Book Proposal
Book Proposal
Book Proposal
Once youve finished writing your proposal, and before you seek
feedback on it, use this list to make sure your proposal is ready for
you to push the send button. Use this list alongside How to Write a
Book Proposal, 4th Edition by Michael Larsen to create strongest possible proposal for your book.
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___ Your optional career hook: the stature you want to achieve in
your field
___ Your craft hook: the number and qualifications of readers
whove given you feedback on your proposal
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The Outline
___ A list of chapters on the first page of your outline, with the
number of the page in your proposal on which each chapter
outline begins
___ The length of each chapter, flush right on the line with the title
or subtitle
___ After the page count, the number of links, illustrations, or
other visual elements
___ Choosing the right structure for your chapter outlines
___ Having about one line of outline for every page of manuscript
you will write, a list of the entries, or a list of the parts of each
chapter
___ Using and varying outline verbs
___ Beginning each chapter outline with a subject hook
Craft
___ Formatting your proposal
___ Using the sample proposals in Appendix E and at www.x.com
as models
___ Making sure your proposal avoids common writing problems
___ Using the advice about variety, repetition, words to avoid, numbers, and punctuation
___ Optional links to sample clips
___ Optional cover art
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Make form as important as content. Make how you write as important as what you write.
These innocent blasphemies show how even two letters in a word can
transform the meaning of a sentence.
Every word you write counts. Editors are delighted to find fine
writing, and it takes only one wrong word for them to tell the difference. You want editors to read your proposal without stopping and
with a growing rush of enthusiasm. Your book will only have two
basic elements: your idea and the execution of it. The challenge is to
make them equally strong.
Craft comes before art and before commerce. You must learn to
write before you can wring beauty from words. To sell your work,
your writing must rise to a professional level. Craft leaps off the page
instantly, and because editors and agents reject more than 95 percent of what they see, they will be delighted if, after reading your first
paragraph, they can say, My God! This one can really write!
Bell Tolls thirty-nine times. When someone asked him what the
problem was, he replied, Getting the words right. If youre serious
about being a writer, strive to make your writing as lucid, flowing,
creative, brilliant, moving, engaging, entertaining, passionatein a
word, irresistibleas you want your reviews to be.
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words. The key on your keyboard that will do the most for your
writing is the delete key. If you delete all the words you dont need,
the only words you have left are the words you do need.
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small initial sale lowers the prices paid for subsidiary rights and the
next book.
Speed is the enemy of quality. If you let yourself get caught in a
speed trap, you may doom your proposal. Agents and editors can tell
when writers are more anxious to sell their books than to write them,
a sin punishable by a speedy rejection. Doing your proposal right is
far more important than doing it fast, so heed the following advice.
Trust your instincts and reliable readers to know when your proposal
is as good as you can make it. Then its time to see if you are right. The
preparation process takes as long as it takes.
Heres why being an author is something you will be proud of for
the rest of your life.
Its easier than ever to be an author without being a writer. If you have
a books worth of salable information in you, and you can promote
it, but youre not a writer, you can use an editor, book doctor, col-
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writes well.
has a platform.
If all the person does is promote the book like crazy, that would justify the arrangement.
Whats essential is that when your proposal reaches editors, its
unassailable. How you accomplish that is your business.
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Hook editors to your outlines with a quote, event, revelation, anecdote, statistic, idea, surprise, or joke.
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Quotes can draw readers into a chapter, but make them fresh,
concise, and enjoyable to read. Avoid quotes from Plato, Shakespeare, and the Bible; readers and editors have seen the old
standbys too many times.
Beginning your outlines with the strongest slice of prose from each
chapter will help
If your hooks are strong enough, editors may just skim the outlines.
Theyll believe that if you can write well enough and zoom in on the
strongest parts of your book, you know how to structure and outline
your book.
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address
defend
form
advance
define
advise
deliver
go
advocate
demonstrate
guess, guesstimate
affirm
deplore
hammer
agree
describe
harmonize
analyze
help (readers)
appraise
develop
highlight
argue
discuss
identify
assert
dispel
illuminate
assess
dissect
illustrate
assist(s) readers in
distill
include
associate
document
incorporate
attack
dramatize
integrate
attests to
drive home
introduce
balance
elaborate
investigate
blast
emphasize
join
blend
enable
judge
broaden
encourage
justify
establish
lay out
evaluate
lead (readers) to
challenge
examine
link
chart
expand
list
clarify
explain
lock horns
complete
explore
look
confirm
expose
maintain
confront
express
mark
continue
focus on
marshal
convince
follow
mention
debunk
forge
mobilize
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motivate
recommend
sum up
move on to
reconnect
summarize
name
reconstruct
supply
narrow
recount
surprise
note
survey
observe
refute
tackle
offer
reinforce
take
orient (readers)
reject
talk
outline
relate
tease
paint
remind
teem
pepper
reply
tell
persuade
report
thrill
pinpoint
resolve
place
respond
uncover
point out
reveal
undertake
portray
review
unearth
predicts
say
unify
prescribe
scrutinize
unmask
present
unravel
probe
shake up
unveil
share
urge
prod
shift
use
prompt
show
venture
propose
sort out
vindicate
prove
specify
voice
provide
speculate
warn
puncture
stimulate
wax
put
stress
weed out
question
strive
widen
raise
suggest
work out
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To expand the list, try adding the prefixes dis-, re-, or un-; see if the
opposite of a verb fits or if you can use it as a noun.
To keep your outlines from reading like formulas, avoid using the
same verb twice in the same chapter or more than four times in the
outline. If you use a verb more than once, vary it: discusses, discussing, discussion. Vary your verbs as much as accuracy allows.
You can use verbs that involve readers or characters, such as the
following.
In the last part of the chapter, readers learn [discover, find out,
meet, see]
If youre writing about people, you are free to use verbs that describe
their actions. In a biography, however, avoid a string of sentences
beginning with he or she.
Avoid the passive voice. Wrong: The issue of drunk drivers is
examined in the chapter.
Right: The chapter examines the issue of drunk drivers.
I know, Im using formulas to tell you how not to write in a formulaic way. But do as I say, not as I do!
Hot Tip
Because your book doesnt exist yet, write about it in the future tense,
but write your outlines in the present tense.Your chapters dont exist
yet either, but your outlines use many verbs, and they will (oops) read
better without all those wills.
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If you want the book to start with an introduction about what you
want your readers to know before launching into the text, make that
the first or second chapter. Outline it just as you would a separate
chapter. Because the introduction may be a shorter chapter than others, make the outline for it shorter.
Just as the beginning of your proposal needs to hook the editor,
the first chapter of your book must be the subject hook for your book
and must convince readers to read your book. If it doesnt, why would
they continue? Would you? Your first chapter may be short, but make
it as enticing as you can. Think of it as an ad, a brochure, or the proposal to readers for your book. Like your title, it must tell and sell.
When I revised my book about literary agents, our assistant Antonia Anderson read the book and asked, Why do readers have to wait
until chapter five to find out how to get an agent? You learn more by
not being able to answer a question; my silence was instantly enlightening. Now readers learn how to get an agent in chapter one.
Your first chapter has three goals.
1. To excite your readers about what your book will do for them
2. To show readers how enjoyable reading your book will be
3. To start delivering the benefit of your book so your readers get
immediate help (if its a how-to book)
The next chapter will help you solve potential problems when outlining your book.
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Stephen King once said, The road to hell is paved with adverbs.
This chapter is a guide to avoiding adverbs and common mistakes
that keep writers from getting the responses they want from editors.
The two best times to refer to it are before you start your proposal
and after you finish it.
long words. Keep them simple, but if a long word is the best one
to use, do it.
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Variety is as essential a virtue in prose as brevity. An endless succession of short words, sentences, and paragraphs will read like ad copy
or a formula approach to writing. The art of writing is the ability to
express and structure your ideas so every word counts. Stick with the
standards set by the best books in your field.
Heres more advice to keep in mind as you write and edit your
book.
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Make readers care about what happens to the people you write
about.
Give your prose the distinctive voice that only you have.
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If you give talks, you may take acceptable liberties with words
and grammar that, when read, may sound improvised rather
than carefully chosen. Be aware of the difference.
Words to Avoid
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Avoid three years ago or three years from now; it will date your
proposal. Give the current year.
Avoid weak verbs. Instead try using can for could, will for
would, is for seems to be, and is for may be. But avoid sentences
that begin It is or There is/are. Avoid the verb to be, if you can
find a stronger verb.
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Avoid jargon or define it. You may be a psychologist or a computer hacker, but not all your readers are. Dont make your
vocabulary a barrier to communication.
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Avoid etc. You will slow editors down by forcing them to think
about what etc. refers to. Use either the whole list or part of the
list, and preface it with like, such as, or including.
Avoid abbreviations such as i.e. and e.g. that are suitable for
business memosunless, like p.m., they are accepted in formal
prose.
Avoid throat-clearing prefaces to sentences such as It is interesting that . . . or I truly believe that . . .
Numbers
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The Chicago Manual of Style guide for writing numbers recommends using words for the numbers one to ninety-nine and
for numbers at the beginning of sentences. Otherwise, digits
are fine. Follow the usage in comparable books. If youre writing a how-to book in which numbers are important, use Arabic
numbers.
Avoid parentheses in your introduction and outline. If somethings worth saying, say it; if not, leave it out.
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Use a single quote mark for a quote within a quote. For example: He smiled and recalled, She said, You dont say!
Do yourself a favor: Scan these suggestions again after you write your
proposal.
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