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By Filippo Romanello
Abstract
I would like the reader to consider a performance text simply
as a text for performance, as the textual element of a potential
live performance rather than its literary mastercopy. Okay, all
dramatic (or postdramatic) texts are texts for performance - the
reader might think and it is true and you are reading my
remark but lets allow ourselves a shift in emphasis. Let us
indulge in an experiment, let our attention drift for a moment
from product to process, from narrative to form, from represen-
tation to presence Well, what happens? What are we actual-
ly experimenting with? And why? Let me just say in this little
premise that I dont feel at ease with representations: I dont
feel I represent, and I dont want to be represented. Yet even my
text re-presents me. Hence the struggle. Hence my literary la-
bour, a little unaware building a texture amidst which to hide
from overrunning dictation, from citations or recitations and
orders (Derrida 302) for actors, or directors, always ready for a
context... in other words an open yet cohesive dramaturgy, able
to stimulate the actors spontaneous reactions to the text, and
induce shifts in their relationship with the audience. I have pro-
vided two exemplifying extracts (from separate pieces) that you
are welcome to imagine performed as you read.
As a theatre-maker wishing to entertain and engage the audi-

ence both creatively and kinesthetically, I am suggesting a writ-
ing practice that focuses on developing textual material with
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Platform, Vol. 10, No. 1, Are We On The Same Page?, Spring 2016
immanent theatrical qualities1, useful for improvisations

based on psychophysical impulses and personal associations2.
The intent is to let the dramaturgy of the performance emerge
from the collective work of the performers in the studio, based
on a phonetic score. Besides considering (quite conventionally)
the spoken text as one of the triggering elements of a perfor-
mances dramaturgy, this practice relies on limiting the weight
of (predetermined) meaning it carries in itself.
The score should create an ambiguous yet coherent se-
quence of events and use a mix of theatrical devices (e.g. narra-
tion, monologue, audience-address, unallocated lines) and lan-
guage experimentation, in order to inspire, infuse potentiality,
escape literality and/or fool semantic meaning, eventually pro-
viding the actors with different performing choices, and requir-
ing them and the audience to fill in the gaps. It is in these gaps,
in the undecided mise-en-scne, in the unclear meaning, that life
may manifest and representation recede. Similarly, thanks to the
expanded range of acting and staging possibilities available in
performance, this approach is meant to bring authenticity to the
encounter with the audience, which is necessarily framed into
1 As in Magorzata Sugieras use of this adjective, which is to charac-

terise a shift in contemporary performance writing: Nowadays, the
basic structural principle of texts written for theatre increasingly often
turns out to be their immanent theatricality, which is [] a means of
inducing the audience to watch themselves as subjects which perceive,
acquire knowledge and partly create the objects of their cognition
(qtd. in Turner and Behrndt 194).
2 By improvisation, I mean a creative process through which the actor
originates new non-textual material using the text as their score, in
other words, as a detailed yet open enough framework from which to
base their actions: Next I want to advise you never in performance to
seek for spontaneity without a score. In the exercises it is a different
thing altogether. During a performance no real spontaneity is possible
without a score. It would only be an imitation since you would destroy
your spontaneity by chaos (Grotowski 192).
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the work3.
The first extract is from Attempts on Friendship (2014),
a performance text developed for an ensemble of eight young
actors from the Islington Community Theatre, both as an offer
and personal response to meeting the group. Some of the devices
I have embedded in the text are explained in the initial notations.
In this case, openness is sought through the structure of the
piece and the shifting subjectivity of the dramatis personae, yet
it is still narrative that partly pre-threads meanings together.
Characters: A, B, C, D, E, F, PETE and LEA (with A,

B, C and D representing various aspects of F and them-
selves).
The lines of the Prologue are not allocated to any partic-
ular character, therefore all actors may want to learn all
unallocated lines. Other lines may include both internal
and external speech, but this is not clearly demarcated.
In places punctuation is reduced to a minimum. The in-
tention of this notation is to leave the text open to the
creative interpretation of the performers, their impulses
and personal associations. Stage directions are in italic
within brackets.
Prologue: They Will Listen To Us

(The whole company of actors. The following lines
should be read in the order they are written, but they
are not assigned to any performer in particular: each
performer delivers them on impulse. Overlaps are wel-
come. Be aware of the rhythm, tempo and pitch. Please
shout the last line of this section all together)
3 Audiences are framed in the moment they are acknowledged and
they can take (or be given) a more or less specific role.
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- I
- You
- He
- She
- It
- Us
- We
- You?
- You
- Them
- They
- We
- I like us
- I like Ash
- She is white and British
- And green and Chinese
- And brown and English
- And black Caribbean
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- And Mixed-race
- And any other white background
- Any other
- Any other white background
(Pause)
What?
- Any other background
- Other than?
- So she is
- She is
- Everybody
- She is everybody
- Thats it. She/
- He
- He?
- He or she
- Anybody
- Everybody
- And she believes
- You can bet she does
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- He does
- He/she does
- Everybody does
- What?
- What
- What what?
- What does he/she believe?
- She believes in God!
- Thats right. God. Good.
- What god?
- One that is nice, one that is funny, one that

likes jokes.
- There isnt any like that!
- Well she will invent one!
- He!
- So she or he believes she or he can invent a

god that is nice, funny and likes jokes.
- She does so does he
- Thats right. They believe.
- He and she?
- She and he
- It
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- Thats a bit too far.
- Shehe
- Thats better
- Sounds weird though
- So do you.
- What do you mean?
- Are you a boy or a girl?
- Err Im a girl, why?
- Oh you sound like a boy thats why.
- Oh well I dont care
- And shehe either.
- Thats right - shehe doesnt care how shehe

sounds as long as they hear.
- As long as they
- As long as they listen to her - him
- Thats right as long as they listen. But shehe

needs a name.
- And the name is
- Kofi!
- Samia!
- Sairus!
- Lea!
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- Pete!
- Sile!
- Jevan!
- Patrisha!
(until all say their names or others to agree

upon, then a few of them together)
- Ashley!
(Pause, then everybody together the next line)
- Ash
- Ive told you Ash/
- /Ash wants them to listen.
- What does Ash want to say?
- We dont know that yet.
- Ash dont know that yet.
- Ash dont need to know that yet.
- Not yet. But we will
- Ash will
- Ash will need to know. And will know. But

now?
- Now Ash have whatever background, name

and faith. And will make them listen.
- Thats right!
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- You bet!
- They will listen to Ash!
(Only the performers playing A, B, C, D and F remain

onstage.)
A Err I am tall and strong
B I make people laugh like Im funny not ridic-

ulously funny just good fun
C Nice to hang around with
D Despite my accent
B Which is funny
D But sounds ridiculous
A People like me because-
B Because Im different
C Because Im cool, because people from where

I come from are cool
D Despite the stereotypes
A What stereotypes?
D Well like I dont know like they nick anything

from under your nose
C Thats cool
B So they like me because even if I steal from

under my nose ehm I mean their nose which is
cool so they dont mind cause thats cool?
A I am cool because even if I could nick any-

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thing from under your nose I dont, and thats

whats cool and thats why people like me
D But people dont know me and theyre scared.
C So I play it cool and look confident
D But that doesnt work and I end up all alone all

the time
B Thats sad man!
A So I
C So I meet this other boy
A Yes, this other boy who comes from the same

place and were like buddying up
C And he has these cool friends
D These cool friends who have been around long

time, and they take me around show me here
and there so Im not sad at all anymore Im
having fun, and I start thinking wow its cool
to be around these new people, this new place,
the colours, rhythms, slangs, sounds, smells
whatever and I am popular like big time and
girls like me and I like her and and and its
all gone
A, B, C What?
D Its all gone cause shes like she - he likes her

and she likes me and I like her so we have a
fight but I cannot fight really I can only steal
steal from right under his nose so I now I just
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have a black eye and no friends anymore
B Maaaaaan
C Thats no cool at all
A But I but I but I really didnt mean I mean I

just I didnt even know she was who she was -
who is she?
B Shes the boys girlfriend
D Lea
C And she doesnt like him anymore cause Im

around and she understands whats cool and
whats not
D But now I have a black eye and maybe she

wont like me anymore.
A Plus
B Plus?
D Plus I cried
C Ohhh man that is so uncool
A And she saw me. And she cried too. And I said

D Nothing
B I said nothing cause I was just sobbing and

couldnt open my mouth and everybody
laughed and she cried so I also cried oh no I
was already crying
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C That is so not funny man - thats embarrassing!
A Its not embarrassing because because
D Because I didnt want to fight and everybody

knew he was older and bigger and he was jeal-
ous and so people started to talk
A Yeah they started to talk behind his back sayin,

sayin things like she still fancies me - even
with my black eye because Im sweet
C Thats gay talk man
B She still likes me cause Im funny, cause with

my black eye I look funny, just good fun you
know, my black eye matching their black
skin, and people make jokes about that and I
feel better and I dont feel ridiculous anymore
cause-
C Cause people respect me, do you know what I

mean?
A Yes and people now come to me saying she

wants to see me but shes afraid of-
D Of Pete! Hes Pete.
C Shes afraid of Pete cause she fears if he sees

me and her together he will punch me down
again
A But Petes my friend too
B Pete saved my ass and what do I do?
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D Snatch his girlfriend. Thats what I do. From

under his nose.
A Heres what Ill do Ill go say Pete look Pete

Im sorry
C And thats so cool cause its brave cause he

might just knock me out again - on the other
eye maybe
B Which would make me even funnier but may-

be-
C Maybe he wont cause now hes the one people

are making fun of
D And hes sad cause he knows and also his

girlfriend knows and he loved her but shes
changed, somethings changed
A And thats no-ones fault. Thats not my fault,

thats what happens.
B When people like each other
C Thats just what happens its chemistry man
D But - Im not sure about that.
(Pause)
A Not sure about
(Pause)
C About the chemistry about-
B Chemistry? What chemistry man?
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D No the chemistry was there but I knew.
A I knew she was his girlfriend
B I knew she was his girlfriend all along cause I

saw them
C Getting hoooot
B I saw them getting I mean I saw them like

that at the bus stop and I stopped and tried to
hide but she saw that I saw and she laughed
A She smiled actually
D So I knew
A And she knew
C Only Pete didnt know
B Poor Pete
(I Looked at You by The Doors may be played; all go

off singing and dancing)
(PETE, E onstage)
PETE Look Pete Im sorry. You go.
E Look Pete, Im so sorry
PETE Im sorry. Just say Im sorry.
E Im sorry.
PETE Try with look Pete.
E Look Pete, Im sorry.
PETE Not convincing.

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E Pete listen, Im sorry. Really.
PETE Cry.
(E may try to cry in vain)
PETE You think I care?
E -
PETE Say yes.
E Yes.
PETE Well youre wrong. I dont. I dont care. I

dont give a shit actually.
Say say/
E Do you still like her?
PETE Who says that?
E I mean he, she, no well you?
PETE I wouldnt say that.
Shit. I probably would.
E Then Id say: hey man its all yours I mean

you know I, I/
PETE That dont work. Say youre my best friend.
E What? You mean
PETE Say it
E You are my best friend.
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PETE Say my only friend. Say Ill do what you want.

I give her back to you. She might not like me
you know in fact she doesnt she still likes
you and I just want us to be friends. Best
friends. Youre my best friend. Youre my only
best friend.
E You are my only best friend.
PETE Ill have to think about that.
(Shift. Out PETE, in LEA)
LEA So I look at them and theres blood. No not

too much. A little. But theres blood. They are
shedding blood for me. I walk away - I have
my new fur-boots on you know. No I mean,
not like that. My mum you know. Cant have
her noticing it. I know. Thats me. But I mean,
Pete, hes nice he really is, but hes you know
whats the word - impulsive. Its too much. No
its not. I know. Well I dont know what hap-
pened. I dont know. I dont know Im telling
you! Its just, its just chemistry man. Ok. Ok.
See you.
E Really. Lot of blood? Ah right. What? Thats

posh talk man. Yeah right. I know. So always
forward thinking and stuff. I can hear Pete sa-
yin how intelligent you are, and stuff. No its
not. So what happened? What you mean? What
you mean you dont know tell me! Right. Well
come and see me after class so we talk. I dont
like that. But lets talk. K, see ya.
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(Out LEA and E. In F first, then PETE)
F I can hear my heart beating in my chest like

like I dont know like hard. And I get to school
and I look around and I get in from the main
entrance past the gate. The gate. Corridor in
front of me. Empty. Squares of light through
the windows. No one seems to be around.
Strange. Everythings so still and no its not
a bloody dream. Theres tutorials, everybody
should be around. So I breathe, maybe Ill
have a cigarette. Yes a cigarette. I roll one and
go back out. Im looking for the lighter. Do
you have a lighter? Shit its him.
PETE Im just bloody nervous like dont wanna see

anybody just get this out of the way, could
have stayed home, mum going whats wrong
nothing mum just everything - doesnt matter.
Gotta get this out of the way. Im late actual-
ly who cares. Gates open, its always open
whats the point - shit whats he doing here?
Too late did he see me shit someone might
walking past him I dont care, just breathe just
look cool just dont get into it look cool move
along, fuck off.
F He doesnt stop. He hears me he doesnt stop.

Pete!
PETE Shit what da fuck. I turn around.
F He stops.
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(Beat)
Look Pete, Im sorry.
PETE And he goes Look Pete Im sorry. Looks sorry,

looks miserable. And I dont know what to say
and I feel rage and my faces all red Im sure
and my fists my fists went on him already.
He starts. Put my hands in my pockets. His

eyes still black. Cannot laugh.
F Mate. I say. Mate. What the fuck mate Ive just

fucked up man Man whats he looking at
me, hes looking angry at me.
PETE You are sorry. Shit not that shit Ive said it.
Fuck. Im late.
F Like
PETE Yeah.
F I really like - Im really sorry man.
PETE Do you really like her? Shit. Shit. Shit.
F Who? - What da fuck who? Thats Lea asshole

now hes gonna punch me down again fuck...
Hes staring hes staring is he staring at me?
Yes. Yes I do man. I do Im sorry. Shit.
PETE Im silent. Im not looking I cannot look look

in his eyes anymore.
F Look, I do what you want man I mean I just

- what? - youve been a buddy man you saved
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my ass and I - it just happened man I dont

know, what you want me to do. Ill do it.
PETE Say it just say it at least say it. For fuck sake.
F He doesnt answer he looks he looks what does

he look like?
PETE I look stupid I feel confused I need to go he

doesnt say he doesnt say I man you just
stabbed me man you just stabbed me here right
here you see here? right here see? this hurts
man you know you know more than more
than does it hurt? - Shit.
F Ill be alright.
(Pause)
PETE. Im late.
F Hes gone. My cigarette. I really need a ciga-

rette. Shit the lighter.
PETE And Im walking down the corridor. Shit. The

corridor. Squares of light paving me away.
Its empty. Its just me. Shit. This is shit,
its all shit. But hell be alright. Yeah, hell be
alright. Hell be fucking alright.
(Looks at the audience)
Sorry mum
(Walks off)
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The next extract is a monologue from a piece under de-

velopment provisionally titled Vice Device (2015). Within the
piece, the ambition is to go a bit further in testing the efficacy
of a text stripped almost bare of (predetermined) narratives and
meanings, to infuse into (or force onto) the speaking actor an
authentic and creative reaction, one that allows also partners and
audience to engage in the process as it unfolds.
This short monologue is an experiment within English
language, a release of writing impulses struggling to transgress
discourse, an attempt to write the equivalent of a spontaneous
expressive gesture. Stage directions are in Italic.
MAN looks at the audience. WOMAN halts. Icons of

sheets of paper, a folder, two Jpegs (of MAN and WOM-
AN) and a dustbin appear on the screen. The real sheets
of paper, the folder and the dustbin are on the desk. A
cursor drags the WOMANs Jpeg off-screen, but it can-
not actually go off-screen: WOMAN moves to one side
of the stage where she stands motionless. As the other
icons are dragged into the virtual recycle bin on screen,
MAN throws their double into the real dustbin on-
stage (including the desk? he tries: capitalist deskill-
ing!).
MAN See I want to take this opportunity this is op-
portunity it is to be taken it is seriously to be
taken Im serious that is me and not me I mean
to say that I dont know what is real what is real
I know this is not real but at the same time it is.
Time is same and space is same but maybe the
thoughts come from somewhere where some
ever been there. Or all have been there and here.
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So there is a problem we say there is and carry

on but if I say I say there is no going on until
I say and then I do else I might just be written
down forever. So I do what I do is this there
is a problem a problem a technical problem I
think is the brain because I think with the brain
and I think of the brain. It is just between me
and you and you are many and I am many too
we all are many. It is just between all of us that
we might think through this problem of truth.
Imagine that imagine that machine a machine is
a brain and I am the brain and the machine and
I act like a machine. Like a machine why I act
like a machine why is not why is when not why
when it is when we forget and I have forgotten I
have I mean I havent but if I have to tell you I
have to pretend and I dont want to pretend but
what is theatre then.
The difference it is between it is and not for-
get or remember or knowing is was or is was to
know. And will what will to know is will. Will
you have will you have I hope soon so soon so
soon so I can become and not forget but realise I
have become. This is the story of my becoming
and my forgetting where I am becoming from.
I believe that the strength of open performance texts will

ultimately reside among other things in the capacity to trigger
personal associations and unexpected potentialities. To this end,
when writing, we could wish to provide the creative actor4 (and
4 Or actor-dramaturg as suggested by Patrice Pavis (74-80). Perfor-
mance texts dont often go beyond rehearsal rooms anyway.
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the willing reader) with something to work on that is workable.

Dramaturgies of spontaneity aim at creating the conditions for a
supplementing spontaneous action, or creative engagement, on
the part of the audience as well; not only in response to each per-
formances presumed themes, but as that insight reflected in its
mirrors, or seeping through the creases of its formation5; in other
words the immanently human nature of creativity.
Works Cited
Derrida, Jacques. Writing and Difference. London: Routledge
Classics, 1978. Print.
Grotowski, Jerzi. Towards a Poor Theatre. Ed. Eugenio Barba.
London: Methuen Drama, 1975. Print.
Pavis, Patrice. Premature Synthesis: temporary closure for an
end-of-century inventory. TheatreForum. 17 (2000):
74-80. Print.
Turner, Cathy and Behrndt, Synne K. Dramaturgy and Perfor-
mance. London: Palgrave Macmillan, 2008. Print.
5 Or formaction to literally adapt (i.e. adopt through literal translation)

the Italian term for formation, which is formazione (forma + azione
= form + action).
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As a theatre-maker wishing to entertain and engage the audi-

immanent theatrical qualities1, useful for improvisations

1 As in Magorzata Sugieras use of this adjective, which is to charac-

Characters: A, B, C, D, E, F, PETE and LEA (with A,

Prologue: They Will Listen To Us

- She is white and British

- And green and Chinese

- And brown and English

- And black Caribbean

- And any other white background

- Any other white background

- Any other background

- Thats it. She/

- And she believes

- You can bet she does

- What does he/she believe?

- She believes in God!

- Thats right. God. Good.

- One that is nice, one that is funny, one that

- There isnt any like that!

- Well she will invent one!

- So she or he believes she or he can invent a

- She does so does he

- Thats right. They believe.

- Thats a bit too far.

- Sounds weird though

- What do you mean?

- Are you a boy or a girl?

- Err Im a girl, why?

- Oh you sound like a boy thats why.

- Oh well I dont care

- And shehe either.

- Thats right - shehe doesnt care how shehe

- As long as they listen to her - him

- Thats right as long as they listen. But shehe

- And the name is

(until all say their names or others to agree

(Pause, then everybody together the next line)

- Ive told you Ash/

- /Ash wants them to listen.

- What does Ash want to say?

- We dont know that yet.

- Ash dont know that yet.

- Ash dont need to know that yet.

- Not yet. But we will

- Ash will need to know. And will know. But

- Now Ash have whatever background, name

- They will listen to Ash!

(Only the performers playing A, B, C, D and F remain

B I make people laugh like Im funny not ridic-

C Nice to hang around with

D But sounds ridiculous

A People like me because-

C Because Im cool, because people from where

D Despite the stereotypes