MATSUO BASH

TWO HUNDRED
SELECTED HAIKU

Introduction

Chronology

A note on hokku, haiku, and haibun

PARALLEL TEXT

Notes

Further Reading and Links

a portrait of Bash, [The word NOTE in the text indicates a particular crux of translation,
now in the Itsuo Museum, which is discussed further. Click on NOTE to be taken to the relevant
Ikeda City, Osaka discussion, and then on RETURN to come back to the translation.

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 INTRODUCTION

In translating such poems into what I hope is a vibrant and persuasive

English, three features of Bashs original are worth exploring in a little
detail:
INTRODUCTION
syllabic rhythm

as indicated above, Bashs haiku almost always follow a 5-7-5 syllabic

This new translation of two hundred haiku by Matsuo Bash presents pattern; and there is often an assumption that this pattern can be easily
many of the finest poems he ever wrote, from a collection of nearly a translated into a similar syllabic count in English. Yet, as David Landis
thousand; and the translation builds upon the foundations established by Barnhill has pointed out [see Further Reading], Japanese syllables are
the version of his travelogue Oku no hosomichi (The Narrow Road to the both shorter and more uniform than in English, most of them comprising
Deep North), which appeared on this site in 2004. The rendering of Oku simply a consonant and a vowel. The acoustic world evoked by Bashs
no hosomichi into English confronted, quite deliberately, a fundamental haiku, as a result, has a simpler, more regular cadence because of the
question in literary translation: to what extent, if any, might it be possible similarity between each sound. A 5-7-5 syllabic pattern, moreover, is not
to translate from a language of which one had little or no knowledge? native to English poetry. The metrical units most common in English
Would it be simply impossible? Or would such a version have to rely verse are either of two or of three syllables, with an overwhelming
upon so many extraneous aids (other translations, commentaries, emphasis upon the two-syllabled iamb, a weak beat followed by a strong
dictionaries, grammars, thesaureses, native speakers, scholars) as to beat ( ). It is not easy to see, at first sight, how such twos can be
drown any vibrant individual voice in what would essentially be the readily reconciled with the fives and sevens of the original.
translation of a grey collective? And if these supports were unavailable,
or lacking, would such a text inevitably have to be loose paraphrase or Possibly because of these difficulties, few contemporary translators try to
imitation or re-composition because the richness and subtlety of the reproduce the exact 5-7-5 pattern in English. Some opt for 4-6-4 or 5-8-3
original had not been grasped? or 3-7-6, or any pattern where the second section is longer than the first
and third. Some do not worry even about relative length, making all three
It is for individual readers to judge the successes and failures of that sections the same, or the second actually shorter than the other two. Such
avowedly experimental translation of Oku no hosomichi which appeared variations, however, have an arbitrary air about them, as if the form in
four years ago. But the experiment is now developed further in this new which Bash is speaking is somehow marginal, rather than intrinsic, to
collection of Bashs haiku, selected from the nearly three decades of his what he is saying. It is for this reason that the translation here retains the
literary career. The term haiku, and its relationship to two closely 5-7-5 syllabic pattern of the original, except on the very rare occasions
associated terms, hokku and haibun, are clarified in a separate section; but when Bash himself varies the pattern, and the English follows his
here, the basic features of Bashs poems in this mode are worth variation. I have tried to sustain, rather than erode, the natural rhythms of
summarising briefly. They are very short, extraordinarily condensed and English in this syllabic fidelity; but only individual readers can determine
concentrated poems, almost always following a tripartite 5-7-5 syllabic with what success.
pattern, and presenting a distilled moment of perception, very often of the
natural world but also sometimes of domestic or personal life. They
capture things in the unique moment of their happening or being, lineation
celebrating their unequivocal this-ness. A frog leaps into a pond, a
water jar cracks in a freezing night, waves of heat shimmer about a paper it is not always realised that, in Japanese script, Bashs haiku are
robe, a cricket chirps beneath a helmet, a night-heron cries in the presented, not as three horizontal separate lines, but as one continuous
darkness: these moments are held frozen, immune to both easy vertical line, read from top to bottom. As a result, some translators have
symbolisation and to the flow of time. The reality of their presentness is suggested, his haiku should not be set in multiple lines, because pre-
absolute.

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modern Japanese poets had no concept of lineation as a poetic device. heard. Beginning a haiku with a capital letter and ending it with a full
And yet, as Makoto Ueda [see Further Reading] cogently argues, stop suggests that the perception is contained solely and authoritatively
within the seventeen syllables of the poem. But in truth, Bashs haiku
to insist that a hokku should be a one-line poem in English because the begin long before the first syllable is uttered, just as they sound long after
original Japanese poet had no sense of lineation is tantamount to insisting that the seventeenth syllable has been heard.
no English grammatical article, such as a or the, should be used in
translating Japanese sentences because the Japanese language includes no
concept of articles.

Moreover, even in the single continuous line, Japanese readers are aware The two hundred haiku in this collection are presented chronologically,
of the tripartite structuring embedded in it. It is for these reasons that I from the earliest, composed in 1666, to the last haiku Bash ever wrote,
have chosen to present the haiku in three distinct lines, but in an indented in the autumn of 1694. Each poem is presented in a similar format:
and overlapping visual pattern, rather than a clean and straightforward
justification at a left-hand margin. The difference in impact between the the number in the sequence
linear, almost military precision of the period of composition
a Romanised version of the Japanese characters
Autumn passing now. a completely literal rendering that follows the original
Through the slow drizzling of rain, ordering of the Japanese words exactly
The shape of the moon. the final translation into English.

and the more fluid connectedness of A typical presentation therefore looks like this:
autumn passing now
through the slow drizzling of rain
the shape of the moon 85

[Summer 1689]
will be very apparent.
shizukasa ya / iwa ni shimiiru / semi no koe
[stillness! / rock into penetrate / cicadas voice]
punctuation and capitalisation
the utter silence
in order to maintain the rhythmic flow and suggestiveness of Bashs
cutting through the very stone
original, I have tried to punctuate as sparingly as possible, and then often a cicadas rasp
with marks such as the dash ( ) or ellipses (), rather than the more
widely used forms of comma, colon, semi-colon, full stop. All Bashs
haiku contain what is known as a kireji, or cutting word, which is often
indicated in English versions by an exclamation mark. Although I have Where Bash gives a title or other explanatory material for a haiku, this is
used this particular form of punctuation occasionally, it has generally presented after the period of composition. A NOTE against a line or word
seemed too rhetorical and melodramatic in visual and emotional impact indicates further discussion of a particular issue in translation, which can
for any broader application. The almost imperceptible pause of wonder be accessed by clicking on NOTE.
that the kireji signals is better represented by or .

Similarly, the typographical device of capitalisation seems intrusive,

directing response rather than allowing the resonance of the original to be

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Where the versions of haiku presented four years ago in my translation of

Oku no hosomichi were lacking, I hope this new collection will have
remedied any faults. Where the earlier versions were successful, I hope I
have maintained their effectiveness here. Like any translator of Bash, I
owe thanks to all those many predecessors who have done so much to
pave the way, a number of whom are listed in the Further Reading and
Links section. But I am particularly indebted to Makoto Ueda and David
Landis Barnhill for the word-for-word, literal renderings presented in
their editions, and without which, my advance would have been so much
more difficult.

Tim Chilcott
May 2008

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he himself as Master Bash, the pen name he adopts for the

rest of his life.

CHRONOLOGY 1682-3 in the winter of 1682, the Bash hut burns down in a fire that
devastates large parts of Edo. Manages nevertheless to
supervise the first full-scale anthology of his school, now
comprising the work of over a hundred poets. His mother
1644 born in the town of Ueno, in Iga Province, some thirty miles dies, but he remains too poor to be able to travel to her
south-east of Kyoto. His father, Matsuo Yozaemon, is funeral. His students collect donations and provide him with
probably a low-ranking samurai, but little is known about his new accommodation.
mother.
1684 embarks on a journey that results in the first of his travel
1656 his father, who may have been in the service of a local narratives, The Journal of a Weatherbeaten Skeleton.
aristocratic family, the Td, dies. Probably by this time,
Bash is also in the service of the family. He develops a 1686 composes what has since become the most famous of all
close friendship with Td Yoshitada, a boy two years older haiku, about a frog leaping into a pond.
than him who is already interested in poetry. The two receive
their first training in poetic composition together. 1687 in the winter of 1686-7, meets Sora, a neighbour who is later
to become his companion in Oku no Hosomichi. Travels to
1662 composes his earliest known haiku. the lake country some fifty miles northeast of Edo, which
results in a short travel sketch, Kashima mde (The
1666 Td Yoshitada dies suddenly in his twenty-fifth year an pilgrimage to Kashima Shrine). Compiles Atsume ku
event that may have shocked Bash so deeply that he (Collected verses), a collection of his work from the past
resigned from the service and embarked on a life of three years. Sets out on another journey to western Japan,
wandering. which results in Oi no kobumi (My knapsack notebook).

1666-71 no secure evidence about his whereabouts. He may have 1688 continues to travel. Writes Sarashina kik (The journal of
gone to live in Kyoto, or only visited it occasionally. He travel to Sarashina).
continues, however, to write: at least four poems in 1666,
thirty-two in 1667, six in 1669, two in 1670, three in 1671. 1689 undertakes the long northern journey which is to result in
Oku no Hosomichi. He leaves Edo in late spring and draws
1672 first goes to live in Edo (modern-day Tokyo), and in the next his journey to a close in gaki five months later, as autumn
six years becomes more and more known in literary circles, begins to fall. He walks over twelve hundred miles. More
writing haiku for anthologies, teaching, and judging poetry than four years are spent composing, revising and polishing
competitions. A school of Bash gradually comes into being. the final version.

1677-81 seems to have worked for a local waterworks company, 1690-91 continues to travel and to participate in haikai gatherings,
while continuing to gain recognition as a poet. although he is plagued with ill health.

1681 his students build a small house for him in Edo, and plant a 1692 another Bash hut is built for him by his supporters, and he
bash tree (a variety of banana tree) close by. It grows so continues to participate in haikai gatherings.
well that his house becomes known as the Bash hut and

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1693 heartbroken at the death of his nephew Tin, whom he has

cared for as a son since 1676. Closes the gate to his
residence and refuses to see people altogether, although he
later resumes normal social activities.

1694 begins planning another westward journey, although his

health is failing and he feels his end is drawing near. But he
sets out in early summer, carried on a litter. His illness
becomes increasingly critical, and in late autumn, on 28
November, he dies. He is just fifty.

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 A NOTE ON HOKKU, HAIKU, AND HAIBUN

Sarashina Journal, and The Narrow Road to the Deep

North, Bash is revealed as the first great haibun writer,
juxtaposing prose and poetry to persuasive imaginative
A NOTE ON HOKKU, HAIKU, AND HAIBUN effect.

It is worth clarifying briefly the similarities and differences between three

terms that readers will often meet in discussion of Bashs work: hokku,
haiku, and haibun.

hokku historically, hokku evolved out of a favourite form of

fourteenth and fifteenth century Japanese poetry, known as
renga. Renga, literally meaning linked poetry, was a
sequence of short poems generally written by a team of
poets, and following prescribed metrical rules. The hokku,
literally meaning opening verse, was the first and most
important part of the sequence, since it prepared the ground
for everything that followed. Its syllabic pattern was 575.
Gradually, though, the close link between hokku and renga
became more tenuous, with hokku being increasingly
regarded as semi-independent, even self-contained verse, no
longer initiating a following sequence. This view gained
increasing force during the eighteenth and nineteenth
centuries until the independence of hokku was established by
the writer Masaoka Shiki (1867-1902).

haiku In order to distinguish it from earlier verse forms, Shiki gave

the name haiku to this short, independent verse form that
stood by itself, and that retained the earlier syllabic pattern
of 575. The name haiku became increasingly prevalent
during the twentieth century, and is now very widely used,
even though (in the case of Bashs work) it is
anachronistically applied. In the interests of accessibility and
intelligibility to a twenty-first century audience, however, I
use the term haiku (rather than hokku) throughout the
translation.

haibun haibun is a kind of poetic-prose, and normally refers to a

relatively short piece of prose, punctuated by hokku. In his
Journal of Bleached Bones in a Field, Knapsack Notebook,

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[1666] [1668-9]

akikaze no / yarido no kuchi ya / togarigoe nami no hana to / yuki mo ya mizu no / kaeribana

[autumn winds / sliding-doors opening! / piercing-voice] NOTE [waves blossom as / snow also? waters / returning-flower] NOTE

the wind of autumn the waves blossoming

through the opening of a door has snow returned to water,
a cry piercing through flowered out of season?

2 5

[1666-7] [1672]

At the home of someone whose child has died kumo to hadatsu / tomo ka ya kari no / ikiwakare NOTE
[cloud as separate / friend ! gooses / living-separation]
shiroe fusu ya / yo wa sakasama / yuki no take NOTE
[withered bent! / world as-for upside downs / snows bamboo]
as clouds drift apart
a wild goose now separates
withered and bent low from his only friend
the whole world turned upside down
bamboo under snow

3 [1679]

[1667] skai no / nami sake kusashi / ky no tsuki NOTE

[blue-seas / wave rice-wine smell / todays moon]
hana ni akanu / nageki ya kochi no / utabukuro NOTE
[blossoms at not-open / grieve! my / poem-bag]
on a sea of blue,
the waves fragrant with rice-wine,
blossoms all around this moon as wine-cup
I grieve I cannot open
now my poem bag

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[1680-1] [1681]

Feelings on a cold night in Fukagawa Feelings in my grass-thatched hut

ro no koe nami o utte / harawata kru / yo ya namida NOTE bash nowaki shite / tarai ni ame o / kiku yo kana NOTE
[oars voice waves [acc.] hitting / bowels freeze / night! tears] [banana-plant windstorm doing / tub in rain (acc.) / hear night!]

the squeak of the oars slapping on the waves, banana tree in windstorm,
a bowel-freezing night a night of listening to rain
and then the crying dripping in a tub

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8
[1681-3]
[1681]
The bravery of the noonflower
kareeda ni / karasu no tomarikeri / aki no kure
[withered-branch on / crows is-perched / autumns evening] nuki no waka wa / hirugao karenu / hikage kana
[snows within as for / noon-face not wither / sunlight!]
on a withered branch
a crow perches and settles: even in the snow
evening in autumn the noonflower does not wither
the light of the sun

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[1681] [1683]
ygao no / shiroku yoru no kka ni / shisoku torite ganjitsu ya / omoeba sabishi / aki no kure
[evening-face (nom.) / white nights outhouse on / candle hold] [years first day! / when-think lonely / autumns evening]

the moonflowers are white the new years first day!

in the night by the outhouse, yet I pensive and lonely
candle in my hand like autumns evening

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[1683] [1684-7]

On a painting NOTE koe sumite / hokuto ni hibiku / kinuta kana

[voice is-clear / northern-stars to echo / fulling-block]
uma bokuboku / ware o e ni miru / natsuno kana
[horse clip-clop / me (acc.) painting in see / summer-moor!]
how clear its sound, an
echo to the Northern Stars:
clip-clop of a horse block of wood pounds cloth
I see a painting of me
on this summer moor

17

14 [1684-94]

[1684-7] chiru hana ya / tori mo odoroku / koto no chiri

[fall blossoms! / bird also surprised / kotos dust]
kane kiete / hana no ka wa tsuku / ybe kana
[bell disappear / flowers scent as-for strike / evening!]
blossoms are falling,
the birds also are startled
the bell fades away, dust moved by a harp NOTE
the flowers scent is ringing
early eventide

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15 [1684-94]

[1684-7] harusame ya / mino fukikaesu / kawa yanagi

[spring-rain / straw-raincoat blow-back / river willow]
musubu yori / haya ha ni hihiku / izumi kana
[scoop from / quickly teeth in echo / spring!]
springs soft drizzling rain
like straw coats billowing out,
just as I scoop it the river willows
at once it rings through my teeth
water from a spring

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[1684-94] [1684]

waga yado wa /shikaku na kage o / mado no tsuki nozarashi no / kokoro ni kaze no / shimu mi kana
[my hut as-for / squares light (acc.) / windows moon] [bones-exposed-in-a-field (acc.) / heart into winds / penetrate body]

shining in my hut, I think of bleached bones

light in the shape of a square in a field; wind pierces my
from the windows moon body to the heart

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[1684-94] [1684]

A motto: dont speak of others limitations; dont brag about your strengths kumo kiri no / zanji hyakkei o / tsukushikeri
[cloud mists / short-time hundred-scenes (acc.) / exhaust]
monoieba / kuchibiru samushi / aki no kaze
[something speak-when / lips are-cold / autumns wind]
in the mists and cloud
for a moment a hundred scenes
if you say something brought to fulfilment
the lips become quite frozen
the wind of autumn

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21 [1684]

[1684] uma ni nete / zanmu tsuki tshi / cha no keburi

[horse on sleep / lingering-dream moon distant / teas fire
matsukaze no / ochiba ka mizu no /oto suzushi
[pine-winds / falling-leaves? waters / sound is-cool]
dozing on my horse,
dream lingering, distant moon,
are needles falling smoke from a tea fire
as the wind blows through the pines?
cool sound of water

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[1684] [1684-5]

misoka tsuki nashi / chitose no sugi o / daku arashi NOTE yuki to yuki / koyoi sjiwasu no / meigetsu ka
[last-night-of-month moon is-not / thousand-years sugi (acc.) / hold [snow and snow / tonight twelfth-months / bright moon?]
windstorm]

snow is upon snow

last night of the month, no moon can tonight be the twelfth months
a thousand-year old cedar full and whitest moon?
caught in a windstorm

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26 [1684-5]

[1684] Spending a day at the seashore

wuta yumi ya / biwa ni nagusamu / take no oku umi kurete / kamo no koe / honoka ni shiroshi NOTE
[cotton bow! / lute by console / bamboos interior] [sea darken / ducks voice / faintly white]

cotton-beating bow, the sea is darkening

as consoling as a lute now a wild ducks call,
deep in the bamboos faint and indistinct and white

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[1685]
[1684]
On the road to Nara
tsuyu tokutoku / kokorimi ni ukiyo / susugabaya
[dew drip drip / trial as floating-world / would-that-I-could wash] haru nare ya / na mo naki yama no / usugasumi
[spring is! / name also is-not mountains / thin-mist]

dew dripping, dripping

could I wash in it the dust its spring now, yes spring!
of the floating world above the nameless mountains
a faint haze and mist

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[1685] [1685]

Secluded in Second Month Hall A field of sunlight

mizutori ya / kri no s no / kutsu no oto NOTE ch no tobu / bakari nonake no / hikage kana
[water-dripping! / ices monks / clogs sound] [butterflys fly / only mid-fields sunlight!]

water being drawn only butterflies,

in the frozen night NOTE fluttering in the middle of
clopping of monks clogs this field of sunlight

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[1685] [1685]

Crossing the mountains on the road to tsu All through the night the sky kept shifting between clear and cloudy,
leaving us restless
yamaji kite / naniyara yukashi / sumiregusa
[mountain-path come / somehow appealing / wild-violet] kumo oriori / hito o yasumeru / tsukimi kana
[clouds time-time / people (acc.) give-rest / moonviewing!]

on a mountain path
it was somehow so moving from time to time the
a wild violet clouds let people have some rest
as they view the moon

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[1685] 36

[1686]
At Minakuchi I met a friend I had not seen for twenty years

inochi futatsu no / naka ni ikitaru / sakura kana furu hata ya / nazuna hana saku / kakine kana
[life twos / between in lived / cherry-blossom!] [well if-look / shepherds-purse flower bloom / hedge!]

the lives of us two if you look closely

between them has grown up this a shepherds purse flowering
blossoming cherry underneath the hedge

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[1686] [1686]

Grieving for priest Tand zat ka to / hito ni mirarete / tsukimi kana

[blind man? / person to appear-as / moonviewing!]
chi ni taore / ne ni yori hana no / wakare kana
[land on fall / root to approach blossomss / departure!]
he seems to be like
somebody whose eyes are blind,
falling to the ground, gazing at the moon
returning home to its roots
a flowers farewell

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[1686]
38
mono hitotsu / waga yo wa karoki / hisago kana
[1686] [thing one / my house as-for light / gourd!]

furuike ya / kawazu tobikomu / mizo no oto

[old pond! / frog jump-in / waters sound] just one possession
and my house feels as weightless
as an empty gourd
ancient is the pond
suddenly a frog leaps now!
the water echoes

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39 [1686-7]

[1686] A cold night

higashi nishi / awaresa hitotsu / aki no kaze kame waruru / yoru no kri no / nezame kana
[east west / pathos one / autumns wind] [water-jar crack / nights ices / waking!]

throughout east and west a water jar cracks:

the pathos is the same, come in the freezing of the night
the winds of autumn I lie here awake

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[Spring 1687] [Winter 1687-8]

haranaka ya / mono ni mo tsukazu / naku hibari go o taite / tenugui aburu / samusa kana
[field-within! / thing to even not-attach / cry skylark] [dried-pine-needles (acc.) burn / hand-towel dry-over-a-fire/ coldness!]

on the plain up there! burning pine needles

not attached to anything dry my hand towel by the fire
a skylarks singing how bitterly cold

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44
[Winter 1687-8]
[Autumn 1687]
fuyu no hi ya / bash ni kru / kagebshi
inazuma o / te ni toru yami no / skisoku kana [winters sun! / on-horseback on freeze / shadow]
[lightning (acc.) / hand into take darks / small-candle-light!]

a pale wintry sun

a flash of lightning as I ride now on my horse
grasped so tightly in the hand my shadow freezes
torchlight in the dark

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[Autumn 1687] [1688-94]

shizu no ko ya / ine surikakete / tsukiomiru karite nen / kakashi no sode ya / yowa no shimo
[poors child! / rice husking-leaving / moon (acc.) see] [borrow sleep / scarcecrows sleeves! / midnights frost]

a poor peasant boy I should like to sleep

husking rice: he pauses now borrowing the scarecrows clothes
to gaze at the moon the cold of midnight

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[Spring 1688] [Spring 1688]

kareshiba ya / yaya kager / ichi ni-sun Nijik

[dead-grass! / slightly heat-waves / one two-inch]
horohoro to / yamabuki chiru ka / taki no oto NOTE
[flutteringly / mountain-rose falls! / rapids sound]
the dead withered grass
and yet the faintest heat-waves
a few inches high petal on petal
mountain roses flutter down:
the rush of rapids

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[Spring 1688] 53

At Hatsuse [Spring 1688]

haru no yo ya / komorido yukashi / d no sumi hi wa hana ni / kurete sabishi ya / asunar

[springs night! / secluded-person intriguing / temples corner] [sun as-for flower on / darken lonely! / false-cypress]

a night in springtime: sun falls on the flowers,

someone hides mysteriously and yet it darkens, lonely,
in a temple corner NOTE like some false cypress NOTE

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[Spring 1688] [Spring 1688]

Hoso Pass (on the road from Tafu Peak to Rymon) Yoshino

hibari yori / sora ni yasurau / tge kana hanazakari / yama wa higoro no / asaborake
[skylark more-than / sky in rest / mountain-pass! [flowers-in-full-bloom / mountain as-for everydays / dawn]

higher than the lark, flowers in full bloom,

resting there far in the sky, and the mountains as always
Hoso mountain pass at the days dawning

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[Summer 1688] [Summer 1688]

kusa no ha o/ otsuru yori tobu / hataru kana Mount Inaba

[grasss leaf (acc.) / fall then fly / firefly!]
tsukigane no / hibuku y nari / semi no koe
[temple-bell also / reverberate like is / cicadas voice]
falling from a blade
of grass, and flying away,
there goes a firefly the temple bell too
seems as if its echoing
a cicadas cry

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59
[Summer 1688]
[Autumn 1688]
At tsu
In the rice fields at the treasury of the Dharma Temple
yo no natsu / korui ni ukamu / nami no ue
[worlds summer / lake on float / waves top] kari ato ya / wase katakata no / shigi no koe
[harvest after! / early-rice one-sides / snipes voice]

summer in the world

floating now upon the lake after the reaping,
on the tops of waves beside a field of early
rice, cry of a snipe

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[Summer 1688] [Autumn 1688]

Gathering on the fifth day of the sixth month, the first year of Genroku A view of Narumi

hirugao no / mijikayo neburu / hiruma kana hatsuaki ya! / umi mo aota no / hitomidori
[noon-faces / short-night sleep / daytime!] [early-autumn! / sea also green-rice-field / one-green]

here the noon-flowers, early autumn now:

sleeping through the shortest nights the ocean and the rice fields
till the daylight breaks turn a single green

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[Autumn 1688] [Autumn 1688]

First day of autumn Mt. Obasute

tabi ni akite / ky iku ka yara / aki no kaze omokage ya / oba hitori naku / tsuki no tomo
[journey on tired / today which day? / autumns wind] [face! / old-woman alone cry / moons companion]

tired of the journey, shadow of a face

what day is it now today? old woman crying alone,
the wind of autumn the moons companion NOTE

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[Autumn 1688] [Winter 1688-9]
Butterfly on a chrysanthemum blossom Grieving over Rikas wife
aki o hete / ch mo nameru ya / kiku no tsuyu kazuki fusu / futon ya samuki / yo ya sugoki
[autumn (acc.) passing / butterfly also lick! / chrysanthemums dew] [put-on lie-down / futon! cold / night! terrible]

deep into autumn, as I lie down, the

a butterfly sipping there futon pulled up tight, how cold
chrysanthemum dew the desolate night

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[Autumn 1688] [Winter 1688-9]
Yasui departing on a journey At the memorial service of a certain person
miokuri no / ushiro ya sabishi / aki no kaze uzumibi mo / kiyu ya namida no / niyuru oto
[see-offs / back! lonely / autumns wind] [banked-fire even / make-disappear? tears / boiling sound]

seeing you go off, dont they extinguish

only your back far away: even the banks of charcoal
the wind of autumn these tears boiling over?

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[Spring 1689] [Spring 1689]

ganjitsu wa / tagoto no hi koso / koishikere Second year of Genroku, Second Month, at Tzans lodging
[New-Years Day as-for / each-fields sun! / longing]

kager no / waga kata ni tatsu / kamiko kana

first day of the year: [heat-waves / my shoulder on rise / paper-robe!]
its the sun on every field
that brings such longing
the waves of heat NOTE
that shimmer from the shoulders
of my paper robe

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71
[Spring 1689]
[Spring 1689]
omoshiro ya / kotoshi no haru mo / tabi no sora
[exciting! / this years spring also / journeys sky] On a painting of someone drinking sake

tsuki hana mo / nakute sake nomu / hitori kana

how enticing now [moon flower also / is-not sake drink / alone!]
in the spring of this year too,
a travellers sky
no moon, no blossoms,
just me now drinking sake,
totally alone

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[Spring 1689] 72

asayosa o / taga matsu shima zo / katagokoro NOTE [Spring 1689]

[morning evening (acc.) / who wait island! / unrequited-love]
yuku haru ya / tori naki uo no / me wa namida
[go spring! / bird crying fishs / eye as-for tear
morning and evening
on pine island, someone waits:
love thats unfulfilled the spring is passing
the birds all mourn and fishes
eyes are wet with tears

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[Spring 1689] [Summer 1689]

irikakaru / hi mo itoy no / nagori kana ara tto / aoba wakaba no / hi no hikari

[about-to-enter / sun also heat-waves / departure!] [oh solemn / green-leaf young-leafs / suns light]

the sun is sinking how holy a place

now, and the threading heat waves green leaves, young leaves, and through them
also now depart the sunlight now bursts

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[Spring 1689] [Summer 1689]

kane tsukanu / sato wa nani o ka / haru no kure The Killing Stone

[bell not-ring / village as-for what (acc.) ? / springs evening]
ishi no ka ya / natsugusa akaku / tsuyu atsushi
[rocks scent / summer-grass red / dew hot]
a village where no
bells are rung what kind is that
on spring evenings? the stench round the stone
red now the grass of summer,
the dew is scorching

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[Spring 1689] 78

Spending a lonely spring evening in a country cottage [Summer 1689]

iriai no / kane mo kikoezu / haru no kure nishi ka higashi ka / mazu sanae ni mo / kaze no oto
[sunsets / bell also not-hear / springs evening] [west? east? / first rice-sprouts in also / winds sound]

the bell of sunset from the east, or west?

also cannot now be heard among the first rice-sprouts now
on spring evenings the sound of the wind

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[Summer 1689] [Summer 1689]

shimajima ya / chiji ni kudakete / natsu no umi suzushisa o / waga yado ni shite / nemaru nari
[islands-islands! / a thousand-pieces broken / summers sea] [coolness (acc.) / my lodging into make / relax indeed]

islands on islands the lovely coolness

a thousand pieces broken of this lodging I sit here
in the summer sea wholly at my ease

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[Summer 1689] [Summer 1689]

At Takadachi in sh Province haiide yo / kaiya ga shita no

[crawl-out! / silkworms-nurserys / toads voice]
natsugusa ya / tsuwamono-domo ga / yume no ato
[summer-grass! / noble-warriors / dreams remains]
come on, crawl out now!
beneath the silkworm nursery
mounds of summer grass croaking of a toad
the place where noble soldiers
one time dreamed a dream

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81 [Summer 1689]

[Summer 1689] mayuhaki o / omokage ni shite / beni no hana

[eye-brow brush (acc.) / image into make / rouge-plants flower
samidare no / furi nokoshite ya / hikarid
[fifth-month-rains / falling leaving? / light-hall]
so they bring to mind
a ladys small eyebrow brush
so the rains of spring these saffron blossoms
fall and fall, yet leave untouched
this bright Hall of Gold

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[Summer 1689] [Summer 1689]

shizukasa ya / iwa ni shimiiru / semi no koe kumo no mine / ikutsu kuzurete / tsuki no yama
[stillness! / rock into penetrate / cicadas voice] [clouds peak / how-many crumbling / moons mountain]

the utter silence how many cloud peaks

cutting through the very stone have come tumbling down upon
a cicadas rasp the moons own mountain

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[Summer 1689] [Summer 1689]

samidare o / atsumete hayashi / mogamigawa atsuki hi o / umi ni iretari / mogamigawa

[summer-rains (acc.) / gathering swift / Mogami-River] [hot sun (acc.) / sea into have-put / Mogami-River]

gathering the rains the blistering sun

of summer, how swift it is is gathered in the sea by
Mogami River Mogami River

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[Summer 1689] [Summer 1689]

suzushisa ya / hono mikazuki no / haguroyama ybare ya / sakura ni suzumu / nami no hana

[coolness! / faint third-days moon / Haguro-Mountain] [evening-clearing! / cherry-blossoms under to-cool / waves flowers]

such lovely coolness clearing at evening

palely now the crescent moon cool now under cherry trees,
on Mount Haguro blossoms on the waves

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[Summer 1689] [Autumn 1689]

shiogoshi ya / tsuru hagi nurete / umi suzushi At a place called Little Pines
[shallows! / crane legs is-wet / sea cool]
shiorashiki / na ya komatsu fuku / hagi susuki
[lovely / name! small-pine blows /bush-clover pampas]
crossing of the tides
a crane, its long legs splashing
ah how cool the sea what a lovely name!
the wind wafts through young pines, bush
clover, pampas grass

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Looking towards Sado Island [Autumn 1689]

araumi ya / sado ni yokotau / amanogawa muzan ya na / kabuto no shita no / kirigirisu

[rough-sea! / Sado over stretch-out / heavens river] [pitiful!! / helmets undersides / cricket]

billow-crested seas! the pity of it

flowing towards Sado Isle trapped underneath a helmet
heavens Milky Way a cricket chirping

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[Autumn 1689] [Autumn 1689]

akaaka to / hi wa tsurenaku mo / aki no kaze yu no nagori / koyoi wa hada no / samukaran

[red-red ly / sun as-for heartless yet / autumns wind] [hot-springs departure / tonight as-for skins / cold]

the red, blazing red, leaving the hot springs:

of the pitiless sun yet tonight my skin will feel so
autumn in the wind very cool, so cool

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[Autumn 1689] [Autumn 1689]

yu no nagori / iku tabi miru ya / kiri no moto On the fifteenth night, just as the innkeeper had said it might, it rained
[hot-springs departure / how-many times see! / mists under]
meigetsu ya / hokkoku biyori / sadamenaki
[bright-moon! / north-country weather / certainty nonexistent]
leaving the hot springs:
looking back how many times,
searching through the mist night of the full moon
the weather in the north land
so often changes

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[Autumn 1689]
101
Visiting the Kannon temple at Nata
[Autumn 1689]
ishiyama no / ishi yori shiroshi / aki no kaze
[Stone-Mountains / stones more-than is-white / autumns wind] sabishisa ya / suma ni kachitaru / hama no aki
[loneliness! / Suma than triumph / beachs autumn]

whiter far than all

the stones Stone Mountain has oh what loneliness
the autumnal wind more desolate than Suma
this beach in autumn

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[Autumn 1689] 102

Tamae [Autumn 1689]

tsukimi seyo / tamae no ashi o / karanu saki nami no ma ya / kogai ni majiru / hagi no chiri
[moonview / Jewel-Bays reeds (acc.) / not-cut before] [waves interval! / small sea-shells in mix / bush-clovers dust]

the moons beams falling between each wave-break

on the reeds of Jewel Bay mixed with small shells, the debris
before they are cut of bush-clover flowers

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[Autumn 1689] [Winter 1689-90]

hamaguri no / futami ni wakare / yuku aki zo bybu ni wa / yama o egaite / fuyugomori

[clam-shells / Futami for separating / departing autumn!] [folding-screen on as-for / mountain (acc.) paint / winter seclusion]

so, to Futami, on a folding screen

like a clam ripped from its shell a mountain has been painted:
autumns deepening now winter seclusion

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[Autumn 1689] [Spring 1690]

At a place called Nakamura in Ise Province kager ya / saiko no ito no / usugumori

[heat-waves! / saikos threads / thin-cloud]
aki no kaze / ise no hakahara / nao sugoshi
[autumns wind / Ises graveyard / still-more lonely]
such waves of heat now
the saikos leaves so threadlike
the winds of autumn in the thinnest haze
now a graveyard in Ise
is even more bleak

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105 [Spring 1690]

[Winter 1689-90] ch no ha no / ikutabi koyuru / hei no yane

[butterflys wing (nom.) / how-many-times cross-over / walls roof]
fuyuniwa ya / tsuki mo ito naru / mushi no gin
[winter garden! / moon also thread become / insects song]
a butterflys wings,
fluttering how many times
a winter garden on top of the wall?
thinning to a thread, the moon
and an insects song

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[Spring 1690] [Summer 1690]

hitori ama / waraya sugenashi / shirotsutsuji The Evening Cool at Riverside, Fourth Avenue
[alone nun / straw-hut aloof / white azalea]
kawakaze ya / usugaki kitaru / ysuzumi
[river-wind! / pale-persimmon-robes wear / evening-cool]
a nun all alone,
aloof there in her straw hut:
white azalea breeze from the river
wearing pale persimmon robes
the cool of evening

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[Summer 1690]
[Summer 1690]
Staying over at Seta, I worshipped at Ishiyama temple at dawn
and saw the Genji room there. The transience of life

akebono wa / mada murasaki ni / hototogisu yagate shinu / keshiki wa miezu / semi no koe
[dawn as-for / still lavender in / cuckoo] [soon die / appearance as-for not-show / cicadas voice]

the break of day is it will die so soon

lavender which lingers still yet showing no sign of it,
as a cuckoo calls a cicadas cry

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111 [Autumn 1690]

[Summer 1690] On Tanabata

hi no michi ya / aoi katamuku / satsukiame nebu no ki no / hagoshi mo itoe / hoshi no kage

[suns path / hollyhock lean / summer-rains] [silks trees / through-leaves even dislike / stars light]

the path of the sun do not even peer

the hollyhocks turn with it through the leaves of the silk tree:
in the summer rains light falls from the stars

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[Autumn 1690] [Autumn 1690]

tonb ya / toritsuki kaneshi / kusa no ue At Katada

[dragonfly! / cling-to not-able / grasss upside]
bygan no / yosamu ni ochite / tabine kana
[wild duck (nom.) / night-cold from falling / journey-sleep!]
dragonfly NOTE
trying vainly to hold on
to the blade of grass a wild duck is sick,
and falls in the cold of night:
sleep on a journey

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118
[Autumn 1690]
[Winter 1690-1]
Unchiku, a monk in Kyoto, had painted what seemed to be a self-
portrait. It was the picture of a monk with his face turned away. He On the road to my home town
asked me to write a verse on it, so I wrote: You are over sixty years old,
and I am nearing fifty. Together in a dream, we present the form of shigururu ya / ta no arakabu no / kuromo hodo
dreams. Here I add the words of one asleep: [rain! / fieldss new-stubbles / darken extent]

kochira muke / ware mo sabishiki / aki no kure

[this-way turn / I also lonely / autumns evening] early winter showers
enough to blacken fresh-cut
stubble in the fields
turn around to me
I too feel a loneliness
this autumns evening
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[Winter 1690-1]

kirigirisu / wasurene ni naku / kotatsu kana

[cricket / forget-sound with cry / brazier!]

no crickets sound now

as if it forgets to cry:
the brazier burning

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[Winter 1690-1] [Winter 1690-1]

Recalling days of old chidori tachi / fukeyuku shoya no / hiei oroshi

[plover rising / grow-late first-watchs / Hiei wind-that-blows-down-a-
shimo no nochi / nadeshiko sakeru / hioke kana mountain]
[frosts after / pink bloom / wooden-brazier!

the plovers rising

after the frost comes as early evening deepens:
a pink blossom remains on winds storm Mount Hiei
the wooden brazier

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[Winter 1690-1]
[Winter 1690-1]
ishiyama no / ishi ni tabashiru / arare kana
kogarashi ya / hohobare itamu / hito no kao [stone-mountains / stones on shower-down / hail!]
[winter-wind! / cheek-swollen hurt / persons face]

showering down now

the wind of winter on the stones of Stone Mountain
cheeks all swollen now in pain a storm of hailstones!
on somebodys face

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[Winter 1690-1] [Winter 1690-1]

On a journey At tsu

hatsuyuki ya / hijiri koz no / oi no iro sanshaku no / yama mo arashi no / ko no ha kana

[first-snow! / ascetic Koya-missionarys / knapsacks colour] [three-foots / mountain too windstorms / trees leaves!]

first snow has fallen on the low hills too

the colour of a knapsack a mountain windstorm swirling
on a wandring priest the leaves from a tree

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[Winter 1690-1] [Summer 1691]

shibaraku wa / hana no ue naru / tsukiyo kana uki ware o / sabishigarase yo / kankodori

[short-time as-for / blossoms top is / moon-night!] [sorrowful me (acc.) / lonely cause-to-feel / mountain-cuckoo]

lingering a while so sunk in sorrow,

it hangs above the blossoms: make me feel more loneliness,
moon in the night sky oh mountain cuckoo

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[Winter 1690-1] [Summer 1691]

yami no yo ya / su o madowashite / naku chidori te o uteba / kodama ni akuru / natsu no tsuki

[darks night / nest (acc.) lose / cry plovers] [hand (acc.) when-clap / echo in to-dawn / summers moon]

a night of darkness as I clap my hands

it must have lost its nest, a the dawn begins to echo:
plover crying out the moon of summer

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[Summer 1691] [Summer 1691]

hototogisu / takeyabu o / moru tsukiyo shibaraku wa / hana no ue naru / tsukiyo kana

[cuckoo / large-bamboo grove (acc.) / seep moonlight] [short-time as-for / flowers above is / moon-night!

a cuckoo sings now: lingering a while

and through the vast bamboo grove it hangs above the blossoms:
the moonlight seeping moon in the night sky

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[Summer 1691] [Summer 1691]

otoroa ya / ha ni kuiateshi / nori no suna uki ware o / sabishigarase yo / kankodori

[becoming-weak! / tooth in bite-hit / seaweeds-sand] [sorrowful me (acc.) / lonely cause-to-feel! / mountain-cuckoo]

old, with ebbing strength deep in sorrow now,

my teeth find a grain of sand make me feel more loneliness
in the dried seaweed you mountain cuckoo

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[Summer 1691] [Summer 1691]

yami no yo ya / su o madowashite / naku chidori te o uteba / kodama ni akuru / natsu no tsuki

[darks night! / nest (acc.) lose /cry plovers] [hand (acc.) when-hit / echo in to-dawn / summers moon]

a night of darkness I clap my hands now!

it has lost its nest, and now the echoes sound at dawnlight
a plover cries out and the summers moon

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[Summer 1691] [Summer 1691]

hototogisu / takeyabu o / moru tsukiyo mugi no ho ya / namida ni somete / naku hibari

[cuckoo / large-bamboo-grove (acc.) / seep moonlit-night] [barleys ear! / tears with dye / cry skylark]

a cuckoo sings out: these ears of barley

and through the vast bamboo grove, that redden now in the tears
the moonlight seeping of crying skylarks

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[Autumn 1691] [Autumn 1691]

akikase no / fukedomo aoshi / kuri no iga taka no me mo / ima ya kurenu to / naku uzura
[autumn-winds / blow although green / chestnuts burr] [hawks eye also / now! darken / cry quail]

the winds of autumn the hawks eye has now

blow, and yet how green still begun to darken and the
are the chestnut burrs quail begins to cry

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[Autumn 1691] [Autumn 1691]

ushibeya ni / ka no koe kuraki / zansho kana kusa no to ya / higurete kureshi / kiku no sake
[cowshed in / mosquitos voices dark / lingering-heat!] [grasss door! / day-darkening given / chrysanthemums wine]

inside a cowshed in this grass-thatched hut

a mosquitos dusky buzz as day darkens Im given
a lingering heat chrysanthemum wine

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[Autumn 1691] [Autumn 1691]

yasuyasu to / idete izayou / tsuki no kumo hashigeta no / shinobu wa tsuki no / nagori kana
[easy-easy ly / emerge 16th-night-moon / moons clouds] NOTE [bridge-girders / endure as-for moons / departure]

look how easily along the bridge beam

the harvest moon emerges the fern of longing survives NOTE
from behind the clouds as the moon departs

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[Autumn 1691] [Winter 1691-2]

kokono tabi / okite mo tsuki no / nanatsu kana nebuka shiroku / araiagetaru / samusa kana
[nine time / awake although moons / four-oclock!] [leek white / washing-has-completed / cold!]

awakened nine times these leeks, deep-rooted,

and yet the moon is still here washed so spotlessly, pure white,
before the day breaks and how very cold

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[Autumn 1691] [Winter 1691-2]

akikaze ya / kiri ni ugokite / tsuta no shimo suisen ya / shiroki shji no / tomoutsuri

[autumn-wind! / paulownia by moving / ivys frost] [narcissus! / white paper-screens / along-with-reflection]

autumns wind blowing narcissus, and white

on a paulownia tree paper-screens, reflecting now
soon frost on ivy each others colour

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[Winter 1691-2] [Winter 1691-2]

ttogaru / namida ya somete / chiru momiji At Kgetsus house

[valuable / tears? dye / fall autumn-leaves]
yuki o matsu / jgo no kao ya / inabikari
[snow (acc.) wait / wine-drinkers face! / lightning]
so very precious
and do they tint my tears? the
fall of autumn leaves waiting for the snow,
the faces of wine lovers
a flash of lightning

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[Winter 1691-2] [Winter 1691-2]

kogarashi ni / iwa fukitogaru / sugima kana rusu no ma ni / aretaru kami no / ochiba kana
[winter-wind by / rock blow-sharpen / cedar-space!] [absents period in / wild gods / fallen-leaves!]

the wind of winter, all the gods have gone:

sharpening the rocks as it blows everything is desolate
among the cedars among the dead leaves

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[Winter 1691-2] [Winter 1691-2]

With no settled place in this world, for the last six or seven years Ive kuzu no ha no / omote misekeri / kesa no shimo
spent my nights on the road, suffering many illnesses. Not being able to [arrowroots leafs / face showing / mornings frost]
forget my friends and disciples of many years, I finally made my way
back to Edo again. Day after day, they have come to visit me at this
grassy hut, and so I offer this verse in response: leaves of arrowroot
with their faces now exposed:
tomokakumo / narade ya yuki no / kareobana the frost of morning
[somehow / not-becoming! snows / dead-pampas grass]

somehow, in some way,

it has yet survived pampas 154
grass amid the snow
[Winter 1691-2]

uo tori no / kokoro wa skirazu / toshiwasure

[fish birds / heart as-for not-know / year-end-party]

how fish and birds feel

in their hearts, I cannot know
the old year passes

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[Spring 1692] [Summer 1692]

hito mo minu / haru ya kagami no / ura no ume kara hafu no / irihi ya usuki / ysuzumi
[person even not-see / spring! mirrors / behinds plum] [China gables / setting-sun! pale / evening-cool]

a spring that is not on Chinese gables

noticed plum blossoms on the the setting sun growing faint:
back of a mirror the cool of evening

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[Spring 1692] [Autumn 1692]

urayamashi / ukiyo no kita no / yamazakura On the subject of wildflowers of the fields

[envious / floating-worlds norths / mountain-cherry]
nadeshiko no / atsusa wasururu / nokiku kana
[wild-pinks / heat forget / wildflower!]
how enviable:
far north of the floating world,
mountain cherries flower they make me forget
the heat of the summer pinks:
wildflowers of the fields

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[Spring 1692] 160

A parting gift for one heading east [Autumn 1692]

kono kokoro / suiseyo hana ni / goki ichigu mikazuki ni / chi wa oboro nari / soba no hana
[this heart / infer blossom with / begging-bowl one-set] [third-day-moon under / earth as-for vague is / buckwheats flowers]

you may know my heart under the crescent

from a flowering blossom moon, the earth looms hazily:
and a begging bowl the flowers of buckwheat

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[Autumn 1692] [Winter 1692-3]

meigetsu ya / mon ni sashikuru / shiogashira tsuki hana no / gu ni hari taten / kan no iri
[harvest-moon! / gate to rising-come / tide-head] [moon flowers / foolishness on needle will prick / colds entrance]

the moon of harvest a needle will prick

rising now up to my gate the fool entranced by moon flowers:
the tide in its flood start of deep winter

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165
[Autumn 1692]
[Spring 1693]
Near the end of the Fukagawa river, the moon shines into a boat at
a place called Five Pines. haru mo yaya / keshiki totonou / tsuki to ume
[spring also gradually / appearance be-arranged / moon and plum]
kawakami to / kono kawashimo ya / tsuki no tomo
[upriver and / this downriver! / moons companion]
slowly now the spring
is beginning to appear:
up the river now moon and plum blossoms
and then, down the river now
moons companion

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163 [Summer 1693]

[Winter 1692-3] hototogisu / koe yokotau ya / mizu no ue

[cuckoo / voice lie! / waters top]
uzumibi ya / kabe ni wa kyaku no / kagebshi
[banked-charcoal! / wall on as-for guests / shadow]
sound of a cuckoo
whose cry now is stretching out
a banked charcoal fire across the water
over there, against the wall,
shadow of the guest

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[Summer 1693] [Autumn 1693]

fgetsu no / zai mo hanare yo / fukamigusa izayoi wa / wazuka ni yami no / hajime kana

[wind-moons / riches also separate! / peony] [16th -night-moon as-for / little -ly darknesss / beginning!]

they surpass even the sixteenth night moon

the wealth of the wind and moon slightly, ever so slightly,
these peony flowers the darkening begins

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[Autumn 1693]
[Autumn 1693]
Lamenting the death of Matsukura Ranran
takamizu no / hoshi mo tabine ya / iwa no ue
[high-water in / star also journey-sleep! / rocks on] akikaze ni / orate kanashiki / kuwa no tsue
[autumn-wind in / broken sad / mulberrys staff]

in flooding waters
the stars too sleep upon their in the autumn wind
journey on a rock it lies now, sadly broken
a mulberry stick

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[Autumn 1693] [Autumn 1693]

shiratsuyu mo / kobosanu hagi no / uneri kana Mourning Tjun

[white-dew even / not-drop bush-clovers / swaying!]
iru tsuki no / ato wa tsukue no / yosumi kana
[enter moons / after as-for desks / four corners!]
without once letting
fall to earth its bright white dew,
a bush clover sways the moon has set now;
all that remains are the four
corners of his desk

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[Winter 1693-4] [Spring 1694]

kinby no / matsu no furusa yo / fuyugomori ume ga ka ni / mukashi no ichiji / aware nari

[gold-screens / pines oldness! / winter-seclusion] [plums scent in / pasts one-character / pathos is]

on the golden screen the smell of plums, and

a pine appears of great age how the single phrase the past
locked in for winter seems so full of tears

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[Winter 1693-4] [Spring 1694]

kiku no ka ya / niwa ni kiretaru / kutsu no soko hakkuken / sora de ame furu / yanagi kana
[chrysanthemums scent! / garden in broken / sandals bottom] [eight-nine ken / sky in rain falls / willow!] NOTE

chrysanthemums scent forty, fifty feet

in the garden, a worn-out up in the air, the rain falls
sandal upside down through the willow tree

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[Spring 1694] [Spring 1694]

ume ga ka ni / notto hi no deru / yamaji kana harusame ya / hachi no su tsutau / yane no mori
[plums scent in / suddenly suns rise / mountain-path!] [spring-rain! / wasps nest go-along / roofs leak]

the smell of plums, and spring rain dripping down

suddenly the sun appears along a wasps nest, water
on this mountain path leaking through the roof

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[Spring 1694] [Summer 1694]

aoyagi no doro ni shidaruru / shiohi kana At Nagoya in Owari

[green-willows / mud in hang-down / low-tide!]
yo o tabi ni / shiro kaku oda no / yukimodori
[world through journey on / field plough small-fields / go-return]
green willow branches
drooping down into the mud:
it is low tide now travelling the world, NOTE
tilling a small field of rice
back and forth and back

180

[Summer 1694] 183

unohana ya / kuraki yanagi no / oyobigoshi [Summer 1694]

[deutzia! / dark willows / bending-back]
rokugatsu ya / mine ni kumo oku / arashiyama
[sixth-month! / peak on clouds lay / windstorm-mountain]
a deutzia bush
and over it, dark, a willow
that is bending back the sixth month is here!
clouds cover now its summit,
the Windstorm Mountain

181

[Summer 1694] 184

uguisu ya / take no koyabu ni / oi o naku [Summer 1694]

[bush-warbler! / bamboos young grove in / age (acc.) cry]
kiyotaki ya / nami ni chirikomu / aomatsuba
[clear-waterfall! / waves in fall-go-in / green-pine-needles]
an old bush warbler
in a grove of bamboo shoots
singing of its age clear cascading stream
falling in the water now
needles from green pines

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[Summer 1694] [Autumn 1694]

At Kyokusuis house On the back wall of a N stage in Honma Shumes house is a

picture of skeletons playing music and performing. Is human life any
natsu no yo ya / kuzurete akeshi / hiyashimono different from this? Zhuangzi used to have a skull for his pillow, and
[summers night! / broken dawn / chilled-food said he could not distinguish reality from dream. This truly evokes the
insubstantiality of our lives.

night in summertime inazuma ya / kao no tokoro ga / susuki no ho

at dawn, scattered leftovers [lightning! / faces place (nom.) / miscanthuss plume]
of cold food, so cold

a flash of lightning
where once there were faces, now
plumes of pampas grass
186

[Summer 1694]

sarabachi mo / honoka ni yami no / yoisuzumi 188

[plate-bowl also / dim -ly darks / evening-cool]
[Autumn 1694]

the plates and bowls too michi hososhi / sumotorigusa no / hana no tsuyu
begin to dim in twilight: [road narrow / wire-grasss / flowers dew]
the cool of evening

a narrow pathway
where the wire grass blossoms now
overflow with dew

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[Autumn 1694] [Autumn 1694]

inazuma ya / yami no kata yuku / goi no koe bii to naku / shirigoe kanashi / yoru no shika
[lightning! / darknesss direction go / night-herons voice] [beee cry / trailing-voice is-sad / nights deer]

a flash of lightning they make a cry beeeee

echoing into darkness a lingering sound so sad:
a night-herons cry the deer of the night

193
190
[Autumn 1694]
[Autumn 1694]
At Dark Pass
kazairo ya / shidoro ni ueshi / niwa no aki
[wind-colour! / confused ly plant / gardens autumn] kiku no ka ni / kuragari noboru / sekku kana
[chrysanthemums scent in / dark climb / festival!]

the colour of the wind

planted all confusedly, chrysanthemums scent
an autumn garden all round, climbing through the dark
at festival time

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[Autumn 1694] [Autumn 1694]

meigetsu ni / fumoto no kiri ya / ta no kumori At Kirys house

[bright-moon under / foothills mist! / fields cloudiness]
aki mo haya / baratsuku ame ni / tsuki no nari
[autumn already / sprinkle rain in / moons form]
beneath the harvest
moon, mist upon the foothills,
haze upon the fields autumn passing now
through the slow drizzling of rain
the shape of the moon

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[Autumn 1694] [Autumn 1694]

My thoughts shiragiku no / me ni tatete miru / chiri mo nashi

[white-chrysanthemum (nom.) / eye in rises see / dust even is-not]
kono michi ya / yuku hito nashi ni / aki no kure
[this road! / travelling person not with / autumns evening]
white chrysanthemum:
the eye looks at it closely
and the road ahead not one speck of dust
no-one else is travelling it;
an autumn twilight
199

[Autumn 1694]
196
Written at Keishis house, on the topic Accompanying a lovely boy
[Autumn 1694] in the moonlight

matsukaze ya / noki o megutte / aki kurenu tsuki sumu ya / kitsune kowagaru / chigo no tomo
[pine-wind! / eaves (acc.) go-around / autumn end] [moon is-clear! / fox fear / boy-lovers companion]

the wind in the pines the moon is clear, and

swirling now around the eaves I am with my lovely boy
as the autumn ends frightened by a fox

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[Autumn 1694] [Autumn 1694]

A wanderers thoughts During illness

kono aki wa / nande toshiyoru / kumo ni tori tabi ni yande / yume wa kareno o / kakemeguru
[this autumn as-for / why grow-old / cloud in bird] [journey on be-sick / dreams as-for withered-field (acc.) / run-around]

the autumn passes: ill and journeying

why now do I feel so old? my dreams keep roaming over
into the clouds, a bird fields now withered all

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 NOTES

10 The first line of this haiku has, unusually, seven syllables, which are
duplicated in the translation. There are differing views about
whether the tub was outside (to wash in, to catch rainwater) or inside
(to stop a leak inundating the hut). RETURN
NOTES
13 Bashs preface to this haiku provides the context of its creation:
That monk whos wearing a hat and riding a horse, where has he
come from, and why is he wandering? That, replied the painter, is
1 There is a play on words here. Yari can mean both sliding door and a portrait of you on a journey. If that is the case, bumbling
spear; and kuchi means both opening and mouth. I try to evoke horseman who roams the wide world, take care you dont fall from
all four meanings in through the opening of a door / a cry the horse. RETURN
piercing through. RETURN
17 A koto was a classical stringed instrument which, like music in
2 Yo means a joint [here, of bamboo] as well as world. Yo wa general, was said to have the power to make dust move. RETURN
sakasama is a common expression meaning the world is upside-
down or the world is topsy-turvy. RETURN 25 The first line of this haiku has seven, rather than five, syllables. This
expansion is followed in the translation. RETURN
3 Akanu means both not open and also not be tired of. A poem
bag was used to carry manuscripts of verse. RETURN 29 Bashs original text varies the syllabic count from 5/7/5 to 5/5/7.
This variation is copied in the translation. RETURN
4 The phrase nami no hana refers to the caps of waves that look like
white blossoms. Kaeribana literally means returning flower, and 31 Bashs original text presents a 5/5/5 syllabic pattern, rather than
here refers to a flower that blooms out of season. RETURN 5/7/5. This variation is followed in the translation. The adjective
frozen could also be applied to the monks, as well as to the implied
5 The term kari can indicate both wild goose and temporary, a dual night. RETURN
meaning explained by the fact that wild geese are migrant birds,
leaving Japan in spring and returning in autumn. The first phrase 50 A rare deviation from the attempt to preserve Bashs syllabic
kumo to hedatsu has also been read as separated by clouds or count, with six syllables in the last line. RETURN
beyond the clouds. RETURN
52 As Ueda [see Further Reading section] points out, the word
6 Tsuki can mean wine cup as well as moon, hence the apposition horohoro is descriptive of thin and delicate things fluttering down
of this moon as wine-cup. RETURN one after another, but it can also be used as onomatopoeia for a
pheasants cry. RETURN
7 A markedly irregular haiku, not only in its metre (the first line has
10 syllables rather than 5, the second 6 rather than 7), but also in its 53 As Barnhill [see Further Reading section] argues, the asunar or
unusual placing of the cutting word ya in the last line. The phrase false cypresslooks like a hinoki cypress, a tree whose wood is
ro no koe, too, may refer either to the sound the oar makes in the highly prized, while that of the false cypress is not. Literally,
oarlocks, or to the sound it makes as it dips into the water. The asunar means tomorrow I will become, and the context implies
version here follows the unusual syllabic pattern exactly, as well as tomorrow I will become a cypress. The asunar seems to be what
evoking both the sounds that the oar makes (the squeak of the oars it is not; it appears to fall short of what one might expect it to
slapping on the waves). RETURN achieve. RETURN

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64 The phrase tsuki no tomo has been interpreted as the moon being the
womans companion, but also as the womans image being Bashs
companion as he looks at the moon. RETURN

68 The term matsu means both a pine and to wait or look forward
to; and Matsushima is a cluster of pine-clad islands famous for their
beauty. Both meanings of the word are contained in the line on pine
island someone waits. RETURN

70 Following the original kager no, the translated line contains four
syllables only. RETURN

115 The three syllables of the first line here follow the original tonb ya.
RETURN

140 The sixteenth-night moon occurs on 8 September (the sixteenth

night of the Eighth Month), a day after the harvest moon. RETURN

143 Shinobu means both to remember and to long for something; and
shinobugusa is the hares foot fern, the fern of longing. RETURN

177 A ken is a measure of length, of about six feet. There is a continuing

debate about whether the rain is continuing to fall, or has stopped,
leaving the drops glistening in the tree. I incline to the former
interpretation, not least because raindrops on leaves would scarcely
be discernible at a height of forty to fifty feet. RETURN

182 The term yo can mean life as well as world, and so the first line
could be equally well rendered as journeying through life. Kaku
means to plough a field of rice in preparation for transplanting. But
as Barnhill [see Further Reading] points out, the term also has two
homonyms, meaning to write and to paint, which connect
agricultural work with artistic. RETURN

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 FURTHER READING AND LINKS

Ueda, Makoto, trans. Bash and his Interpreters: Selected Hokku

with Commentary. Stanford: Stanford
University Press, 1991.
FURTHER READING AND LINKS

Critical studies concerned with translation

Translations
Several of the editions above present introductory comments about the
There are countless translations of Bashs haiku into English, from problems to be faced in any translation of Bashs haiku. By far the most
numerous versions of individual haiku or small selections of them, to detailed and valuable exploration of those difficulties, though, is Mark
larger and more comprehensive texts. Among the more widely ranging Jewel, The Beat of Different Drummers: English Translations of Hokku
editions are: from Matsuo Bashos Oku no hosomichi, World Haiku Review, July
2002 [see also under Links section below]. Also of great interest is Mark
McGuinness, Reading Bash in the original, in
www.wishfulthinking.co.uk/poetry/2006/04/28. This article explores the
Barnhill, David Landis, Bashs Haiku: Selected Poems by Matsuo different stages of translation presented in Toshiharu Osekos Bashs
Bash. Albany: State University of New York Haiku [see above]. Despite extensive searching, however, Osekos edition
Press, 2004. remains unavailable.

Blyth, R.H., trans. Haiku. 4 vols. Tokyo: Hokuseid, 1949-52.

____ A History of Haiku. 2 vols. Tokyo: Hokuseid, Links

1963-4.
Internet sites concerned with Bashs life and work, and especially with
Carter, Steven, trans. Traditional Japanese Poetry: an Anthology. haiku in general, are very numerous indeed. Searching simply for
Stanford: Stanford University Press, 1991. Matsuo Bash in Google, for example, currently (2007) yields over
150,000 references. For general studies and surveys of haiku, which often
Hamill, Sam, trans. The Essential Bash. Boston: Shambhala, 1999. point to further material, the following are particularly useful:

Hass, Robert, ed. The Essential Haiku: Versions of Bash, Buson, http://www.bopsecrets.org
and Issa. Hopewell, NJ: Ecco Press, 1994.
http://www.gardendigest.com/poetry/index.htm
Oseko, Toshiharu, trans. Bashs Haiku. 2 vols. Tokyo: Maruzen, 1990.
http://my.execpc.com/~ohaus/haiklink.htm
Shirane, Haruo, ed. Early Modern Japanese Literature: an
Anthology, 1600-1900. New York: Columbia http://www.worldhaikuclub.org
University Press, 2002.
http://www.worldhaikureview.org
Stryk, Lucien, trans. On Love and Barley: Haiku of Bash.
Harmondsworth: Penguin, 1985. http://www.f.waseda.jp/mjewel/jlit/

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