The document provides feedback on an English test response about the test taker's hometown. [1] The summary includes feedback on fluency, grammar, vocabulary, pronunciation, and accuracy. [2] Overall, the test taker answered questions fluently but with some occasional pauses, used a range of grammar tenses, and most words were pronounced accurately. [3] However, some room for improvement was noted, such as paraphrasing repeated words and improving sentence structure.
The document provides feedback on an English test response about the test taker's hometown. [1] The summary includes feedback on fluency, grammar, vocabulary, pronunciation, and accuracy. [2] Overall, the test taker answered questions fluently but with some occasional pauses, used a range of grammar tenses, and most words were pronounced accurately. [3] However, some room for improvement was noted, such as paraphrasing repeated words and improving sentence structure.
The document provides feedback on an English test response about the test taker's hometown. [1] The summary includes feedback on fluency, grammar, vocabulary, pronunciation, and accuracy. [2] Overall, the test taker answered questions fluently but with some occasional pauses, used a range of grammar tenses, and most words were pronounced accurately. [3] However, some room for improvement was noted, such as paraphrasing repeated words and improving sentence structure.
The document provides feedback on an English test response about the test taker's hometown. [1] The summary includes feedback on fluency, grammar, vocabulary, pronunciation, and accuracy. [2] Overall, the test taker answered questions fluently but with some occasional pauses, used a range of grammar tenses, and most words were pronounced accurately. [3] However, some room for improvement was noted, such as paraphrasing repeated words and improving sentence structure.
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Part 1: Hometown (Overall: 7)
1. Where is your hometown?
2. Do you like your hometown? 3. Are there any old buildings in your hometown? 4. Would you prefer to live somewhere else? Why?
FLUENCY 8 GRAMMAR RANGE 6 LEXICAL RESOURCES 7 PRONUNCIATION 7
1. Talking at length 1. Using a range of sentence 1. Using a range of words and 1. Able to be understood structures paraphrasing throughout the test You spend about 20 seconds for each Good: because, relative clause Some words need to be 0:19 – 0:21: has question. This is Suggestion/Correction: paraphrased to avoid repetition. many ??? suitable as you have Complex structure can be Suggestion: incomprehensible time to answer the used: My hometown is Ha My hometown is Ha Noi 1:10 – 1:14: question and expand in Noi. It is the capital city of Where I grew up is Ha Noi/ incomprehensible one or two sentences Vietnam. My hometown My homeland is Ha Noi
1 2. Talking with some is Ha Noi which is the Ha Noi has a number of 2. Able to use intonation pauses or hesitations capital city of Vietnam. old buildings Ha Noi You have used intonation You answer quite The connection between has a number of ancient suitably throughout every fluently but sometimes, phrases can be improved: constructions answer. The intonation is the pauses should be at it is the capital city of really natural and makes 2. Using collocation and less the right places. Vietnam, the politic and the answers more common vocabulary cultural center. …which interesting to listeners. 3. Talking with some is not only the capital city Good: self-correction of Vietnam but also the • Politic and cultural center 3. Accent does not affect You answer is well politic and cultural center. • Historical value understanding developed with Confusing use of relative • Challenge oneself Your accent is good. It accuracy, so self- clause: I was born and live • To be keen on does not interfere with correction is not for over 20 years where I Incorrect: the expression of ideas. frequent throughout the kept so much memories of Confusing word choice “likely = high chance of 4. Inaccurate word and answer. childhood I was born something”: I am also sound pronunciation and have been living for 4. Able to be likely to challenge myself over 20 years with a lot of Your pronunciation of understood in new environment I memories associated with most words is accurate. The answers are direct this place am also willing to In fact, some of them are to the point. challenge myself in new pronounced in a fairly 2. Using a range of grammar Specifically, you always environment native-like way. tenses answer the question the Suggestion (at least 5 good However, there are some first sentence and then Good: past tense, present tense, collocations/phrases): parts that are really you expand the present perfect tense be developed with difficult to hear as above. answers. This is good Suggestion: increasing number of Foreign as you can cover the You can emphasize the infrastructures and question but still give event that last until now establishments
2 more information. by using present perfect: I imposing local buildings: was born and lived for visually impressive 5. Using linking devices over 20 years I was buildings Good: to be honest, for born and have been living amenities: organizations, instance for over 20 years businesses, or buildings providing a service in a particular location vibrant: full of energy and enthusiasm local delicacy: something that is good to eat belonging or relating to a particular area or neighborhood
