Narrative Tenses
Narrative Tenses
Narrative Tenses
Alice left her family home in the morning and moved to the big city. What a busy day it was! She
sat and looked at the cosy living room around her. At last the house was hers. She gazed out at
the London skyline with awe.
The Past Perfect is used to express an action that happened before a definite time in the past.
A writer can use it to re-order the events of a narrative for dramatic effect.
Alice sat and looked at the cosy living room around her. At last the house was hers. What a
busy day it had been! She had left her family home in the morning and had moved to the big
city. She gazed at the London skyline with awe.
Notice that had need not be repeated if the subject of both verbs is the same.
She had said goodbye to her mother and (had) caught the train to London.
It is not always essential to use the Past Perfect. If it is clear that the events described in the
time clause took place before the one in the main clause, the Past Simple can be used.
After she said goodbye to her mother, she caught the train to London.
If it is important to show that the first action was completed before the second one began, the
Past Perfect must be used.
When she had raised sufficient capital, she put in an offer on the house.
For reasons of style, it is unwise (and unnecessary) to have to many verbs in the Past Perfect
one after another. Once the time aspect of 'past in the past' has been established, the Past Simple
can be used as long as there is no ambiguity.
The furniture suited the room perfectly. She had been to auction rooms looking for just the right
period pieces, and had found some excellent examples of Regency workmanship. She bought
them at good prices, and didn't pay more than five hundred pounds for anything.
3. The Past Continuous and the Past Perfect Continuous
The Past Continuous and the Past Perfect Continuous (as with all continuous tenses) express
ideas of activity in progress or repeated activity in the past.
Notes
The Past Simple expresses past actions as simple, complete facts. The Past Continous
gives past activities time and duration.
'What did you do last night?'
'I stayed at home and watched the football.'
VS.
'I phoned you last night, but there was no reply.'
'Oh, I was watching the football and I didn't hear the phone. Sorry.'
Notice how the question in the Past Continous and the Past Simple refer to different
times.
When we arrived, Jan was ironing. She stopped ironing and made some coffee.
2. By using the Past Perfect, the speaker or writer can tell a story in a different order.
John sat and looked at all the mess. It had been a great party, and everyone had had a
good time. Even the
food had been all right. Unfortunately, Andy upset Peter, so Peter left early. Pat came
looking for Peter, but
he'd already gone.
John felt tired. He'd been working all day to prepare for the party. It was time for bed.