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    This paper critiques a research journal article about the Jejemon language. The critique provides ratings and comments on the originality, literature review, results, and clarity of writing in the original article. It suggests that while the original article adequately explained the etymology and emergence of Jejemon, its scope was too broad and did not focus deeply on a single topic. The critique also notes some minor grammatical errors in the original paper and recommends improving use of grammar to more clearly convey its points. Overall, the critique found the original research provided a good overview of Jejemon but could be strengthened by narrowing its focus.

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    This paper critiques a research journal article about the Jejemon language. The critique provides ratings and comments on the originality, literature review, results, and clarity of writing in the original article. It suggests that while the original article adequately explained the etymology and emergence of Jejemon, its scope was too broad and did not focus deeply on a single topic. The critique also notes some minor grammatical errors in the original paper and recommends improving use of grammar to more clearly convey its points. Overall, the critique found the original research provided a good overview of Jejemon but could be strengthened by narrowing its focus.

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    This paper critiques a research journal article about the Jejemon language. The critique provides ratings and comments on the originality, literature review, results, and clarity of writing in the original article. It suggests that while the original article adequately explained the etymology and emergence of Jejemon, its scope was too broad and did not focus deeply on a single topic. The critique also notes some minor grammatical errors in the original paper and recommends improving use of grammar to more clearly convey its points. Overall, the critique found the original research provided a good overview of Jejemon but could be strengthened by narrowing its focus.

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    This paper critiques a research journal article about the Jejemon language. The critique provides ratings and comments on the originality, literature review, results, and clarity of writing in the original article. It suggests that while the original article adequately explained the etymology and emergence of Jejemon, its scope was too broad and did not focus deeply on a single topic. The critique also notes some minor grammatical errors in the original paper and recommends improving use of grammar to more clearly convey its points. Overall, the critique found the original research provided a good overview of Jejemon but could be strengthened by narrowing its focus.

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    MINDORO STATE COLLEGE OF AGRICULTURE AND TECHNOLOGY

    Main Campus

    Alcate, Victoria, Oriental Mindoro

    GRADUATE SCHOOL

    RESEARCH JOURNAL PAPER CRITIQUE

    In Partial Fulfillment of the Requirements in FIL.210- Desktop Pablising, Iskript at Online


    na Pagsulat

    Prepared by:

    MIKAELA A. PASTOR

    MAEd- Pagtuturo ng Wika

    Submitted to:

    JOHN EDGAR S. ANTHONY

    Professor

    MAY 2019
    Paper Title: ISANG PANANALIKSI: PAG-AARAL NG WIKANG JEJEMON

    Author/s: MARLON F. BUTAC JR.

    Name of Journal: KATIPUNAN: Journal ng mga Pag-aaral sa Wika, Panitikan,


    Sining at Kulturang Filipino

    Country/ Year of Publication: Philippines/ 2017

    Indexed by: ___________________

    REVIEW FORM

    CRITERIA 1 2 3 4 5

    Originality

     Does the paper /


    present the novel or
    original concepts? /
     Does the Paper
    present innovative
    ideas?
     Does the paper
    contribute in advancing
    /
    our understanding of
    the area being
    discussed?
     Does the paper /
    present practical used
    of technology?

    Comments and Suggestion

    Maganda ang pananaliksik na isinagawa masyado lang


    malawak at hindi napagtuunang pansin ang isang paksa.
    CRITERIA 1 2 3 4 5

    Literature Review
     Does the paper
    include relevant /
    and important
    studies?
     Doess the paper
    critically
    discusses the /
    studies and not
    just merely
    describing
    them? /
     Are the sources
    Credible?

    Comments and Suggestion

    Maganda ang pagkakasunod-sunod ng mga literaturang


    nakalap ng mga mananaliksik naging daan ito upang mas
    lalong maunawaan ang kanilang nais ipunto.
    CRITERIA 1 2 3 4 5

    Results
     Are the results
    clearly presented /
    and discussed?
     Are the results /
    analyzed
    appropriately?
     Do the results tie
    up with the
    research /
    questions,
    conclusions,
    recommendation
    and implications?

    Comments and Suggestion

    Hindi naging malinaw ang nais iparating ng mananaliksik sa


    kayang pag-aaral. Masyadong malawak ito dapat nagpokus
    lamang siya sa iisang paksa.
    CRITERIA 1 2 3 4 5

    Clarity of Writing

     Does the paper


    contain syntax,
    typos or spelling /
    grammatical
    errors?
     Does the paper
    convey clearly /
    its argument to
    the readers?

    Comments and Suggestion

    May mangilan-ngilan na mali ang pagkakatipika. Ayusin ang


    paggamit ng ibang bantas mas kakatulong ito upang mapadali
    ang nais iparating ng mananaliksik.

    OVER-ALL COMMENTS and SUGGESTION

    Ang research journal ay tumatalakay sa wikang jejemon


    naipaliwanag ng maayos ang etimolohiya ng wikang ito at
    kung bakit ito nabuo. Ngunit ang wikang jejemon ay unti-unti
    na ring nawawala kaalinsabay ng pag-unlad ng mga
    teknolohiya.

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