a car, targeted again and slided down a hill with the motorbike and got trapped underneath, breathing hard and wincing, under gunpoint, breathing deeply and wincing again, threatened to be tortured with a knife, rescued, turns out the wincing was a façade.

4. “Hunting Time”:

5. “South of Nowhere”: yet to be published.

Tracker episode 1.1 “Klamath Falls”

Character: Colter Shaw, performed by Justin Hartley.

Type of whumps: under gunpoint and on his knees, shot at his arm and collapsed on the ground, groaning in pain, grunting getting up, furious chase through the woods by foot, jumped on a running truck and almost fallen off, grunting in effort pulling himself up, hanging over a waterfall from a falling truck by only one arm and bleeding by the other, jumped into the waterfall from a great height, arm sling, shown bicep bandaged.

Trauma’ whumps’ list

[referred to main male characters:
*Glenn Morrison, portrayed by Taylor Kinney;
*Reuben ‘Rabbit’ Palchuk, portrayed by Cliff Curtis;
*Tyler Briggs, portrayed by Kevin Rankin;
*Cameron Boone, portrayed by Derek Luke;
*bonus: Dr. Joseph Saviano, portrayed by Jamey Sheridan.]

Season 1

01. Reuben 'Rabbit’ Palchuk: into a major helicopter crash (but no aftermath shown), tense relationships with his collegues, painful memories about the crash and shown falling off the helicopter, almost into a car accident, punched in the face and harsh confrontation, insomnia, scar on his shoulder; Tyler Briggs: almost hit by shrapnels by explosion blast and screaming in fear; Cameron Boone: almost hit by shrapnels by explosion blast and screaming in fear, upset, painful memories about the crash, restless.

02. Glenn Morrison: upset, yelled at twice ; Reuben 'Rabbit’ Palchuk: uneasy, argued, angry and argued, upset; Cameron Boone: conflicted, yelled at and threatened with a gun, upset, difficult conversation with his wife.

03. Reuben 'Rabbit’ Palchuk: shot in the vest and collapsed; Cameron Boone: upset, worried for his wife.

04. Glenn Morrison: queesy and passed out, harsh confrontation; Reuben 'Rabbit’ Palchuk: nightmares about his helicopter crash, feeling sick and threw up twice, pissed off twice; Tyler Briggs: blood on his shirt (not his), sort of scuffle, panting after a physical effort; Cameron Boone: upset.

05. Tyler Briggs: annoyed and irritable, almost hit with a bat, really upset realizing his partner is being homophobic; Cameron Boone: annoyed, homophobic and aggressive.

06. Glenn Morrison: into a crash accident and ambulance upside down, upset and worried, moaning during extrication, in hospital, head laceration and fractured clavicle, feeling guilty for the accident and tears in his eyes, arm sling and argued with Rabbit, pushed and fallen, laying on the floor moaning and injured, treated on the field and then laying in ED again; Reuben 'Rabbit’ Palchuk: worried sick; Tyler Briggs: argued; Cameron Boone: argued, uneasy; Joseph Saviano: worried sick, exhausted and sighing, harsh confrontation.

07. Glenn Morrison: bruised forehead from previous episode, upset witnessing an episode of police brutality, uneasy, harsh confrontation and punched in the gut, groaning, provocked, lost his temper and punched repeatedly a guy in the face, bloody knuckles.

08. none.

09. Reuben 'Rabbit’ Palchuk: getting emotional, conflicted.

10. Glenn Morrison: uneasy, painful memories about his addicted sister, annoyed, argued.

11. Reuben 'Rabbit’ Palchuk: operating into a hostage situation and under gunpoint repeatedly, blood on him (not his) and upset, badly argued and grabbed, suspended from work; Tyler Briggs: blood on him (not his); Cameron Boone: annoyed.

12. Glenn Morrison: upset after losing a patient, upset, struggling and trembling hands; Reuben 'Rabbit’ Palchuk: suspended from work from previous episode, uneasy during therapy session, attack of anger and sad later, upset and tears rolling down his cheeks, confronted by his girlfriend and pensive.

13. Reuben 'Rabbit’ Palchuk: painful memories and crying during therapy session, difficult confession; Tyler Briggs: uneasy; Cameron Boone: pensive and conflicted.

14. Glenn Morrison: under gunfire by sniper, tense and freaking out, tension with his jealous girlfiriend, argued; Reuben 'Rabbit’ Palchuk: under gunfire by sniper, shot at; Tyler Briggs: under gunfire by sniper, under shock; Cameron Boone: difficult conversation with his wife and conflicted, under gunfire by sniper; Joseph Saviano: argued.

15. Glenn Morrison: argued with his girlfiriend, worried for his partner and argued with her; Reuben 'Rabbit’ Palchuk: in quarantine, worried for his partner, tense confrontation with Saviano; Tyler Briggs: tension with his partner then confronted by him; Cameron Boone: tension with his partner then harsh confrontation with him; Joseph Saviano: in a difficult position and conflicted, innuendos against him, suspended from work then fired, drunk, harsh confrontation with Nancy then Rabbit.

16. Glenn Morrison: upset watching his girlfriend being humiliated; Reuben 'Rabbit’ Palchuk: embarrassing conversation with his girlfriend’s father.

17. Reuben 'Rabbit’ Palchuk: (in the past) psychotic and subdued by police; Tyler Briggs: blood on him (not his), (in the past) screaming for fear, received upsetting news about his father’s health; Cameron Boone: blood on him (not his).

18. Glenn Morrison: uncomfortable; Reuben 'Rabbit’ Palchuk: upset seeing his girlfriend kissing another man; Tyler Briggs: upset and angry.