WRITING A LEDE

Your audience will greatly increase with the right lede for your newspaper article. Listed below
are ways to improve your lede writing.

What is a lede?

A lede is the first sentence of your writing. It is also spelled leadboth are accepted spellings
and pronounced LEED, but the spelling of lede was adapted to avoid confusion with the
metal lead, which was once used in the printing process. Depending on whether youre writing a
hard or soft story, a lede should reflect the content of your article. You wouldnt write

Schools out a little early this summer

if your article was about a bomb threat to a local middle school. Consider both your audience and
your newspaper.

Remember: a sensational lede (one that exaggerates events and facts and uses bad word play) may get what you
write noticed, but in a bad way. Yellow journalism, journalism that uses sensationalism and cheap thrills to attract
readers, is worse than clichs.

The basics of a lede

A lede is one sentence of 35 words or less and may contain one comma. Some journalists use a
semi-colon to join two independent clauses together in one lede. This is bad style. Remember:
say as much as you can in the least number of words possible. Do not use a question, a quotation,
or a clich (an overused expression) for your lede. These are cutesy tricks that beginner
journalists often use, and these overused tricks reflect the journalists inexperience.

Remember: Always write in the active, and not the passive, voice! Something happening to someone is not news.
Someone doing something is news.

EXERCISE 1
Write a lede for the following news ideas. Remember to distinguish between hard and soft news.

(The Prime Minister announces his retirement)

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(A colour theorist predicts what hues will be used by designers in the fall)

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(The Saint Patricks Day parade is accidentally rerouted)

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(Digital pets are back in demand)

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What is the difference between hard and soft news?

Hard news is breaking news. It can be timely and might be ongoing. A crime story or suspected
arson are examples of hard news. Most newspapers are composed of hard news stories.

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Soft news is more relaxed. It is entertainment, fashion, and lifestyle news, as well as opinion
columns and editorials. Here, puns and writing in the first person can be used because there is
more time to tell a story. H. L. Mencken, a famous American journalist, described journalism as
being literature in a hurry. This is especially reflective of soft news.

What is the difference between a hard lede and a soft lede?

A hard lede sums up a news story. It gives the most amount of informationthe who, what,
when, where, why, and how, known as the 5 Ws and one Hthat is relevant to the core of the
story in as few words as possible. However, be wary of what the Canadian Press style book calls
the grab bag lede, where journalists try to cram every detail they think is relevant to the story
in the lede. While this seems like a good thing, in reality it is just overkill.

Twenty-two planes are being detained at Pearson due to the largest bomb threat in the
airports history.

A soft lede is more narrativeit sets the scene for what story lies ahead. A soft lede can be a
delayed lede: you can take your time in introducing the reader to what youre writing about, and
you have more leeway to include more than the 5 Ws and one H.
Michael Krawczynski has an unusual Saturday morning routine.
Instead of the usual sugary cereal and hours of retro cartoons, the 17-year-old Ryerson
High student, along with other teenagers and young adults, runs through alleys, bounces
off walls, and jumps from rooftop to rooftop.
Krawczynski and his friends are doing more than letting off than steam: they are
practising the art of parkour, a French philosophical movement and high-impact activity
that . . .

EXERCISE 2
Shorten or rewrite the following ledes. The first exercise has been done for you.

Prime Minister Smith announced today he will visit the Northwest Territories, Manitoba,
Labrador, and Prince Edward Island, before setting off for a month-long vacation in Hawaii. And
hes going to do it in the next five days.

Prime Minister Smith announced today he will visit one territory and three provinces in the
upcoming workweek before vacationing.

1-Deborah Harrison began the morning as she always did: an egg-white omelette with a cup of
coffee, followed by light stretching and an early morning 5k run through Allen Gardens. But this
morning would be different: amidst the rose bushes and crab grass was the body of John
Thomas.
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2-Why did the Member of Parliament cross the road?

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3-The bigger sports players come, the harder they fall.

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4-This morning, I had breakfast with Elvis, said MP John Turner.

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5-Tom Sawyer and Huck Finn are local wayward boys and pranksters; however, with reports of
their drowning in the Mississippi river, have they played their last prank?
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What other kinds of ledes are there?

A delayed or indirect lede is a soft news lede. Like soft news, it is literature in a hurry,
meaning there is room for more literary techniques. Writers can have a lot of fun with a delayed
lede, as playing with words, narrating with attention to visualisation, and telling a story as
opposed to laying out facts are part of soft news writing.

A direct lede is also known as a hard news lede. It is 35 words with one comma, using the 5Ws
and one H and news pegs where necessary.

A summary lede may seem like an easy lede to write, but it can actually be quite difficult. It is
necessary to find the most important point of a news article and summarize it in the lede without
sacrificing important details.

A multiple element lede is a lede that contains more than one story. These types of ledes are to
be used as little as possible, as they can sometimes be confusing to read.

A grab bag lede is a multiple element lede gone wrong. Here, the writer has tried to include too
many ideas in the lede, resulting in a disorganized mess.

EXERCISE 3
Write a delayed lede for the following soft news ideas.

1-The Writing Centres book club is increasing the amount of books it reads during a school
term.
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2-(A previously unknown opera written by Richard Wagner has been discovered)
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3-The Tour de France is celebrating its 95th anniversary.

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4-The University of Guelph-Humbers plant wall wins first prize at a gardening competition
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