Beneath the Tranquil Sheen



I walk along a trail to find
the path that winds beyond,
where courses marked by trees confined,
reveal a tranquil pond.

And there, upon her rightful throne,
a swan swims soft and slow;
in all the hours she spends alone-
this swan, I've come to know.

A slender neck, fine-feathered wings,
a gown of purest white;
With bead-like eyes, her sight still springs
from day into the night.

I watch her graceful, gentle glide,
with burdens not revealed;
Her regal ruse still seems to hide
a loneliness concealed.

What’s covered by her beauty’s gift?
Has calmness killed her fight?
Do troubles drown beneath her drift?
Will she again take flight?

A natural need to mate for life-
I fear her mate’s passed on.
She drifts along this pond in strife,
a lovely, lonely swan.

But take no pity on this queen;
for strength, she cannot mask.
Beneath the water's tranquil sheen,
she’s surging with a task.

The stillness in her wandering,
as ripples rise, I wonder-
Her poise provokes a pondering
of fervent forces under.

Some things aren't quite as they appear;
some surfaces hide battles.
For swans to float on ponds, they bear
the need for frantic paddles.

When fighting just to stay above,
imagine an existence
where we might share a fraction of
a swan's grace and persistence.
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Written on April 01, 2023

Submitted by JessicaWheeler on September 11, 2024

1:18 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH IFIF JKJK LMLM NONO XPXP QRQR
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,279
Words 259
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Jessica Wheeler

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Jessica Wheeler is a writer and poet from Branford, Connecticut, where she resides with her husband and two young daughters. Her creative journey began at a young age, with a strong foundation in music and performing arts. Today, Jessica is an active poet on numerous platforms. Her work has been published in several poetry anthologies and on websites dedicated to the complexities of loss and grief. more…

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