Stylistic Analysis of Sinigang
Stylistic Analysis of Sinigang
Stylistic Analysis of Sinigang
Plot Summary
The short story Sinigang written in 2001 by Marby Villaceran (short for Marie
Aubrey J. Villaceran) narrates how Liza, the main character, deals with the issue of her
father who had an extramarital affair with Sylvia, and consequently had a son, Lem. The
story takes place in Lizas home where she, together with her Tita Loleng, prepares
sinigang for the family dinner, as it is her fathers favorite dish. During the course of
preparing and cooking, Tita Loleng asks Liza about her encounter with Sylvia in the
wake of Lem who died because of cancer. It is through Tita Lolengs questions
juxtaposed with the procedures of preparing sinigang that sparked flashbacks in the
story revealing not only vivid memories of how Liza was made known about her fathers
other family, how uneasy she felt when she finally met Sylvia, or how rancorous and
pretentiously impassive she is towards her father, BUT also, these flashbacks disclose
how unconditional the love of Lizas mother is, and that no matter how Liza denies, her
love for her father, in spite of all his flaws, is never really lost. The man vs. man or more
predominantly (though implicit) man vs. circumstance conflict is resolved when at the
burial of Lem, the father says sorry to Liza a word that Liza needed the most yet,
whether she has forgiven her father or forgotten his fiasco is not clearly resolved.
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Marby Villacerans short story, Sinigang which leaves the reader a tang of sympathy for
Liza, the main character who at the same time acts as the narrator in the story, and
antipathy towards her struggles conjuring up a barrier that seemingly emotionally
separates her from her father, and from many portions in the texts plot. Nevertheless,
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Liza makes an effort in filling in these gaps through ways she never wanted doing but
does anyway, either by circumstance or by choice.
The story is told from the first person point of view (as signified by the narrators
use of the pronoun I) where the information the reader receives is seen only through
the eyes of the narrator. Our views are basically built on the perceptions of the speaker
thus, what we learn from the narrator shapes our understanding of the other characters,
and plot development. Since the narrators knowledge is limited to her own domain, it
follows that ours is too, therefore, we can at times be as surprised as the narrator when
something unexpected takes place. Moreover, this kind of POV used in the story allows
us to sympathize with Lizas emotions, to experience, one way or another, her inner
conflicts, and to understand in a deeper sense her personality.
The main character remains composed and strong (par. 18) amidst familial
turmoil exemplifying her domestic role as a daughter in a Filipino family, that is,
submission to and complying with parents demands and requests. Though, at some
points in the text, she has tendency toward greater assertiveness and probably,
eventually, rebellion (par. 33), she has kept intact her virtues shown in her mature
coping with unfavorable situations, and has regained her concept of a complete family
implied in her imagining of the dinner with his father actually in the frame, though the
connection is not the same as it was (par. 61).
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the shameless daughter; her crushing of the said ingredients served as outlet of her
resentment to her dad.
Furthermore, the title anticipates the mix of tastes sinigang is a perfect blend of
fruity sourness and meaty smack that sometimes singly pops up in the bud, but
oftentimes produce a delightfully distinctive flavor to the delicacy that parallels Lizas
experience at the wake, and that reflects the overall tone of the narrator which is
resentment concerning her fathers infidelity.
The title also suggests the use of local language which is clearly observable in
the characters dialogues Filipino nouns like sinigang (par. 3), palanggana (par. 5),
hugas bigas (par. 54), kangkong (par. 56), and adverbs in the Filipino language such as na
(par. 24) and talaga (par. 30) are used frequently in the narrative. These elements
foreground the native folk atmosphere of the narrative that makes the setting,
characters, and the story more authentic and culturally penetrating.
The presence of interjections and vocalized pauses are made evident in some of
the dialogues as well, for example, Hmm. . . (par. 24), Oh. . . (par. 28), Haay. . .
(par. 30). These foreground the colloquial speech exemplified by the utterances in the
text creating characters who are humans involved in a conversational situation.
The narrators language is mostly descriptive especially giving attention to details
which is observable even at the early parts of the story. For instance, in paragraph 7
when Liza is at the wake in front of Lems coffin, notice how the narrator provides vivid
description of the coffin by employing rich adjectives in conjunction with adverbs. This
style of language use is evident almost in the entire text, which stirs the senses of the
readers to create a clear imaginary picture of what is being described, and may also
intensify the femininity of the main character as she lives in a family which if not for the
father would be female-dominated.
Moreover, this descriptive style is sustained in the manner of exchanges between
Liza and Tita Loleng. Lizas defensive stance in answering the questions is intensified
by adverbs such as offhandedly (par.4), carefully (par.4), and vehemently (par.42), in effect,
Tita Loleng becomes extra cautious in her probe" trying to get as much information,
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at the same time, showing sympathy towards her niece as implied by the phrases
begged for understanding (par.21), nodded understandingly (par.26) and gavesympathetic
look (par.34). The use of these words and phrases that illustrate the conversation does
not merely identify the one deeply affected by the circumstances but also magnifies the
differences in emotional maturity that the two characters have Liza who keeps a safe
distance from the problem, and Tita Loleng who seemingly encourages her to rather
confront it.
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deviation, and others that attract some degree of foregrounding are presented and
discussed in the table. Each identified feature is provided with interpretative comments
that are consistent with characters motives and sentiments, the affective value that
chain of events existing in the story builds up, and the overall theme that unifies the
whole text.
LINGUISTIC
FEATURE
1. Repetition
a) Repetition
of the noun
tomato/es
b) Pairing of
STORY
PART
PASSAGE
MEANING
Par. 5
Par. 43
Par. 7
Two golden
To establish an atmosphere of
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metaphor
with Lizas
experience
in the wake
and
Par. 9
candelabras, each
supporting three
rows of high-wattage
electric candles . . .
causing the flowers
to release more of
their heady scent
before they wilted
prematurely,
. . . the mourners
preferred to stay out
on the veranda for
fear that the heat
from the lights might
also cause them to
wither.
Par. 19
Par. 22
c) Repetition
in meaning
Par. 51
. . . squeezing and
mashing, unsatisfied
until all of me had
been crushed
2. Elliptical
Par. 1
So, what
questions
at the
important
parts of the
narrative
Par. 49
happened?
. . . I needed to ask.
Why?
became
unfaithful,
why
he
abandoned them for another woman
another family, or almost certainly,
why her father could not treat her the
same way as he treated Lem. Her
father did not expect the question OR
did not know how or what to answer,
as in paragraph 50, He met my gaze. I
waited but he would not could not
answer me. He looked away. Also, it
could be inferred from this paragraph
how regretful the father is of his past
actions as he probably knows how
this negatively affected people whom
he values his daughter and Lem
most especially. He feels that no
explanation
could
acceptably
rationalize his past actions, so rather
than responding verbally to Lizas
question, he opted to stay silent and
look away. Moreover, the father may
have thought that responding to
Lizas question would backfire; it
would not suppress her rage but
could possibly aggravate the situation
and cause confrontation, which is
utter disrespect to the funeral, at least
in the Philippine context. This culture
of respect for the dead loved one
may also be the reason why Liza,
though emotional at that moment,
could only ask her father Why?
because if Lizas questions would
further go into details, she would
somehow be humiliating her halfbrother, Lem. In this case, Liza could
be seen as a mature, well-mannered
woman who has control over her
emotions, no matter how intense
these could be.
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3. Phonological feature
Par. 35
Par. 58
I remembered the
flower petals . . . I
had thrown . . . into
the freshly dug
grave . . .
Par. 58
(Onomatopoeia
)
4. Collocational Breaks
leading to
Ambiguity
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Par. 62
Conclusion
Through specifying the recurring linguistic features in the text juxtaposed with
interpretative comments, the link between form and meaning can be seen more clearly.
The stylistic analysis of the texts form allowed the application of inferring meaning that
gradually leads us to the overall unifying themes of the short story specifically, the
Filipino family, in order to endure, should uphold the value of forgiveness and
acceptance; generally, life itself is a struggle, how ones life will turn out depends on
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how one looks at and takes these struggles. In Lizas case, she chose accepting and
living with her fathers mistakes, and starting all over again, because, essentially,
happiness is a choice.
Work Cited:
Villaceran, Marby. Sinigang The Best Philippine Short Stories. RP literature Group, 2001. Web.
23 Sept. 2015.
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