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Paavo Kivikoski

4/9/19
Writing S02/Literature E01
Ms. Correa
Response To “The Story About the Destruction of Atlantis”

Myths are very interesting stories to read. It is exciting to see how natural mysteries are

explained with the starring of Gods, supernatural characters, and special places. In the myth I

chose, The Story About The Destruction of Atlantis, all of these characteristics are included.

This story also includes a great plot to all around make a great story. All of these things added

up, little by little, to make a fun and interesting myth for anyone to read.

Characters are important to all myths and stories. The main characters in this myth are

Atlas, Ymir, Väinämöinen, Ilmarinen, Louhi, and Louhi’s daughter. Atlas and Ymir are two

giants who rule Atlantis in the beginning. Väinämöinen is a manly demi-god who is in love with

Louhi. Ilmarinen is Väinämöinen’s brother. Louhi is a beautiful witch, who is also the daughter

of Atlas. Louhi’s daughter is a beautiful maid working in Atlantis. All of these character are very

important.

Firstly, setting. The setting of this myth is crucial. This story takes place in the Finnish

island of Kalevala and a foggy island in the middle of the sea, Atlantis. The story seems to take

place in about 300 to 400 BCE. The location of this story affects the plot because if Atlantis was

closer to Kalevala, Atlantis would have been targeted heavier and would have been easier to

destroy. The time of the myth is also essential because if this story took place in the 21st century,

then there would’ve been weapons other than just swords and fire, which would have also made

it easier to destroy Atlantis.

Furthermore, the story starts off in Atlantis, where Atlas and Ymir are ruling. After the

end of their reign, Atlas’ pretty daughter, who is also a witch, rules Atlantis. In fact she was so
pretty many visited her many times a day, including Väinämöinen. Väinämöinen fell in love with

her, and though she thought he was manly, she started to hate Väinämöinen for bothering her.

After Louhi got older, Väinämöinen started to fall in love with her daughter. One day when

Väinämöinen came to Atlantis, Louhi told him that if his brother, Ilmarinen, builds her a magic

machine that grinds salt, grain, and gold, Väinämöinen can marry her daughter. So Ilmarinen

built the machine and brought it to Atlantis. Instead of giving Väinämöinen her daughter, she

instead gave her to Ilmarinen which left Väinämöinen in anger. Ilmarinen became an engineer at

Atlantis, but soon after, he was forged out of the island and told to leave Louhi’s daughter.

Seeing how rich Atlantis had gotten from the magic machine, both brothers felt anger and

decided to attack Atlantis. The brothers sailed to Atlantis, got the machine and burned the entire

Atlantis down. As they were sailing back, Louhi returned as an eagle and attacked the brothers.

Väinämöinen and Louhi had a fight to the death and the machine sunk to the bottom of the sea.

Still to this day the machine grinds salt, which is why the seas are salty.

In addition, dialogue was important to this story, even though was only used twice in this

story. The dialogue that was most important was “You old buck, you can go there, to the shed

and beg for love from the maids.” This quote gave Louhi an evil personality. This quote also

explained that she had planned the whole thing planned out. This is how dialogue advanced the

plot.

Lastly, character development also took place in this myth. In the beginning Louhi

seemed like a lovely person, but as she got more annoyed she became very evil. Väinämöinen

also seemed like a perfect person in the beginning, but after he destroyed Atlantis, it seemed like

he wasn’t very kind. This is the character development in the story.


In conclusion this myth was a fantastic choice. I would recommend this book to anyone

my age because it uses great description. For someone not Finnish, the names and places could

be a little confusing, but other than that it was great. Not too long, not too short, and also has

pictures. These were some reasons on why I read this amazing myth.

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